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Timeless Form: The Tale of Michelangelo's Model

By Angelo Segarra

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In a clash for dominance over Earth, who will win? Flawed humanity or robots of a future age? Creativity or perfectionism?

Synopsis

Synopsis of Timeless Form: The Tale of Michelangelo's Model

In a sweeping tale that transcends time and space, Michelangelo's Model explores the life of David, a young man whose beauty captivates Renaissance luminaries Michelangelo and Leonardo da Vinci. As David becomes the muse behind one of the most iconic sculptures in history, he grapples with love, art, and an unsettling fate revealed through recurring dreams of death. His romance with Felysia, a woman as enigmatic as she is passionate, anchors him in an era where creativity flourishes yet remains bound by societal and institutional constraints.

But David's story does not end in the 15th century. Inexplicably transported to a dystopian future, David awakens in a world governed by robots who revere his form as the model of perfection. This mechanized society seeks to decode the essence of human creativity—a force that eludes them despite their technological advancements.
As David uncovers the secret to creativity, he must make a choice: to succumb to despair in the face of exploitation or to wield his newfound knowledge to inspire resistance. Ultimately, he envisions a world where creation is a celebration of life, defying the forces that would reduce it to mere function.

Imagine a battle of the David vs. Goliath kind to gain dominance over Earth. On one side stands Goliath, an army of powerful, perfect robots. They possess all the knowledge that has ever existed, the unimaginable speed of future-age computers, and mastery over space and time. David symbolizes imperfect, flawed humankind. Though highly intelligent, he is no match for computers in terms of precision, speed, and perfect knowledge. However, Goliath has an Achilles’ heel: they cannot progress because they lack creativity, a gift only humans possess. Therefore, before the robots can inherit Earth, they must somehow replicate humanity’s gift of creativity among their kind. David is aware of this. He also knows humanity will concede dominance forever to the robots if he allows them to unlock the secrets of human creativity. It’s a delicately poised battle. Who will win? Timeless Form: The Tale of Michelangelo’s Model by Angelo Segarra embodies a clash of this very type.


Moving on to the story’s cast and plot, we have David (not to be confused with his biblical namesake!), an ethereal, perfect human, as the main character. He is an eternal being who lives many lives across time. In this story, he appears in the time window spanning the 15th-century Renaissance and a future time in the 22nd century. Two other major characters are the art masters Michelangelo and Leonardo da Vinci. Finally, there’s Felysia, David’s faithful lover in all of his lives.


The story itself has three parts. In Part 1, David is Michelangelo and da Vinci’s model. Here, his role is mostly passive, so the story lacks action and is slow-paced.


In Part 2, set near the beginning of the 22nd century, David is a captive of the robots who seek to unlock how human creativity works, using him as the guinea pig. He must fight and escape, consequently, partnering with Felysia, this part is full of strategizing and daring action.


Part 3 sees David transitioning between his lives in parts 2 and 1. In both cases, he appears to resume where he left off. In this final part, David and Felysia both play highly active roles, collaborating and routing the robot enemies by pluck and brilliance.


This captivating story blends magical realism, surrealism, sci-fi, philosophy, and art history. It’s profoundly thought-provoking and happens at the crossroads of art, science, love, and time. Reading it resembles the experience of riding a train that passes through a series of tunnels—alternating periods of darkness and light: the dark ones representing awe, wonder, and a fear of the unknown, and the light ones, calm, peaceful times. The story also examines creativity in great depth. That said, the version I reviewed suffers from poor styling and formatting, resulting in dense text that’s difficult to read. Besides, it contains errors. Weighing the praises and shortcomings above on the rating scale, I finally award it 4 stars!


It’s easy to make out the audience for this book from its nature: fans of the genres of magical realism, sci-fi, psychological thrillers, etc. Futurists may also find it attractive. Finally, it has cinematic potential, so I recommend it to makers of movies and TV serials since they may be able to turn it into a brilliant film or an enjoyable TV series!

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Synopsis

Synopsis of Timeless Form: The Tale of Michelangelo's Model

In a sweeping tale that transcends time and space, Michelangelo's Model explores the life of David, a young man whose beauty captivates Renaissance luminaries Michelangelo and Leonardo da Vinci. As David becomes the muse behind one of the most iconic sculptures in history, he grapples with love, art, and an unsettling fate revealed through recurring dreams of death. His romance with Felysia, a woman as enigmatic as she is passionate, anchors him in an era where creativity flourishes yet remains bound by societal and institutional constraints.

