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A watery adventure worth risking the depths for. Gave me definite water world vibes!

She sought refuge on an ocean-covered planet. She didn’t learn its codes until too late. Now she must leave to survive. Theo’s dreams of exploring distant lands are cut short when her father betrays her. On the run, she flees to Eridan, where Washone, the spiritual leader, is expecting her. As she is about to reach this ocean-covered planet inhabited by telepaths, she is kidnapped by a bounty-hunter. Ashta, an Eridani Savalwoman, befriends Theo, rescues her, and they land together on Eridan. While Theo trains to become a Savalwoman – a warrior – bleak memories of past hurts disrupt her attempts to trust herself and others. She is unaware of her own mental powers, so when she believes that she has been betrayed by Ashta, she nearly destroys her friend’s mind in a fit of wounded rage that blazes across the planet. To protect Theo from those who, like ambitious Keith of Rain Forest, would like to use her powerful mind for their benefit, Washone decides that she must leave Eridan. Can Theo convince Washone to let her stay? Or will she have to leave her new friends and go on the run again, with no place to go?


This book gave me definite water-world feels! I loved the story and plot, I loved the writing and I felt like the author has a real talent for this! The characters were also very well developed.


However, I did have some thing I didn’t like about the book. I felt like the banter between the characters were a bit dry and could have been better. I felt like the world building could have been better as well. The action scenes were a bit chaotic and hard to follow as well. Also, at certain times, the pacing really slows down and it really drags the novel along.


Overall, I really liked this book! Definitely one worth reading!


Disclaimer: I received this book from Reedsy Discovery! Thanks! All opinions are my own.

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About the author

Franco-American Jennie Dorny is the author of three books published in French: "Gambling Nova" (1999), "Eridan" (2002) and "Les Cupidons sont tombés sur la tête". "Hybrids" – published in four volumes (2019–2021) – is her first novel published in English. She lives and works in Paris, France. view profile

Published on December 07, 2019

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110000 words

Genre: Fantasy

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