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In a dystopian world where conformity is subtly enforced will Haven find out how dangerous her pack leader is and escape The Community.

Synopsis

Twenty years after the American collapse, a new government offers safety in return for
compliance. Taken from the outskirts as a youth, Haven will risk everything to save
those closest to her from an elite leadership intent on their destruction. Her pack leader,
Adrien, hides a dark intellect behind a mask of conformity, manipulating people and
circumstances towards his own subversive ends. Drawn from today's most contentious
social and political conflicts, this modern dystopian thriller plays American ideology
against its greatest adversaries in a terrifying vision of a future we may be unable to avoid.

A dystopian novel featuring an America which has fragmented into two major blocs amongst others - the New Republic east of the Mississippi and The Republican States of America to the south.


In Virginia Haven’s family, who had prepared for the inevitable breakdown of society, resist the call to join the New Republic’s Community, densely populated walled cities where people can not only be safe  but can also be more easily controlled. They  are convinced to allow Haven to join, however, by Adrien, a handsome and charismatic leader of a pack (a group of talented young people designed to be future leaders) who has spotted her intelligence and potential. Most people are compelled to join the Community  under the guise of disaster recovery, as the world outside is hazardous, with a major epidemic of a rabies-like infection still raging, and outlaws and villains prowling a land which has been allowed to revert to nature. Under Adrien’s tutelage Haven becomes an administrator but Adrien has a sadistic streak.

 

Interwoven with Haven’s story is that of Nathan who has been in a coma for twenty years and awakens in a Texas hospital to discover that he has a son, born after his accident,  who may possibly be in the New Republic and that Haven’s parents might know where, so he prepares to cross the border illegally.


The world-building of this new order, while not particularly original (I was reminded of Huxley’s Brave New World) is cleverly done, with explanations of how the system works shown by its effects on the various characters, not least Haven and her friends.  Each individual is clearly drawn, occasionally with vividly telling touches. Adrian, for example, is ‘young for a leader of a pack but confident, and what he lacked in age he made up in confidence and a delicate touch of sadism.’ Describing the sudden and devastating end of the old order it says that it ‘all came down in a thunderous cacophony of destruction.’


In a rather overlong preface I occasionally felt that too much time was spent on present mistakes and errors of governance but once it got going the story was gripping. with the reader not knowing which direction the tale would take and being kept in constant fear for Haven. In all an excellent read,

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Jenny Hill (Jaye Sarasin) Took early retirement from teaching to write YA (The Green Enclave, 2023, Keepers of the Sun, Parfoys Press 2024 Published Using Literature in Language Teaching (Macmillan 1986) as Jennifer Hill Passionate reader, gardener, traveller

Synopsis

Twenty years after the American collapse, a new government offers safety in return for
compliance. Taken from the outskirts as a youth, Haven will risk everything to save
those closest to her from an elite leadership intent on their destruction. Her pack leader,
Adrien, hides a dark intellect behind a mask of conformity, manipulating people and
circumstances towards his own subversive ends. Drawn from today's most contentious
social and political conflicts, this modern dystopian thriller plays American ideology
against its greatest adversaries in a terrifying vision of a future we may be unable to avoid.

Chapter 1

The spring air cooled as the afternoon sun ducked behind a patchwork of clouds in a desolate countryside, marked by wildly overgrown scrub brush, small twisted trees and weeds springing determinedly though the cracking pavement that once carried travelers to destinations along the eastern coast. A cluster of workers, garbed smartly in khaki uniforms bearing black and fluorescent green markings and dark glasses that obscured their tense, young faces, cautiously eyed a line of wretched human beings as they approached the entrance to the weathered remains of what had once been a fire station.  

After a close examination and with gloved hands gripping ugly, black rifles, they motioned each person forward. A dog’s howl in the distance only heightened the young workers’ vigilance as they prodded people forward with their weapons, maintaining a menacing presence despite their true fear of these people, fear of their potential for disease, the filthy attire and almost feral disposition that seemed so foreign to them.  

One by one the tattered dregs of this untamed landscape approached and were allowed to enter the door. Among those in line was a somewhat bewildered young girl of ten, undersized for her age due to malnutrition, with brown hair tied into a pony tail and clothes that had been sewed together by hand from various scraps and rags. On her face a poorly healed scar stretched from eyebrow to ear, drawing closer scrutiny of the guards. Walking behind her was a middle-aged man sporting an extra layer of dirt invading every crack in his callused hands, with roughly cut hair and beard and coarse, sun-browned skin. Only a few yellowed teeth showed as he said something to the girl, her tiny hand wrapped around the fingers of his. A piece of pink cloth trailed from the grip of her other hand, some sort of talisman in a time when toys were few. 

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About the author

Julie A. Fragoules spent two decades working in Hazard Mitigation for the Federal Emergency Management Agency, rising to the position of CEO Task Force Leader. Prior to this, she was an award winning radio reporter . Julie holds a B.A. in Political Science from the University of Central Arkansas. view profile

Published on April 04, 2023

90000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Dystopian

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