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This book can't decide if it is a love story or a musical tribute to artists and bands. Flips back and forth between the two too often.

Synopsis

What do two cynics do when love strikes, disrupting what they thought were settled, semi-happy lives? Often funny and sometimes poignant, "Probably Lives in Tahiti" explores the tensions between freedom and intimacy, within a backdrop of art, rock-n-roll music, friendship, and corporate ennui,

Probably Lives In Tahiti is about a man, Jim, who meets the woman he desires, Cassie, at the advertising firm where he works. Only problem? Cassie is already in a relationship with Peter. Jim also has visions of being a star in a band, and travels up and down the east coast playing gigs. Cassie and Jim do fall in love, but again, Peter is there.


This book goes back and forth between endless lists of songs and artists, the ups and downs of being on the road and playing gigs in towns, and the relationship between Jim and Cassie. I felt the book never could decide if it wanted to focus on the love story or the music story. I also thought the book spent too much time on background vs. present situations.


Additionally, and this is my opinion, of course, I dislike books that have entire pages written in italics. I find them difficult to read and distracting. I know that it is the writer's style and decision to highlight passages of conversations in that way, but I personally think it takes away from what they are trying to convey.


The title of the book refers to a single line in the text about there being only one love for someone and they probably live 10,000 miles away in Tahiti. While a catchy phrase, I am not sure that summed up the love in this book.


I think the author could edit this book to tighten up some of the background passages, and focus more on developing the relationship between Jim and Cassie.


Also, to my knowledge, there is no University of Maryland Harford County with a basketball team. The closest connection is Harford Community College. I did enjoy reading about places in Maryland, as I am from that area, and many of the locations were familiar to me.


I am not sure if I would read another novel by this author, as this seemed a bit disjointed to me.

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Synopsis

What do two cynics do when love strikes, disrupting what they thought were settled, semi-happy lives? Often funny and sometimes poignant, "Probably Lives in Tahiti" explores the tensions between freedom and intimacy, within a backdrop of art, rock-n-roll music, friendship, and corporate ennui,

At Home With a Cat-Like Dog


It’s 7 a.m. and Cassie is awake, peering at the popcorn ceiling she’s

threatened to replace since she first moved into the house. She could

use another hour of sleep, but after counting backwards from 100 to

zero three times in a row, she knows there’ll be no further slumber.


She sleeps in a white “Topsail Island Is for Lovers” t-shirt and satin

gym shorts that barely cover her bottom. She bought the shorts

innocently online after seeing an ad on Facebook, but later blanched

when she was fed other ads referring to them as “booty shorts” and

touting their use for “pole fitness.”


Cassie stands slowly and looks at herself in the mirror above the

dresser. The only sign of strain is under her eyes, where faint gray

shadows have formed over the last week or so. She tries on a

smile—a tentative one at first, then a full beamer. She looks like she

can pass for happy. After she showers the shadows will go away and

she’ll look 10 years younger, seemingly fresh and ready for the day.

Her vitality isn’t something she has cultivated; it just is, inherited

from her mother, who could put on a good face no matter her

physical or emotional health. Cheers, Mom, Cassie whispers to her

reflection in the mirror, toasting her late mother with an imaginary

champagne flute.


She dries off quickly after her shower, brushes her collar-length

hair, and puts on a loose madras shirt and linen pants. She has a big

event later today—what Peter dubbed The Celebration to End All

Celebrations—but she won’t dress up for it until it’s time to leave

the house. It’s unusually warm for mid-April, and the undersized air

conditioner is already struggling to keep up with the rising

temperature.


Cassie calls for Roxie, knowing that she won’t come running the

way she would for Peter. Roxie regards Cassie as a servant; her only

value is that she can do things the toy poodle can’t do for herself.

Cassie thinks Roxie has the disposition of a cat, in that she doesn’t

register that humans are higher up on nature’s food chain. In Roxie’s

version of history, humans gained the upper hand not by

intelligence, social adaptation, or the ability to reason, but by sheer

physicality.


When Cassie opens the cabinet to get her food, Roxie perks up her

ears—the cutest little things, Cassie has to admit—and pads into the

open kitchen. Roxie looks up at Cassie with a blank expression, not

willing to betray any neediness. Cassie pours the food into a bowl,

fills another bowl with fresh water, and says with exaggerated

sweetness, There you go, you ungrateful little vixen.


Cassie walks downstairs to her basement studio, fires up her iMac

Pro, and checks her email. One of the artists working on the gallery

installation for Al Hanson Motors has sent a brief video of his soonto-

be completed work, the front end of a ’64 Mustang rigged to

simulate the car’s sound and feel. Cassie returns encouraging words

and reminds him of the installation date. There’s also an email from

the gallery’s interior designer, Joanna Paige, with an update on the

wall painting, lighting, and mounting of historical artifacts from the

Al Hanson dealerships.


Cassie lifts herself from the rolling chair in front of the pair of 27-

inch flat screens. She was hoping for an email from Jim, but there’s

been nothing in the past week. Cassie resigns herself to plodding

through the day ahead. She’s nowhere close to her usual carpe diem

self, but this fractional version will have to do.


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About the author

After a 30-year career as an award-winning writer for digital technology companies, R.A. Cramblitt transitioned to fiction. "Probably Lives in Tahiti" is his first novel. "The Parker Chronicles," a 5-star collection of fictional vignettes, is available on Kindle and in paperback through Amazon.com. view profile

Published on February 03, 2022

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70000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Contemporary Fiction

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