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The Dividing is an intense urban fantasy reminiscent of early YA greats like Divergent. or Throne of Glass

Synopsis

A YA Dystopian Fantasy (Hunger Games meets Throne of Glass)

Adamic is the language of the Gods. When spoken, it has the power to create worlds, to raise the dead, to make man as God. Fortunately, no one has spoken it in thousands of years. The only remnants are the written spells.

The people of Cavernum depend on these spells. They’re etched into the city walls, fending off the feeders—deadly creatures with a thirst for human blood. Yet for the lower class, Cavernum isn’t much safer. Children starve, and illness runs rampant. Only the elite have access to magic, and status must be earned. One's class is determined by a single competition: The Dividing. Those who excel join the guild of their choice. The rest are sent to the fields, condemned to a life of slave-labor.

Matt is a refugee; Rose is the future queen. Turning 18, each must compete for their spot in society, and each is desperate to succeed. For Rose, magic is the surest way to secure her crown. For Matt, it’s his only chance to save his dying mother.

But danger lurks beyond the walls, and Cavernum won’t be safe for long.

4/5 stars


The Dividing is an intense urban fantasy reminiscent of early YA greats like Divergent. or Throne of Glass


Going into this read, I wasn't really expecting much from it. I mean, I thought I would enjoy it, but I liked it much more than I thought I would! I rated it four stars because there were definitely some cons to a multitude of pros, but overall I had a great time! I finished this 500-pager in just two days because I couldn't put it down.


As you probably saw up above, I compared The Dividing to both Divergent and Throne of Glass. It reminded me of Divergent for the way they were sorted into their jobs, but the domineering vibe was more Throne of Glass (but less Sarah J. Maas-ized.) There was a competition for the top place in the guards and a bit of political intrigue. Both of those early YA classics shared their best characteristics with The Dividing to make for a satisfying read!


I think one of the best aspects of the novel was the characters. We have two POVs: Matt and Rose. Matt is from outside Cavernum and is trying to acclimate and Rose is the princess of Cavernum. They both have very different journeys but they both end in a satisfying way. Devin Downing put little gems of some of my favorite things from books into some of the characters (for example, the Matt thing that I won't spoil.) I get the feeling that he spent a lot of time drawing his favorite aspects out of a lot of books.


In the beginning and middle of the book, it was a little slow. But you can't expect everything to always be moving quickly when the book is 500 pages long! While the first bit dragged on the most, the last third of it was amazing. Before, I was planning on rating The Dividing a three or three-and-a-half. After that ending, it's bumped up to four. The action never ended! There was a trope employed that I don't normally care for but for some reason, it worked here.


And here we come to the biggest downfall. The writing. It wasn't terrible, but it wasn't great either. You can tell that Downing got a little excited there at the beginning of the end from all of the exclamation marks everywhere. The writing was simple and juvenile, though I will agree that it did sound like we were in the heads of the character. But the style was probably just not for me, as I know that is how many people prefer their writing. Again, it was reminiscent of early YA. I swear, publish this book five to ten years earlier and it would have been a smash hit.


All in all, I actually really enjoyed this book! It's conveniently on kindle unlimited, so I will most probably be reading the second book as soon as I have time.

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Alex M

Hi! I’m Alex. I have a blog, The Scribe Owl, and I'm a very active reader, blogger, and reviewer! I read YA of practically every genre. If I had to choose my favorite genre, I'd chose fantasy, though I like all genres.

Synopsis

A YA Dystopian Fantasy (Hunger Games meets Throne of Glass)

Adamic is the language of the Gods. When spoken, it has the power to create worlds, to raise the dead, to make man as God. Fortunately, no one has spoken it in thousands of years. The only remnants are the written spells.

The people of Cavernum depend on these spells. They’re etched into the city walls, fending off the feeders—deadly creatures with a thirst for human blood. Yet for the lower class, Cavernum isn’t much safer. Children starve, and illness runs rampant. Only the elite have access to magic, and status must be earned. One's class is determined by a single competition: The Dividing. Those who excel join the guild of their choice. The rest are sent to the fields, condemned to a life of slave-labor.

