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The Miracle Prince: The Raven's Veil

By Bill Edmonds

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Michael Feng

Reviewed on Sep 11, 2021

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This is an imaginative, well-constructed second book in the Miracle Prince series!

Synopsis

Alaric Swift has been hearing strange voices all summer. But this is just the start.

As Alaric starts his second year at Oakwood School for Nephilim, tensions rise on Harramore, and a mysterious sickness spreads around campus. Gnomes, cyclops, students—no one is safe. Then, delving deeper, Alaric and his friends discover this may not be a disease at all, but something far more dangerous.
Now, Alaric must again embark on a perilous adventure to save Harramore from the clutches of evil. And as dark secrets are revealed about the island, he and his friends will need their powers more than ever. Because should they fail, they may just lose themselves.

Fantastic and well-constructed sequel!


This is an imaginative, well-constructed second book in the Miracle Prince series. It continues the story of Alaric Swift, who returns to Harramore after summer. However, strange events began to occur around the campus, including a mysterious disease that is infecting different magical species. Will he be able to get to the bottom of it all before it is too late?


This is a very well-written fantasy story with a perfect blend of action, mystery, and imagination. I found the concept of a mysterious disease to be very intriguing. This interesting premise kept me flipping pages and wanting to find out more. Apart from that, the book also continued introducing creative new ideas similar to the first book and expanded upon the worldbuilding of Harramore. The story was delicately constructed and dealt with suspense and foreshadowing very well. Finally, the plot was paced excellently so that it was neither too fast nor too slow. It took several twists and turns that genuinely surprised me.


I found this book to be a very enjoyable and thrilling ride. I would definitely recommend it to all fans of Harry Potter and Percy Jackson, and I look forward to future installments in the series!

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Michael Feng

Michael Feng is a fourteen-year-old writer. Inspired by his father’s made-up stories, he began to develop his own at the age of six. He suffered from an autoimmune disease and started to be a homeschooler when he was seven. His passion for writing blossomed greatly. Here comes his debut novel.

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