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Historical fantasy with a title that is literally accurate but does not adequately express the ultimate sweetness with a side of spice.
Taken by an Immortal Elf follows Leona, the unladylike daughter of a duke performing land development on top of a sacred forest and an elf, Ulf, who kidnaps her in an effort to blackmail said duke into stopping the project. Unfortunately (or fortunately), Leona does not make for a good bargaining chip and instead they fall for each other.
While the title is not inaccurate for describing the contents of this book, it feels too lowbrow for what it ultimately ends up being about. That is, a story with a historical fantasy setting and sympathetic, likable characters who also want to jump each others' bones. There is a level of care that belies the suggestiveness of the title and subtitle—An Age Gap, Forbidden Love, Low Fantasy Historical Paranormal Romance Novella. On the other hand, the title did grab my attention, so I cannot fault it on that front.
I buy the affection between Ulf and Leona on both a physical and emotional level. Once over the initial understandable hostility and sense of propriety, they have good chemistry with each other. The spicier sections tantalize and I found myself blushing outright, though there were a couple of cliches that made me wince ("Do you like what you see?" and "She exploded" being chief among them). Despite the conflicted nature of the situation, there is a clear level of concern and consent.
Side note, pretty descriptions of natural settings stuck out to me, which felt appropriate given that Ulf particularly cares about the natural world. Forests, gardens, and a spring are lovingly described.
There are a few things that hold me back from rating this higher. One of them was the archetype Leona fits into. It feels old hat at this point to have a female character in a Victorian English setting who is bad at needlepoint/dancing/the like. That said, there was in-story justification. Her parents also felt a bit flatly evil, but given that the story isn't really about them I can let it slide. There were also errors with incorrect or lack of punctuation marks here and there, a few too many adverbs, and the same adjectives repeated close together. I think more editing passes would fix those errors.
Overall, I am happy to have picked this book up—"d'awww, cute" is the resounding vibe by the end—but it could use a bit more polish in places.
I have worked in several academic libraries, a law library, and a museum library. My tastes in reading are diverse, covering fiction and nonfiction as well as a wide span of genres, with a particular love of horror, romance, and fantasy as well as writing craft, health, and history, respectively.
L. E. Sunwick was born in Boston, Massachusetts, lives in the United States, and has lived in Europe and worked globally. An avid reader of both fiction and nonfiction, L. E. loves history and stories. L. E. Sunwick loves stories about love conquering all and about grabbing all life has to offer. view profile
Published on August 08, 2023
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20000 words
Contains graphic explicit content ⚠️
Genre:Paranormal Romance
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