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A solid and fun young adult fantasy debut filled with a dynamic cast of characters, elements of magic, mystery, and adventure.

Synopsis

"The Breakfast Club meets Harry Potter."

Five teenagers. Three magical schools. A secret family curse. A tale of epic proportions that you’ll never forget.

In the summer of 1999 in the unassuming Brisbane town of Breakfast Creek, five teenagers find themselves up against a demonic General of Darkness.
Henry, Melanie, Julia, Hugh and Aiden never expected their detention to result in the execution of their school principal.
All of a sudden they are on the run from a demonic General with a penchant for collecting children.
Chrysalis school has slept for 50 years. But now she’s ready to awaken.
The course of their lives is going to change forever.

“There are a number of ways to hide a memory, should one ever wish to attempt such a dangerous thing… If Henry Jolt knew of the secret memory his grandfather kept hidden in the wardrobe of his room at the rickety Breakfast Creek nursing home, everything would have turned out differently. He would probably, in fact, be dead.”


It is the summer of 1999 in the small, unassuming town of Breakfast Creek and sixteen-year-old Henry Jolt would like nothing more than to finish his school year and spend time with his AV club friends and his younger brother, Arnold. But he never could have guessed that his discovery of a magical key and an innocuous detention would lead to the execution of his school principal by a demonic man known as the Red General.


Pulled together by circumstance, Henry along with his fellow detention-mates, Melanie, Julia, Hugh, and Aiden, are forced to flee from the General of Darkness with his penchant for collecting children, escaping through a magical green door opened by Henry’s key and entering another world.


It is in this other world where Henry, Melanie, Julia, Hugh, and Aiden learn about a secret curse plaguing Henry’s family, the Red General after them, and about Chrysalis School, one of the three magical schools within the multi-verse that has been closed for the past fifty-five years… until now.


And now, the course of their lives will never be the same…


The Chrysalis Key by E.P. Bali is a young adult fantasy novel filled with dangerous family secrets, demonic generals, dark (and light) magic, death, and doorways to other worlds. Plus, throw in a wide array of characters, action and adventure, and a thread of mystery and voila! I was hooked by this book upon reading the synopsis—I mean Harry Potter meets The Breakfast Club, but darker, let’s just say that I was intrigued. And, overall, I really enjoyed the book and, knowing that it is the start of a seven-book series, found it to be a solid opener to introducing the characters, the world, and the magic and setting the stage for the rest of the series.


The Chrysalis Key promises three things with regards to the world of the novel: the story being set in 1999, taking place in Australia, and, of course, magic! And it sure delivers! The novel strikes a nice balance between the real and the magical, between our world and the more magical world of Chrysalis (as well as the other magical locations that the characters travel to throughout the novel). Bali clearly defines both the magical and non-magical worlds of the novel, creating a visible contrast between all of the worlds which are explored on the page and creating a strong sense of “place” in terms of which world any particular scene is set in. I feel as though there is a lot more to be explored within the various magical worlds of the multi-verse and that Bali has set the stage nicely for these other worlds to be explored as the series progresses; I believe that there is especially more to be explored revolving around Chrysalis—some of my favorite descriptions and images from the novel come from the scenes set at Chrysalis School and I wish that there were more of them because I found them to be mesmerizing.


And as someone born in the late 1990s, I enjoyed the references throughout the novel to the time period. Between VHS tapes, The Truman Show, and 90s Disney movies, the novel is rife with references to the time period and clearly defines the era in which the story is set. However, I did wish that the time period played more into the story somehow as Bali’s choice to set the story in 1999 (especially when this is a point mentioned in the synopsis) seems very intentional, but has not really had any big pay off or import as of yet with the exception of references to the time period.


In terms of the writing, I found the story very easy to read and to be written in such a manner so that it is very easy to enter the world of the novel. The novel is filled with vivid images and descriptions which, as previously stated, really make the world of the novel, including the physical setting, the characters, and the various aspects of the different locations, come to life. The dialogue between the characters also, for the most part, seemed very natural and real and worked to showcase a lot about the individual characters.


However, the book dragged for me at some points and I feel as though it could have used some tightening and condensing. There were some scenes, events, and conversations that occurred within the novel that I felt could have been cut as they did not add much to the story overall (they were either out of place, held no real value to the plot, and/or were never brought up again), which would have worked to keep the story from dragging and kept the action going.