Matt is a refugee; Rose is the future queen. Turning 18, each must compete for their spot in society, and each is desperate to succeed. For Rose, magic is the surest way to secure her crown. For Matt, it’s his only chance to save his dying mother.

But danger lurks beyond the walls, and Cavernum won’t be safe for long.

Prologue

Screams filled the cold night air. Screams for help. Screams to run. Screams of pain. Screams of mourning. 

Each scream was a map to Jenevrah, guiding her through the alleyways. She weaved through the dark cobblestone streets, avoiding the screams as much as possible. A scream to the right. Turn left. A scream up ahead. U-turn.

Feeders were everywhere. She couldn’t count how many, but the plenitude of prey increased her chances of escape. She just needed to make it to the fields unnoticed, and everything would be okay. She was close now. Just a few more streets. 

A scream to the right, a quiet alley to the left. Jenevrah turned left and froze. A woman lay dead in the street, blood still oozing from the teeth marks on her neck. Jenevrah searched the shadows for any feeders, and finding herself alone, she tiptoed over the body and ran. Another scream, another alley, this time empty. 

An explosion rocked the night, almost knocking her off her feet—this one more distant than the last. For several moments, the thunderous roar ricocheted off the surrounding mountains. Jenevrah looked back. On the horizon, fire and smoke billowed from the palace wall. It was over. The last great wall had fallen. The sanctuary was no more. 

Jenevrah focused on the street, concentrating only on placing her feet. She was running as fast as she could without falling. She couldn’t risk tripping, not with the baby in her arms. Ezra howled his disapproval, his cries muffled by Jenevrah’s shoulder. She tried to hold his head steady, but it bounced violently with each stride; she couldn’t afford to slow down. Better this than dead. 

So many had died already. 

Finally, Jenevrah broke free from the buildings. The fields were quiet. The dead usually were. Their bodies littered the long dirt road, each with bite marks of their own. Two guards. A little boy. A tiny toddler. All dead. All victims of the feeders. 

In the distance, a field of corn crops huddled together in the dark. Beyond that, the outer wall towered over the flatlands. It was presumed impenetrable… until tonight. That’s where Kildron would be waiting. 

Just a little further. 

A feeble cry pricked Jenevrah’s ears. Off to her left, a lanky figure hunched on its hands and knees, its bloody mouth buried in a young girl’s neck. A long black cloak, like devil’s wings, wrapped around the feeder. Beneath it, the poor girl was still alive. She writhed under its jaws and clawed helplessly at its back. Then, she fell still. 

The feeder itself was nothing out of the ordinary, an average human face with a slender human body. At one point, it had been a man. But that was long ago, before it fed on human blood. 

Jenevrah tried to walk quietly, but the sandy road crunched beneath her feet. At the sound of her footsteps, the feeder’s head snapped up. She wasted no time. Jenevrah hugged her baby tight and sprinted for the camouflage of the corn foliage. She plunged into the corn stalks and, after several strides, dove to the soil. She huddled as still as possible, trying to silence her breathing. She hugged her son close and stroked his head to keep him quiet. 

A subtle noise scratched at her eardrum: the scraping of leaves on skin. Peering through the corn rows, she saw the outline of the feeder against the starlight. It walked slowly through the stalks, waiting to pounce at the slightest movement. It took a step closer. Then, another. It stopped a few feet shy of Jenevrah and craned its neck to listen. A few moments passed… and then a few more. 

“It’s alright. You can come out now,” the feeder called, its voice sweetly, deceivingly innocent. “Those monsters are gone. You’re safe to come out. I’ll protect you.”

Chills raced down Jenevrah’s spine. The voice was so gentle, so convincing. But Jenevrah knew better. She saw the bodies. She saw the blood dripping from its chin. How could something so intelligent be consumed by such evil?

The feeder paused a moment longer. “Fine! Have it your way!” it hissed, innocence replaced with rage. “Lucky for me, I like my blood boiled.”