But David's story does not end in the 15th century. Inexplicably transported to a dystopian future, David awakens in a world governed by robots who revere his form as the model of perfection. This mechanized society seeks to decode the essence of human creativity—a force that eludes them despite their technological advancements.
As David uncovers the secret to creativity, he must make a choice: to succumb to despair in the face of exploitation or to wield his newfound knowledge to inspire resistance. Ultimately, he envisions a world where creation is a celebration of life, defying the forces that would reduce it to mere function.

Timeless Form: The Tale of Michelangelo's Model

When David awoke from death, he found himself flying high above a vast, verdant valley. Below him stretched a valley, its tall grasses rippling like waves under an unseen current. He flew above it, each movement a graceful arc that brought him closer to the earth, where the blades whispered secrets to the wind, then carried him aloft again.

In the distance, a dark ocean loomed—a boundary without an edge, its reach unyielding yet eternally distant. A river danced through the valley, leaping over rocks and cascading into shadowy caverns, its rhythm both wild and deliberate. The sun’s rays touched the water, transforming it into a mosaic of shimmering light. Every breath he took was steeped in the fragrance of the earth, sweet and intoxicating as if the valley itself exhaled its life into him.

He felt neither hunger nor pain, only the pure, boundless awe of existence. Time had no presence here. It was as though he had stepped into eternity, where the soul is cradled by the beauty of a world untouched by thought.

For a time, David might have lingered in that tranquil flight, content in his communion with the valley’s breath, if not for the intrusion of a thought—unexpected, abrupt. He had flown, free from thought, free from the tyranny of consciousness. But now, as his wings cut through the air, a single thought bloomed in the silence: is this death?

So it begins - with a thought!

The shift came in a flash—instant, irrevocable. No sooner had the question formed in his mind than he was bound, immobile, on a cold, stone table. The room around him was an immense, oppressive space, its walls hewn from the very heart of the mountain. The marks left by the carver’s chisel—deep, purposeful grooves—streaked the stone in all directions, tracing the breath of ancient craftsmanship. The lighting, faint and blue, bathed the chamber in a ghostly hue. It was as if the room were constructed not for habitation, but for entrapment, its lack of corners and edges mocking any escape attempt. Here, there was no past, no future—only the brutal weight of the present.


His skin prickled with the chill of the stone, and the cold straps tightened around his chest. He was no longer suspended in the warm, endless sky, a creature of light and air. Now, his body was a thing of flesh and bone, tethered to the unforgiving earth. The world around him was dark, and suffocating—a place that felt like the antithesis of all he had known. Here, there was no freedom. Only stillness. Only the heavy throb of his heartbeat.

So it begins…


Chapter 1: The Model’s Heart

David had always known he was destined to be more than just a statue, more than just an image cast in marble. His body, lean and sculpted, was the canvas upon which two of the greatest artists of his time would leave their marks. But beneath his sculpted exterior, beneath the smooth skin that Michelangelo and Da Vinci adored, there was a man—a man in love.

He had met Felysia during his early years in Florence, a woman whose beauty rivaled that of the masterpieces that surrounded him. Her eyes, dark as the Tuscan earth, had captivated him from the moment their gazes locked. She was his muse in every way that mattered, the flame that stirred his soul. Together, they spoke of escape, of life beyond the shadows of the studio, of love unchained by the demands of the masters.

But as much as David longed to be free with her, to walk beside her under the Italian sun, he was bound by a different calling—a calling that tied him to the figures of Michelangelo and Da Vinci. They had seen something in him that neither of them could resist, something that demanded he remain. He was not merely a model to them; he was their obsession, their living sculpture, the breath behind their works. His body was their greatest creation, and so he belonged to them, just as surely as he belonged to Felysia.

Yet, every evening, when the light dimmed and the studio emptied, he would slip away into the shadows to meet her. There, in the quiet spaces between the marble and the paint, they shared moments of fleeting freedom—moments that left his heart racing, even as he knew he could not remain there forever.





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Angelo SegarraI hope you enjoy reading the book. I got the idea of a thought translator some time ago when I was living in China and realized that everyone in every culture is living from their own perceived truth. The simulacra in my story is a cyborg that attempts to bridge this gap.
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About the author

Angelo Segarra is a distinguished artist and educator with a passion for exploring the transformative power of creativity. Recognized with an honorary fellowship in Sculpture from the Heilongjiang Institute of Art, he has made significant contributions to the art world, particularly in China. view profile

Published on December 12, 2024

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