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The Exile's Daughter, a Tale of Anglesey and the Great War

By John Wheatley

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A haunting tale of love and war

When Lauren Bucievski and her father take flight from Poland during the 1905 revolution, the ten year old girl has little understanding of who her father`s enemies are. Their exile takes them to Church Bay, on the remote west coast of Anglesey. Seven years later, when she befriends the happy-go-lucky Jimmy Jilkes, and when the charismatic Stefan turns up from Poland, her life is thrown into conflict, vulnerable as she is, in her isolation, to her own dawning sexuality. The outbreak of war in 1914 becomes the defining factor in how each of their destinies will turn out.

In The Exile's Daughter - a Tale of Anglesey and the Great War, John Wheatley takes us back to Anglesey, an island just off the coast of Wales that also served as the setting for four of his earlier novels. He has set his more recent works elsewhere, but we have good reason to be glad that Mr. Wheatley decided to visit Anglesey at least one more time.


The Exile's Daughter takes place during the first few decades of the twentieth century and introduces us to our dual protagonists, Lauren Bucievski and Jimmy Jilkes. Lauren and her father have fled Poland following the siege of Warsaw and settled in Church Bay. There, Lauren comes of age as her father lives in hiding from his political enemies, constantly fearing they'll track him down. Jimmy, a young man who ran away from home as a child and joined the circus, now ekes out a living as a pedlar who sells household goods from door to door and dreams of saving enough money to buy his own motorbike. His sales route regularly takes him through Church Bay, Anglesey, where he and Lauren meet and develop a genuine, untainted fondness for each other.


The story follows a nonlinear timeline in its early chapters, jumping between several points in time from 1906 to 1914. This casts the relationship between Jimmy and Lauren in the light of the broader progression of events occuring around them. There is a rival for Lauren's attention -- Stefan Kowalski -- and as we know from history, a "war to end all wars" looms in the immediate future and casts a shadow of great uncertainty over everything.


The author has an impressive talent for what I like to call "world rebuilding". He portrays the early twentieth century of The Exile's Daughter with great accuracy and no apparent anachronism. He also fits his words in such a way that he puts the reader right into the heads and hearts of his characters. You feel like you're barely removed from what they're experiencing.


That the story contains no traditional heroes or villains further strengthens its sense of realism. Things happen and people respond. Some people are fortunate and others are not. This is particularly true in the chapters depicting the war on the Western Front in France, where Jimmy has become a British soldier after concluding that circumstances will not allow him and Lauren to have a future together. Lauren is largely a passive agent in the story, which may not seem unusual for a woman during this time period. Jimmy may be more able to pursue what he desires, but even he is largely at the mercy of forces well beyond his control. When he and his buddy in the army, Henry Wilson (who seems a lot like a stand-in for the author), contemplate their fates, they're not so much different from Lauren and the others back in Church Bay, who contemplate the realities of modern warfare and see their fair share of broken bodies returning from the front.


When I first reviewed this book, it contained a few too many errors in spelling and punctuation and was in need of a bit more proofreading. The book's artistry, on the other hand, is magnificent, and I recommend it enthusiastically. You'll find yourself dying to see how The Exile's Daughter ends, and then feeling a bit sad that the story is over.



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Synopsis

A haunting tale of love and war

When Lauren Bucievski and her father take flight from Poland during the 1905 revolution, the ten year old girl has little understanding of who her father`s enemies are. Their exile takes them to Church Bay, on the remote west coast of Anglesey. Seven years later, when she befriends the happy-go-lucky Jimmy Jilkes, and when the charismatic Stefan turns up from Poland, her life is thrown into conflict, vulnerable as she is, in her isolation, to her own dawning sexuality. The outbreak of war in 1914 becomes the defining factor in how each of their destinies will turn out.

1914 - Olsztyn, Poland  

                                  


There was a flash of hot light; simultaneously, the windows shattered, and a shock wave of air buffeted through the house, blowing the upper windows outwards. The soldier sitting closest to the explosion was dead immediately, thrown across the room, one side of his head blown away. The young woman standing by the inner door, caught in the blast, was thrown with such force against the wall behind that she was dead from her injuries within the hour. Within seconds, the clattering of boots was heard down the bare staircase, and the two remaining soldiers, who had been taking their turn to rest, were making their way through the smoke and dust, to burst out of the rear door.

There was a volley of shouts and orders, in both German and Polish voices: Halt! Stop! But the two soldiers ran on, weaving and dodging as bullets pinged against the brickwork on each side of the winding alley. One was shot in the back of the leg. He cursed, limped on, still running and hopping, for six yards, and then kneeled down, in agony. His comrade stopped beside him for a moment, tried to lift him, and then ran on alone. The wounded soldier, finding the strength to stand, dragged himself along a further twenty paces and then slipped through the broken palings of a woodyard.

It was six hours later that the German patrol found him, huddled in long grass behind a stack of sawn timber, unconscious. They dragged him to the local tannery, which had been requisitioned by the troops. An army doctor cleaned up his leg, and then they threw him in a compound with thirty others.


"Russian?" asked the officer who questioned him, a week later. "Lithuanian?"

"Polish."

"Citizen of the Vistula," the officer joked. "How is your leg?"

"Better."

"Does it give you pain?"

"A little. Not much."

"Would you like to sit?"

"Thank you."

He sat in the chair which the orderly pushed forward, placing his crutch by the side.

"You were wearing a Russian uniform."

"Poles have little choice for whom they fight."

"That is very true. In Silesia your General Pilsudski and his Polish Legions are fighting valiantly alongside our Austrian allies to ensure the defeat of the Russian army."

The young man shrugged. "This is not our war. If Poles fight it is only to bring about the end of the partition."

It was the officer’s turn to shrug, a little dismissively, perhaps a little indulgently at the fatuousness of the young man’s assertion. "The scale of your defeat, you and your compatriots and fellow Russians is unimaginable. The forests around here are littered with fugitive soldiers. They’re pulling them out of the lake, too. Those like you who took refuge in the town have now been all but rounded up. The question now is what do we do with you?"

The officer smiled, with a pretence of benign interest. "They’re going to call it the Battle of Tannenberg. Interesting, don’t you think?"

"Tannenberg," said the young man in disbelief. "Tannenberg is nowhere near here. Forty miles."

"These things are symbolic. Though perhaps it would be more accurate to call it the second battle of Tannenberg. If you are a Pole you will understand that?"

"1410. The defeat of the Teutonic Knights by the Kingdom of Poland."

"Yes," said the officer, with ironic satisfaction. "500 years, give or take. What is it they say? Revenge is a dish best taken cold..."



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About the author

I am John Wheatley, author of historical and contemporary fiction set in the North of England and in Wales. I attempt to capture a realistic and gritty sense of the communities I write about, and a vivid sense of the people who live in them, and to combine strong love interest with quality writing. view profile

Published on August 01, 2024

60000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Historical Fiction

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