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The Owl Apprentice and the Trees of Myth and Magic

By Erik DeLeo

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The magic-filled world of such creatures teases readers to recall when they saw as animals as no different than themselves.

Synopsis

A young apprentice. A magical grove. And an ancient spell that threatens it all.

More than anything in the world, Screech wants to become a wizard. But his dreams of wielding magic are shattered when he’s stripped of his scrolls, wand and robe. With his future uncertain, Screech discovers a hidden and dormant power. Can he learn to control it? Will his new found talent be able to help the sequoias before it's too late? Or will dark forces triumph and overrun the grove?

If you like talking animals, enchanted forests, and unbound magic, then you’ll love The Owl Apprentice.

Full disclosure - Erik DeLeo was born in Rochester, New York, where I enjoyed nearly 20 years. I no longer live there. Neither does the now Santa Monica, California author. Also we share a fascination with owls. That said, those facts had nothing to do with what drew me to finish, The Owl Apprentice and the Trees of Myth and Magic. The tightly plotted, highly descriptive, coming-of-age novel is reminiscent of Orson Scott Card’s Seventh Son, where a naive boy is drafted to service as a witch hunter.


As Card’s main character DeLeo’s young owl, Screech, starts as an insecure bungler with wit and a big heart. That is where the comparison ends. DeLeo creates a magical owl world in a tense power struggle, and his “hero” wants only to join the ancient parliament of wizard owls that protect the giant sequoias. The whole saga seems boringly similar and familiar until Chapter 4. The apprentice is booted out.


Screech decided to fly towards the one thing that always gave him solace - the sequoia grove...They were majestic and ancient. He felt comfortable around the old trees and wanted to be there, especially now.

 

At that point, what once seemed an almost too familiar tale bursts into an unpredictable discovery quest that grabs the reader’s imagination. The plot goes from an assurance the little owl’s dream will never happen to an epilogue that even surprises Screech.


The characters, settings and well-paced dialog could have worked with humans. I wondered about why the author insisted on use of the usually solitary and nocturnal birds. I realized that if the characters were people a part of what happens in readers' minds might not occur. The magic-filled world of such creatures teases readers to recall when they saw as animals as no different than themselves.


The novel pulls readers through seemingly insurmountable obstacles that lead to a discovery about Screech’s nature and the forest’s deeper realities. Most middle school readers will not be able to put the novel down. Audubon members and adventure fans will also be drawn into this welcome break from the real world’s cynicism.

 

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Synopsis

A young apprentice. A magical grove. And an ancient spell that threatens it all.

More than anything in the world, Screech wants to become a wizard. But his dreams of wielding magic are shattered when he’s stripped of his scrolls, wand and robe. With his future uncertain, Screech discovers a hidden and dormant power. Can he learn to control it? Will his new found talent be able to help the sequoias before it's too late? Or will dark forces triumph and overrun the grove?

If you like talking animals, enchanted forests, and unbound magic, then you’ll love The Owl Apprentice.

Magic

Releasing dangerous magic into the world began innocently enough. 

Screech, eager to try his wing at things, wanted to show his master Lilith he could cast spells. And, in doing so, was about to try something no apprentice should ever attempt. You could argue he was too eager, stealing away a book from Lilith’s collection he wasn’t supposed to have. A book with no apparent title, but that seemed to call out to him. Temptation overcame Screech, and once opened, the words inside came to life.

It was on this particular and fateful night that he finally summoned the courage to cast a spell, one that had beckoned him since he had first spied it inside the nameless book. Screech squatted there in Lilith’s small library, hunched over the pages of the black tome, moonlight streaming through a small window, and illuminating words he didn’t know were forbidden to any save for the most adept wizard. 

The script danced on the leathery parchment like liquid, drawing him in. Screech held his breath for a moment, the letters casting their own spell on the young owl. He was drowning in their enchantment. They beckoned, and he was powerless to resist.

The air hung still. He opened his beak and spoke. Screech didn’t understand what he read, but the words came anyway. His chanting started low, rising louder and louder with each line. Lilith wasn’t here tonight — he didn’t need to worry about waking her.

He could feel the magic building, slowly at first, but the energy quickly began to fill the room. It prickled his feathers and he felt it on his skin. Without knowing why, Screech lifted his wings to the sky and danced. His legs weren’t his own. They carried him this way and that, circling the book, spinning him around. His throat ached, raw from the power of the words. And then a sliver of worry crept into his mind. Screech didn’t have the power to stop.

Suddenly, it was over. The last word passed from Screech’s mouth, and the force that had taken over his legs left his body, leaving him panting and heaving and empty. He collapsed on the floor, the pages of the book once again still. No words moved. No magic stirred. 

Screech lay there for a moment, dazed and alone. He knew he needed to put the book back. Screech was already on thin ice. Many in the Order of Owls didn’t want him to be an apprentice anymore. 

He summoned the strength to get up. Screech rose to his feet and grabbed the book, holding it close to his chest to keep his balance. It was heavy, so he took slow, halting steps towards Lilith’s bookcase and placed it carefully back on the shelf. Right as he did so, Screech thought he heard something behind him. Almost like a whisper.

He turned, but no one was there. Just his imagination. That’s what Screech told himself, anyway. He took a moment to adjust his cloak and gather his wits, then made his way to the entrance, slipped out of the library, and shut the door behind him. What Screech didn’t know, and wouldn’t until much later, was that the spell he cast wasn’t simple magic. And without a necessary second spell, a portal had been left open to something very, very evil.

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shakil AhmedIts fentaatic story
almost 4 years ago
Dhanesh KumarThis book is intended for little youngsters to peruse resoundingly and a few names are being articulated in it which might be a bit abnormal for the audience members. This article is from whatever piece of the book is found here. I'm ready to uncover just this, the remainder of the syntax is basic and clear for accuracy and elocution.
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About the author

Erik DeLeo was born in Rochester, NY. He grew up reading fantasy and science fiction and avoiding the sun. He now lives in Santa Monica, California with his cats Barnabas, and Caia. He doesn't charge them rent even though they eat a lot. view profile

Published on February 15, 2021

30000 words

Genre:Middle Grade

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