As easy as flipping a switch, the feeder’s hands ignited in a swirling mass of flame. As it extended its hands, the flames leapt to the nearest corn stalks. The burning leaves crackled as the heat drew nearer to Jenevrah. If she ran from the flames, the feeder would see her. If she didn’t, it would hear her dying screams. 

I’m sorry, Ezra. I’ve failed you. I’ve failed everyone.

As quietly as she could, she wrapped Ezra within her cloak, shielding him from the smoke that already choked her. The flames were only inches away. She grit her teeth as the heat seared her nerves.

God help me!

Shlink!

A knife buried itself in the feeder’s throat. The creature screeched and clawed at the blade before slinking to the ground. It thrashed amid the burning stalks for several seconds before submitting to its inevitable death. A moment later, the flames shrunk until they disappeared completely, snuffed out by an invisible blanket. Only the smoking skeletons of corn remained.

Jenevrah rose to her feet and spotted him instantly. He raced through the corn, his silhouette tall and lean. His features were hidden in the shadows of his cloak. Without thinking, Jenevrah ran to him, embracing her husband. She wrapped her arms around his neck while trying not to squish her infant. He was alive! Kildron was alive! 

Kildron grabbed her by the face and kissed her mouth with a passion only desperation could inspire. His long blonde curls tickled her cheek. She squeezed her husband tight, laying her face on his damp chest, whether with sweat or blood, she couldn’t tell. Her hair tangled around his fingers as he stroked her head. His rapid breathing hissed in her ear. It was the most beautiful sound she had ever heard. It meant he was alive. 

Jenevrah pulled away first, breaking the short moment of bliss. “Where’s Iris?” She asked, frantically searching for her in the dark. “Is she not with you?”

His voice whispered in short, gasping breaths. “Iris is fine. I sent her with Zane. They’re on their way to Kentville.”

Jenevrah breathed a sigh of relief. For now, her family was safe.

“Jen, there’s no time,” Kildron gasped. “The feeders have already breached the palace. You need to get out of here. Take Ezra and go to Kentville.”

Jenevrah opened her mouth to protest, but Kildron didn’t give her a chance. He shook her softly. “There’s no time; listen carefully. Zane will wait for you at the gas station. He’ll take Ezra to Cavernum. You’ll both be safe there.” His next words stung. “Don’t wait for me. I’ll find you again. I promise.” 

Jenevrah clung to him. “You can’t face him alone, Kildron,” she pled. “He’s too strong. You’ll die!” 

“I don’t have a choice. If he gets his hands on the library…” Kildron didn’t finish the sentence; he didn’t need to. Jenevrah couldn’t speak; only nod her head, tears dripping with each bounce. 

Kildron’s head snapped up just as two feeders emerged from the city. They raced toward the embracing family with heart-stopping speed. Kildron kissed her one last time, so quick she wondered if it really happened. “Now, go!” He turned Jenevrah toward the outer wall and shoved her hard. “Go!!!” 

Her instincts took over, and she stammered through the corn stalks. She only took a dozen steps before a blinding flash of lightning lit the field. The thunder rocked her almost instantly, a tortured scream buried within. Jenevrah didn’t look back. Twice more, lightning illuminated the flatland, the shockwave rustling the leaves around her. Her eyes blurred with tears as she ran. She didn’t even have time to say I love you. Her last words had been You’ll die.

Jenevrah hugged Ezra close, smearing his cheek with her tears. He was all that mattered now. More than her own life, more than her husband’s, Ezra had to live.



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Ricardo FayetSounds right up my alley, thanks for the review!
almost 4 years ago
Rebecca ReedThis sounds amazing! Can't wait to read the whole thing.
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About the author

Devin grew up in Temecula, California, reading books on the beach and bashing bones at the skatepark. When re isn’t writing, he enjoys playing the harmonica, ice-hockey, and hiking with his wife. Today, Devin is studying neuroscience in Provo, Utah. view profile

Published on September 29, 2020

150000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Fantasy

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