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Unshackled from poetic norms - weaving desire, and passionate authenticity. A taste of lusty poetry that echoes the heart's wild cravings!

Synopsis

Embark on a provocative journey into the labyrinth of desires, where passion and poetry entwine to create an intoxicating symphony of sensations. This collection of sensuous verses will enthrall your senses and ignite your imagination, sweeping you away to a realm where words become tantalizing caresses.

Explore the depths of love’s most primal urges, as each page invites you to surrender to a tapestry of emotions. From the delicate dance of a first touch to the fierce embrace of primal lust, these poems captivate with their raw power and unapologetic vulnerability.

Don’t resist the enchantment that lies within these pages. Surrender to the allure of Sensual Scribbles and allow yourself to be seduced by the power of poetic pleasure.

I always find poetry so hard to review.


In the tenth grade, a stuck-up teacher tore my poem to shreds and said it lacked the standards, format, and rhythm of true poetry. What is true poetry? To me, true poetry bleeds from the heart and soul of the author and is authentic in its existence as is, requiring no standards, particular format, or confining rhythm. True poetry is like a bird on the wind, soaring and using nature itself to help it make leaps and bounds in a way it could never do on its own.


This poetry book does exactly that. But it's real sexy, on top of it all.


What is odd is that reading this felt very much like reading the erotic poetry I once wrote. The unsatiated desire before I met my husband, and then traveling and finding him - and knowing my body (and heart) was searching for him all along. It was very neat to see myself in these poems (but, thankfully, not from "Heartbreak & Hurt").


"I wasn't free until I chained myself to you, "Addicted to you / the taste of us" "There was a covenant / Of hope between them" "North, South, East, or West / It doesn't matter where I am / You are my world - my home" -- BOOM! I get that!


Even the rhyming poems, which often make me think of children's literature, were very enticing and had you hooked in the passionate moment.


It's the kind of poetry book where you'd write out a poem by hand and give it to your lover on Valentine's Day or your anniversary. Or maybe you'd send them a text of your favourite one and give them a mid-day surprise at work. It's poetry you absolutely want to share with the person who brings out the lion or lioness in you.


I could practically taste some of the poetry in this book:

His sweet tooth craves

Her caramel, carnal curves

Yum! Who wouldn't want a taste? It's short but absolutely sweet.


My primary criticism of this poetry book is the overuse of four words: desire, pleasure, passion, and fantasy. There are so many beautiful synonyms for these powerful words; I understand that rhythm may play a part in its insertion in so many lines, but it can get very repetitive if the poetry is read in one sitting as I did.

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A Canadian in France, a bibliophile, logophile, and Francophile. She lives driven by joy and filling her life with passion. When she’s not reading, creative journaling, or writing, she’s lending her clairaudient mediumship abilities to others through her spiritual business Seeking Celestial Grace©

Synopsis

Embark on a provocative journey into the labyrinth of desires, where passion and poetry entwine to create an intoxicating symphony of sensations. This collection of sensuous verses will enthrall your senses and ignite your imagination, sweeping you away to a realm where words become tantalizing caresses.

Explore the depths of love’s most primal urges, as each page invites you to surrender to a tapestry of emotions. From the delicate dance of a first touch to the fierce embrace of primal lust, these poems captivate with their raw power and unapologetic vulnerability.

Don’t resist the enchantment that lies within these pages. Surrender to the allure of Sensual Scribbles and allow yourself to be seduced by the power of poetic pleasure.

Longing and Lust

She clutches her manners

Like a string of pearls 

While yearning for him

To break those inhibitions

That tie and bind her desires

She needs his passions

Like fires seeks oxygen 

Craving the heat 

Of his fiery embrace 

As her heart thrums

Be mine

Again

  & again

    



*


Give her words before flowers

Let them blossom in her mind

Seducing it along with her body


Offer fantasies on frosted breath

That breathe heat into her desires

Melting the burning silence

They flicker and whisper

In the amber afterglow

Of their scorching touch


His wants murmurers

Along dangerous curves

And lusty aches

Leaving love notes from him

With his mouth and body

That are taunt with need

And biting passions

That leave her

Tongue tied in satin 

Bound to touch

And his wild words


*


I hear the song

Of our untraveled sins

They're a graveyard of secrets

Waiting to be shared


I crave your haunting melody

It's my favorite midnight dance

Of silk and steam

That binds me in pearls of passion

Pinned beneath your kisses


Make music with me

If you dare

Let dissonant fade

And the desires

Caged in you free

To sing of our lust and love


*


Don't go

Or say goodbye

Stay for breakfast

Where the meal

Is you


I want more

Than tantalizing memories

And discarded dreams


Your breath mixes 

With my deliberate follies

Taste the passion

Dripping from my tongue


I'm hungry 

For your succulent desires

Let me dine on you


*


Dreaming of midnight desires

Of dark kisses between satin sheets 

And between her velvet thighs 

Catching her moans of pleasure 

Dancing through his dreams


*


I’m standing before you

Burning in my sins.

Do you extinguish my flame

Or are you a match

Lighting our desires 

A fire to you fantasies

Blazing kiss to my pleasure


*


He craves it all

For her to fall

Into his fantasies

Turned to real 

To kneel 

Whispers, caresses, & kisses

Thrust, fuck & moans

He owns

Her climax at his touch

He needs to much


*


I sleep to dream of you

Trying to discover 

If you’re my dream man

Just a fantasy 

With the smile of an angel

And the mind of a demon



*


His sweet tooth craves

Her caramel, carnal curves

A taste of her brazen smile

That's sweeter than chocolate

And just as smooth


She radiates sugarplum passion

Melting all his inhibitions and restraints

He’s waiting, counting the hours

To taste her sugar-coated kisses



*


She sips on 

Whisky dawn whispers

Tasting his

Honey poison of pleasure 

She's drunk on his desires

Loving the way bliss burns

As it and she goes down

Tasting his passion and pleasure


*


In light of the gleam

In his eyes

That takes me by surprise

I have a confession

Where told lies

Wither and die

On Aphrodite's pen

That drips with longing

And a sense of belonging

Coating my skin with lust

As she writes our love letters

On silk sensuality

*

I'm head over heels

It all holds so much appeal

Playing with you angel and demons

Immersed in your carnal fires

Drowning in your desires



*


Will you be my midnight kiss

That shatters the quiet of night

As you and the moon 

Unravel my passion

Wrapping me in sweet sins

And a weave of star lust 

From dusk to dawn

Let me treasure this dream

Sheathed in one more hour of lust

Before you must 

Let me go



*


He's her favorite dessert

-such a flirt

The pale splash of passion

-something she can't ration

A salted caramel sip of sin

-makes her grin

Insatiable tangling thighs

-and hungry eyes

They're speaking tongues

-hearts beating like drums

As she takes a bite

-everything feels so right


*


Insatiable desires drip drama

Rustling— a ruffle from the rift

Where her passions part and pull

And darkness calls to depravities 

That tug on the ropes and rapture

Of tantalizing temptations

The seductive stage is set

She's ready to please, to play her part

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I am a voracious reader and writer. Besides this poetry book, I have written six romance novels that are filled with heart, heat, and a kiss of humor. They are brimming with confident heroines and kind heroes, all living, loving, and lusting in and around my hometown of Detroit, Michigan. view profile

Published on January 16, 2024

1000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Poetry

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