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Not your typical mystery story which is a breath of fresh air but with the same mystery that keeps you reading.

Synopsis

"Each character has a history, baggage, and much to overcome. All come across as three-dimensional." - Diane Donovan, Senior Reviewer, Midwest Book Reviews

Former journalist Jake Scott relies on his weekly breakfast gatherings with friends and a temperamental tabby cat named Oliver to keep his spirits up. He has lost his wife, retired from his job and watched his daughter move to Toronto with her boyfriend.

Things change when one of the breakfast attendees, a beautiful police detective with a troubled teenage daughter, suggests Jake should write a book. When he takes her advice and researches a convicted murderer’s case, he finds out something is terribly wrong. Could a member of the breakfast group be hiding a secret deadly enough to commit murder?

Jake follows leads that uncover a mysterious and disturbing rollercoaster ride of clues, all while his attraction for the detective grows. An attempt to force the true murderer out of hiding results in a terrifying ordeal on the coldest night of the year.

The story starts off with the actual murder that makes up the mystery in this story, but that moves slowly at first. The reader can feel that something is about to happen but the focus is more on the illicit relationship.


I found most of the story heavy with unnecessary details. Some details were good to help set the mood of the scene and/or the characters, but there were times that too much space was given to the snow or people's actions. There are quite a few readers who enjoy such detail, but it bogs down the story for me.


As a reader, there were times when proofreading/editing issues stopped me as I went along in the story. The author puts "5" instead of "five" when not noting addresses or similar. The age of one character is noted as 33, but this should be written out. These kind of small things hung me up as I read and slowed me down quite a bit.


The mystery itself is good. It took me a while to work it out which is something I appreciated. I usually pick up on the guilty party pretty early on in a book. The main character is someone I could relate to as I am close to his age. I like the fact that the author chose a non-typical character to play the main part which makes him easier to connect to.


The setting for the story is in Canada which was unusual for mysteries I tend to read. I really liked this as it opened the door for me to learn more about the area and the people. Also, this is written during the pandemic. I've read several books recently set during this period, but I'm not sure I like it. Living through it now, I want my characters mask-less just like I want myself. But it did open my eyes to how other people see the current situation.


The overall story is very good. I think a little more proofreading and editing might have helped, but none of that pulled me too far from enjoying it. If you like mysteries, give this one a shot.

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Synopsis

"Each character has a history, baggage, and much to overcome. All come across as three-dimensional." - Diane Donovan, Senior Reviewer, Midwest Book Reviews

Former journalist Jake Scott relies on his weekly breakfast gatherings with friends and a temperamental tabby cat named Oliver to keep his spirits up. He has lost his wife, retired from his job and watched his daughter move to Toronto with her boyfriend.

Things change when one of the breakfast attendees, a beautiful police detective with a troubled teenage daughter, suggests Jake should write a book. When he takes her advice and researches a convicted murderer’s case, he finds out something is terribly wrong. Could a member of the breakfast group be hiding a secret deadly enough to commit murder?

Jake follows leads that uncover a mysterious and disturbing rollercoaster ride of clues, all while his attraction for the detective grows. An attempt to force the true murderer out of hiding results in a terrifying ordeal on the coldest night of the year.

Prologue

A SLIVER OF the moon was all that illuminated their spot at the end of the parking lot. A cave would have offered better light as the burned-out streetlamp hanging above the car provided nothing. The absence of light suited Matt Pawsloski and Melissa Thomas just fine.

They had arrived around nine o’clock and parked at the far end of the lot, relieved to see theirs was the only car. If Matt rolled down his window, they could hear the roar of Hog’s Back Falls and the bravado of teenagers shouting somewhere nearby. He shut off the car but left the window down a crack. Just enough to provide a breath of air in the humid Ottawa night while muffling most of the outside noise.

Matt unknotted his tie. It produced a zipping sound as he yanked it from his shirt collar and tossed it on top of the light gray suit jacket draped across his briefcase in the back seat. He had removed the jacket earlier in the evening when he left the office. The suit and tie fit his upwardly mobile path at the legal firm where he worked downtown. Shortly, he would have his law degree, but by watching others of lesser capabilities progress in the firm, he learned that being seen in the office by the bosses after hours was almost as important as the work he produced. Besides, he needed to confirm the identity of the person responsible for an irregularity at the office and waiting until others left afforded the best opportunity. He had stayed late, which suited Melissa since she worked beyond her scheduled shift end of eight o’clock.

Matt reached for Melissa’s hand as they sat in silence for a few minutes. She was jittery, shuddering at the sound of a sewer hole cover clattering as a passing car on the street drove over it. She leaned across the center console in the Camry to be closer to Matt. A mosquito buzzed around her head until it made a fatal miscalculation and landed on her arm where she swatted it.

She said, “I hate this, Matt. It’s too dark and creepy, and this car is so uncomfortable. I feel like a teenager stealing a few minutes with her boyfriend.”

Matt’s annoyance showed as his lips scarcely moved.

“Well dear, I guess it’s partly true. I am your boyfriend. What else can we do? We can’t rent a hotel room every night, and there’s no time to drive to my place. Your husband wouldn’t appreciate it if we used your bedroom.” His tone softened as he changed the subject. “Speaking of your husband, what’s Gary doing tonight?”