As per usual, the characters were definitely the highlight of the story for me. The novel includes a wide array of characters, including a number of point of view characters, who were all very unique and distinct in their own right. While the novel strongly focuses on the five main protagonists—Henry, Hugh, Aiden, Melanie, and Julia—I liked how Bali took the time to explore various aspects of both the other narrators as well as the side characters. I enjoyed learning more about the various characters over the progression of the novel and seeing different sides of them that were not apparent at first glance, witnessing their character growth and development as the story unraveled. Out of the novel’s five main protagonists, I found Henry to be the most developed as well as my favorite of the group (Aiden and Hugh are probably tied for a close second) and while the novel follows multiple points of view, it is definitely Henry’s story to tell (he also has the most chapters out of all of the characters). I also liked the relationships and dynamics between the characters that were explored throughout the novel, particularly between Henry and Aiden, Aiden and Hugh, Henry and Arnold, and Hugh and Amos (the latter two I wish that we saw more of and definitely expect to be explored more in the following books), and I enjoyed witnessing how these relationships and dynamics showed off different aspects of the various characters.


However, in a Breakfast Club-esque manner, each of the five protagonists falls strongly into a sort of “character stereotype,” which means that they sometimes have the potential to lean too strongly into these stereotypes (I found this to especially be the case regarding Julia, which might explain why she was definitely my least favorite out of the five). I hope to see each of the characters grow more into themselves as the series progresses, which Bali strongly seems to suggest to be the case with the direction each of the characters took in their final point of view chapter.


And while the protagonists are pretty well-developed, I really wanted to know more about the side characters, particularly characters such as Calomere, Rose, Amos, Julian, and Clementine who have ties to Chrysalis and who I found to be very intriguing characters, despite not knowing too much about them. I hope to see more attention paid to these side characters in the next books, which I believe will be the case, particularly considering that it seems as though more attention will be paid to Chrysalis School based upon the events of this installment.


I found the mystery aspect to be one of the strong suits of the novel as a whole. The story itself is littered with various mysteries to be solved and twists and turns to unravel alongside the characters, with almost every new chapter seeming to introduce a new secret or mystery to discover the answer to or providing another twist to an already introduced mystery. In this manner, I liked how the novel slowly worked towards revealing the answers to these various mysteries and twists in a slow, natural way so that more clues were gathered as the story progressed. Each of the five main protagonists have their own problems to solve and secrets to explore, but I liked how there are threads of mystery that weave throughout the group (such as the mysteries and secrets surrounding Henry’s grandfather) and it takes all of them working together to eventually solve them, which I greatly enjoyed as each character was able to bring something different to the table in terms of working to navigate the various twists and turns of the novel. While many of these mysteries are solved by the novel’s end, Bali still leaves quite a few to be solved in the following books (including some that are never posed outright, but that I still really hope that we are provided an answer to), but just the right amount so that it did not seem as though things were left unresolved. And the last five chapters? Those endings? Bali has definitely set the stage for more twists to come in the proceeding installments.


Overall, The Chrysalis Key is a solid debut that I would recommend to readers who enjoy young adult fantasy books filled with dynamic casts of characters (who just so happen to be thrown together by circumstance), elements of magic (both light and dark), family secrets (and curses), and action and adventure (which includes traveling between various magical worlds) and I am very interested to see where the story goes next!

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Synopsis

"The Breakfast Club meets Harry Potter."

Five teenagers. Three magical schools. A secret family curse. A tale of epic proportions that you’ll never forget.

In the summer of 1999 in the unassuming Brisbane town of Breakfast Creek, five teenagers find themselves up against a demonic General of Darkness.
Henry, Melanie, Julia, Hugh and Aiden never expected their detention to result in the execution of their school principal.
All of a sudden they are on the run from a demonic General with a penchant for collecting children.
Chrysalis school has slept for 50 years. But now she’s ready to awaken.
The course of their lives is going to change forever.

Prologue

It was midnight as the officer hurried down Marrow Avenue. The darkness shrouded him, hiding his lithe movements from all possible prying eyes. Except, that is, for the pair of eyes that followed him. 

Malhaven Manor towered above, a black mausoleum, its stone gargoyles leering down at him. It was like every other manor on Marrow Avenue: imposing Grecian pillars and black rendered brick.

He slipped through the huge, wrought-iron gates, and up the wide drive to the oak front doors. Doggedly, his pursuer followed and crouched behind a manicured bush by the gates. He watched as the officer pulled the thin, silver chain hanging by the manor door. A clanging sounded within, and after a moment, the door opened, a dim yellow light spilling out onto the stoop. 

“Can I help you?” frowned the butler, a portly man with wiry grey hair. 

The officer pulled a piece of paper out of his jacket and held it up for the older man to see. His lined face paled as he read the first line. Silently, the butler stepped back, pulling the door open with him. 

The officer stepped lightly inside and continued towards the sweeping, black marble staircase. 

“Sir!” the butler protested. “If you just wait—”

“No need,” the officer replied crisply. Tucking the paper back into his jacket he jogged swiftly up the stairs. 

On the second floor sitting room, he called her name. Down the hallway, a door opened, and his charge strode out in a flowing, black dressing gown. She was willowy and proud with the thick hair and pink cheeks of her condition. She was as pale as the moon and just as lovely with silver eyes that were presently fixed on him. The robe made a thin shield around her large pregnant belly. 

