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A well-written epic quest for immortality and purpose, mixing familiar and unique elements to thrill, move, and inspire.

Synopsis

Tarlos, the telekinetic prince and heir to the throne of Kesh, wants nothing more than to live an easy life of luxury. But after his twin brother is killed by the same monster that took their mother, Tarlos discovers a dark secret about his family and a murder plot rooted in jealousy and fear.
Provoked by a discarded god, Tarlos journeys across the desert in search of a fabled entrance to the dead country. He discovers the afterlife is home to people from worlds other than his own, and the universe he has known is far more complicated than he had imagined.
After coming face to face with an ancient power beyond his own comprehension, Tarlos must choose immortality and become a discarded god himself, or else settle for a life well lived that will only end in death.

The Lone and Level Sands is an intriguing take on the pitfalls and blinkers of power, drawing heavily from Percy Shelley’s Ozymandias poem.


The story follows Tarlos, the prince of Kesh, as he seeks immortality after his younger brother, Krastos, dies and a ground-breaking secret unravels about their family. The spiteful god, Ablis, takes advantage of Tarlos’s dismay to sow fear in him, which sends the prince onto a wild goose chase through the land of the dead and mind-bending realms beyond.


First off, I loved the opening line, “At the peak of a lone mountain lives a song,” which leads into a wonderfully written intro. The whole narrative is thought out and composed with care and grace. Even though it feels a bit allegorical and rushed at times, the plot is still suspenseful and emotional. Foreshadowing is also used to great effect throughout.


The characters make the book that much more immersive. Tarlos is a compelling anti-hero torn between duty, love, and fear of being forgotten. His relationship with Krastos is especially moving, not to mention the difficult situations they find themselves in. Various secondary characters – and creatures! – add their unique charm to Tarlos’s journey.


Another interesting feature of The Lone and Level Sands is how it plays with existential, cultural, mythological, and otherworldly concepts. It merges everything in a way that takes the “man seeks power” trope to the next level, giving it fun and clever depths. In other words, there’s wisdom to be found in these pages as much as high-quality fantasy.


All-in-all, this is a very good book. Imaginative, exciting, and tender. Certain aspects could have been developed further, but the story more than delivers its poignant messages. While pondering the mystery of Kesh’s culture – Egypt, Greece, Mesopotamia, Scandinavia, or a mixture of all? – you’ll be swept away on an epic quest laced with heart and character.

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Synopsis

Tarlos, the telekinetic prince and heir to the throne of Kesh, wants nothing more than to live an easy life of luxury. But after his twin brother is killed by the same monster that took their mother, Tarlos discovers a dark secret about his family and a murder plot rooted in jealousy and fear.
Provoked by a discarded god, Tarlos journeys across the desert in search of a fabled entrance to the dead country. He discovers the afterlife is home to people from worlds other than his own, and the universe he has known is far more complicated than he had imagined.
After coming face to face with an ancient power beyond his own comprehension, Tarlos must choose immortality and become a discarded god himself, or else settle for a life well lived that will only end in death.

Prelude

At the peak of a lone mountain lives a song. No one knows how it came to be there, or how long ago it was written. No one has heard it in its entirety. It is difficult to find, and were you to find it you would be lucky to hear a single verse.

Those who have heard it say it is as subtle and soft as thoughtful humming, accompanied by the soft ringing of small bells. There are movements to the song, and the melody ranges from slow and meandering to a thundering staccato. Some hear the strings of a lyre being plucked while others hear the whimpers of a wounded bull. You may even hear lyrics, though few have.

The song itself is a mystery. Those who hear only the music cannot agree on which instruments are being played, and those who hear its lyrics cannot understand what is being sung. No one knows why the song is there, what purpose it serves, or whether one should hear it at all.

But the song is there. You can find it yourself if you listen for it.

Often it can be found at night, when the moon is cloaked and the stars are bright.

From atop a mountain, miles from the nearest city and surrounded by a vast desert, you may hear the call of an eagle searching for its mate, or watch as it brings meat back to its nest.

Then, al azif. This is what the people who live near the mountain call the chirring of insects. If the night is warm, which is often the case near the mountain, al azif will be steady. When you have listened to al azif long enough that you lose focus on all that surrounds you, then the song will begin. Or rather, you will hear it then—the song has no beginning.

The melody will rise and encircle you. Perhaps you will hear brass horns and the crash of cymbals, or the long sigh of a violin like wind through dried reeds. Or perhaps you will feel the thumping bass of drums, of giant footsteps running toward you from within a shadowed cave. And yes, you may even hear lyrics. Don’t worry if you don’t. Those who do are often disappointed when they realize they cannot understand the words.

Regardless, you will feel love—love for your children begotten in sacrifice, and the lengths to which you would go to protect them.

Shame, too, of disappointing your father, although you have the strength of a god.

Pain from losing your brother to an ancient evil, forever wondering if it could have been helped. If you could have done more.

Strain of guiding a boat over poisonous rapids rushing over grey pebbles covered in algae.

The color orange.

The smell of burnt almonds.

You will forget what brought you there, the choices that shaped and formed your sorrows and joys, that determine where you will journey next. And later, you will forget the music. You will forget the lyrics, if they did in fact come to you. The experience will fall through your memories like sand through a sieve. You will only remember that the song exists, and that you were lucky to have heard a single measure.

I am not lucky.

I have heard the entire song.

This is a small piece. 

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Published on May 26, 2021

60000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Fantasy

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