Melissa gazed into Matt’s eyes. Her hesitation signaled her discomfort with the subject. Finally, she said, “He went to a friend’s place. Just a bunch of guys getting together like they always do. You’re right, I can’t be too long. Besides, you seem edgy.”

Matt leaned to pull Melissa closer and brushed her lips with his.

He said, “I’m sorry, some things at work are bothering me. Things I’d rather not talk about yet. When are you going to leave him? You know he stormed into the office and threatened to kill us? In the office! Good thing I wasn’t there. You’ve been talking about leaving him for weeks, but I don’t think it will ever happen.”

Melissa pulled back, saying, “It will happen. The time just has to be right. If he ever caught us, he would kill us. He’s got a terrible temper when he’s mad. You know that, right?”

“I heard about his temper when he came into the office. It’s all the more reason to leave him. Does he have a job yet?”

Melissa shrugged and blew air through her lips before responding. “He says no one in town is looking for chefs right now. He’s pretty picky, but eventually, he’ll have to take something, even if it’s in a fast-food restaurant. We had a tremendous fight about him not working the other night. It was so loud, the police came.”

A fleeting smile crossed Matt’s lips as he said, “That must’ve been something. Now, there isn’t another car in the parking lot. It’s just you and me, so let’s make the best of it.”

Melissa snuggled close to Matt again for a moment before jerking upright again, saying, “What if a police car shows up? They must patrol the parks.”

Matt’s head dropped back in exasperation. “Oh my God, Melissa. You worry too much.” He pulled her closer to continue what they started. He found her lips again and kissed her intensely as he unbuttoned the top of her blouse. His words were a whisper. “The way I feel, we won’t be here long. Let’s get into the back seat. This console is in the way.”

His fingers found the inside of Melissa’s lacy bra as she draped her arms around his neck.

The lights of a car turning into the parking lot reflected off the facets of Melissa’s diamond ring. The vehicle crept past their parking spot before doing a deliberate, meandering U-turn and pulling in on the opposite side. Shallow breathing was the only sound in Matt’s car as he peered through his back window, but the other vehicle’s tinted glass obscured the driver’s face. Eerie shadows cast by the moon danced across the asphalt as tree limbs rocked gently in the breeze. Matt shivered involuntarily, but he tried to hide it from Melissa.

Melissa sat back and whispered, as if the other driver could hear, “I told you the police might patrol the park.” Her voice was frantic. “We had better go, Matt.”

“Melissa, it’s not a police car and I have never seen them drive an unmarked Mercedes. That car is expensive. It’s probably just some old guy hiding from his wife. Or maybe the driver stopped to make a phone call. Even if it is the police, we’re consenting adults, so they won’t do anything. Let’s just wait a bit and see if he leaves.”

They used the next few minutes to discuss their future, ever watchful of the other car. The tension in Melissa’s body eased, comforted as she was by Matt’s words. She wasn’t a stunning beauty, but the smile that came readily to her face, and the dimples it created, attracted Matt from the beginning. She found the humor in anything, tonight being an exception. He found that incredibly attractive. The first time they met, when she patched him up in the hospital after a bicycle accident, the smile and her sense of humor drew him like metal to a magnet. She made him laugh by emphatically imagining a curb leaping in front of his bike at the last second. It took his mind off the pain. He noticed her wedding band only after he asked her out for coffee, and she accepted. He wondered if she took it off when she worked, but he never asked. The affair had been ongoing for months.

Her hands ran nervously through her hair as she talked about leaving her husband, but she continually glanced over Matt’s shoulder to see if the dark car had moved. Matt listened as she talked. He had heard it all before, and he didn’t actually believe it. Melissa was too timid to walk out on her husband. She was too afraid of what her husband might do if she left him. But he listened, nodding at the right time, and deliberately, tantalizingly, letting his fingers wander under her skirt.

Melissa stopped him. She said, “Matt, listen to me. I have a plan this time. We will be together. I’m going to leave him.”

Her voice trailed off as a sharp knock on the window startled them. Neither had noticed the man approaching from the black Mercedes. It wasn’t a hand knocking. It was something metallic rapping against the glass that set both their hearts racing. Melissa gasped. Matt turned to peer at the intruder, but a piercing flashlight beam blinded him. He threw one arm up to block the light while he pressed the button to roll down the power window. Nothing happened because he had turned off the car.

It didn’t matter.

The last sight either would see was the flashlight beam and the flash from the barrel of a gun. Melissa died first as the blast from the man’s weapon pierced the glass and the bullet struck her in the forehead. She slumped against the passenger door. Matt died right after as the next bullet entered his heart, interrupting the scream forming in his throat. The gunman shot them each twice more for good measure.

The killer shoved the gun into his waistband and listened to the night as he strode to his car as if nothing had happened. Dogs barked in the distance, disturbed by the sound of the gun. The boisterous teenagers had gone quiet, either trying to identify the noises or running the other way. A smile danced across the man’s lips. He started the car and drove away into the humid Ottawa night.


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About the author

Barry Finlay is the award-winning author of two non-fiction and six fiction published books, His newest, Searching For Truth, introduces the Jake Scott Mystery Series. Barry was featured in the 2012-13 Authors Show’s edition of “50 Great Writers You Should Be Reading.” view profile

Published on September 01, 2021

80000 words

Genre:Mystery & Crime

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