“So you have come for me.” Her soft voice held a quiet power, and it stirred something within the officer that he pushed down immediately. She placed a hand protectively on her stomach. 

“Beatrice Malhaven,” he announced formally. “You are charged with the illegal use of black magic. I have a warrant for your arrest while you await your trial.” 

The words hung between them, a hangman’s noose swaying in a cold wind. 

She squared her shoulders and closed her eyes for a single, broad moment. It stuck with him, those silver eyes. There was something scorching in them he could not name. Something primal, beautiful, and savage. But he did not let his mind linger on it. He had a job to do. One of many tonight. He clenched his jaw. 

“Will you come easily, or will it be a fight?” Words he had said so many times, yet tonight they felt flat and dry in his mouth. He knew her answer before she gave it. 

Her eyes were bright as she swept her arms out wide, silver magic swirling in front of her. “I will not come with you, officer.” 

He responded quickly, putting his hands together in a spell that made his skin crawl. His Power surged within him, dark and violent. He separated his palms, and a black ball of potent energy fizzed and crackled madly, demanding permission to devour. His nostrils flared, fighting to control the movements with his mind. He met Beatrice eye to eye. Something deep inside him wanted to plead with her. Wanted her to stop this. 

“Don’t make me do this,” he said through gritted teeth. 

Her magic swirled powerfully in front of her. As she gazed at him, her face softened for half a moment and then became stone. “I will not be a prisoner,” she hissed. “I will not be a victim like those before me. I will not let anyone harm my children.” The silver haze pulsed, and all at once, it changed, turning a violent shade of red. 

This was a battle of skill. Of Power. Of wit. The officer had fought this battle many times before, but this woman was something else entirely. The force of her Power shook the floorboards. He could feel the rage of it vibrating in his bones. The most powerful sorceress for five dimensions in any direction was commanding a change in the very matter around them. He knew there was only one way around it. And it was the black ball in his hands. He had prepared for this. He knew what to do. 

“So be it,” the officer said, feeling a movement behind him. 

“No!” A side door slammed open, and an old woman swept out, her face a mask of anger and fear. 

At the same time, someone behind the officer cried out, “Stop!” 

The officer was out of time. With all the force of his Power behind him, he hurled the death spell towards the pregnant sorceress. It soared straight through the red haze of her magic, and hit her in the chest. She staggered backwards. Her eyes widened, her mouth opening in a small gasp. She clutched her chest with a white fist and teetered on the spot. The older woman reached her, breaking her fall as she toppled onto the wooden floorboards. 

“My child!” the older woman screeched, clutching her daughter. “What have you done?”  

A large hand snatched at the officer’s arm. “What are you doing?” exclaimed a familiar voice. 

The officer tucked a silver vial into his jacket pocket as he whirled around in surprise. “What are you doing here, JJ?”

“Stopping you!” the taller man cried. “I—I knew you were up to something—” his voice faltered.  

“You shouldn’t be here,” said the officer flatly, shaking off his grip. 

But the voice of the older woman slammed into them, making them turn back to the two women on the floor. One lifeless and white, the other shaking with rage. Her weathered face wet with tears, she lifted a shaking finger enveloped in smoking silvery magic. And when she spoke, her voice boomed, her Power making the matter in the room tremble. 

“May woe follow your footsteps,” she rasped. “May you know my pain as your own. May you be powerless to protect your lineage from slaughter.”

The officer felt something twist within him, like a snake coiling around his bones, but he ignored it. The room sighed when the old lady dropped her hand. The officer turned back around dismissively, his eyes dull. “Go back to head office, JJ.” He roughly pushed past the taller man and hurried out of the sitting room and down the marble steps. 

The taller man stood frozen, white with shock, eyes fixed on the pregnant sorceress’ dead body and her mother, who was now howling into the air like a grieving wolf.  

As the officer ran out of the manor into the night, he remembered the woman’s face in the seconds before he killed her. He couldn’t put a name to it, but the primal look in her eyes would haunt his soul for the rest of his days. He did not know it then, but he would see that look in another’s eyes before his time was done. 


Back in Malhaven Manor, the old woman laid her hand to rest upon her daughter’s cheek. Somewhere in the manor, a sweet chiming rang. She let out a short, humourless laugh. 

“It’s too late for you to leave, Captain,” she croaked to the man. “He’s here.”

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About the author

Ektaa P. Bali was born in Fiji and spent most of her life in Melbourne Australia. She writes Middle Grade, YA and NA Fantasy. The Chrysalis Key is her debut YA novel and the beginning of a seven book series, The Travellers. She currently lives in Brisbane, Australia. view profile

Published on November 04, 2021

130000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Young Adult Fantasy

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