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Synopsis

Ten years have passed and he has forgotten her.

But Mirari would still do anything to save her childhood friend from the executioner’s sword.

Meanwhile, Fangbane has spent his life trying to end centuries of social and political hostility. As his fame spreads, brave Knights rally to his cause.

But to truly succeed, Fangbane must have two others: Gaven, the headstrong warrior he helped put on death row, and Mirari, a simple merchant with a past as secretive as her formidable magical ability. Their aid could be the difference between success and failure.

Can Gaven put aside his apathy to fully commit to the alliance?

Will Mirari become a worthy fighter and subdue her desire for revenge?

With the threat of a growing movement of underground vigilantes bent on tipping the system, the Knights must act quickly.

Time is running out to rid the world of evil.

“Welcome to the Knights of the Alliance.”


Knights of the Alliance by Stefanie Chu is an epic fantasy novel filled with a wide array of unique characters, mystery, humor, political intrigue, and magical abilities. I was intrigued by this book upon reading the synopsis—I mean epic fantasy combined with magic, knights, and interesting character dynamics, I was hooked! And, overall, I really enjoyed this book and, knowing that this book is set up as the first in a trilogy, found it to be a solid introduction to the characters and the world and to set the stage nicely for the rest of the books in the series.


The novel promises an epic fantasy world filled with knights and magic and, overall, it delivers. I greatly enjoyed the world of the novel and exploring and traveling through it alongside the characters. In a book filled with various political dynamics based upon the different empires, I liked how Chu made a point of showcasing the similarities and differences between both the land and the people of the world of the novel. I also loved that the book included a map (a must in any epic fantasy book!) as it really helped to ground me in the world and to situate where all of the events were occurring.


In terms of the writing, the story is very easy to read and is written in such a way that it is quite easy to follow despite the epic fantasy world. The descriptions strike a balance between being straightforward and vivid that matches the overall atmosphere of the novel quite nicely and blends nicely with Chu’s fun and engaging dialogue. In this vein, I was greatly surprised by how much humor this book contained, which showed itself strongly through the dialogue between the characters and I really enjoyed it. I liked how Chu managed to balance humor with the heavier and darker political and social aspects of the novel and I definitely found this to be one of the strong suits of both Chu’s writing and the story as a whole.


The one thing that really threw me off with regards to the writing, however, was the shifts in perspective throughout the novel. While I greatly enjoy stories told through multiple perspectives, the various third-person POV switches within the same chapter made it difficult at some points to determine which character we were following, and I feel as though the story would have been more cohesive for me if each chapter was dedicated to a certain character instead of constantly switching several times mid-chapter with no real explanation.


If you know anything about me then you know that I am a person who loves strong, character-driven stories with well-developed characters, and overall, this novel did not disappoint in that regard. One of my favorite parts of this novel would have to be the characters. They are all so unique and have their own hidden depths and histories that are slowly explored and unraveled as the story progresses, making them quite complex and realistic. Likewise, I enjoyed all the magical and kore abilities that the characters possessed and learning more about these powers as the story progressed, especially how these abilities seem to serve as an extension of the characters in some way and showcase a lot about the characters’ personalities and how they choose to wield their powers, particularly when it came to Fangbane, Mirari, and Shiba. Additionally, I greatly enjoyed the various relationships and dynamics that were explored throughout the story between the characters, particularly between Mirari and Gaven as well as Gaven and Fangbane, although I really liked all of the bonds that the novel detailed. Although the novel focuses on a wide variety of characters, including various POVs, the main characters would have to be Mirari, Fangbane, and Gaven, all of whom are interesting and dynamic characters in their own right.


Mirari: Of all of the characters that the novel introduces, Mirari would have to be my favorite. She is such a complex character who undergoes such a transformation over the course of the novel, starting as a lowly merchant just trying to keep her head down and to discover more about the disappearance of her brother into a strong, brave, and dedicated fighter working towards a cause greater than herself and I could not help rooting for her. She likewise has such a unique history that I really wanted to see explored and discussed more, something which I hope is done in the next two books in the trilogy because I feel as though knowing more about Mirari’s past will make her into an even more dynamic character and help to develop a fuller sense of how her past has shaped her into the person that we meet in this story. I do kind of wish that Mirari’s mysterious fire abilities were focused on a bit more, just because that is such an interesting aspect of her character, but I am sure that Chu plans on exploring these more in the next two books. As previously mentioned, I really liked the bonds that Mirari formed throughout the novel, particularly with Gaven, Fangbane, and Neo, and the different aspects of her character that these individual relationships showcased. I am really interested to see where Mirari’s story goes next, especially after the epilogue.


Fangbane: Like Mirari, I really enjoyed Fangbane’s character. He is fighting for such a just cause in creating a group of knights to represent all three empires to work together to solve the problems of these various empires and to create a sense of unity between the three when tensions are high. Likewise, Fangbane is so willing to do whatever it takes to see his vision realized and to keep his dream alive, including attempting to recruit Mirari, a girl with no real fighting experience and only unruly powers that she cannot control, and Gaven, a boy from another empire who he helped to defeat and bring to court. I greatly enjoyed his dedication to the group of people that he brought together and his ability to lead them through thick and thin, always standing strong (and stubborn) despite the odds and never giving in to outside pressures. I was also very intrigued by his mindreading ability and found it to fit his overall character and position as well as serving as a means of conveying information about other characters whose thoughts we are not privy to (either in general or at that particular moment).


Gaven: Despite his headstrong and sort of stoic exterior at the beginning of the novel, I eventually began to develop a great liking for Gaven and his overall character. Like Mirari, Gaven has a lot of different sides to him that are slowly unraveled over the course of the story and showcased through the various characters he interacts with; I particularly enjoyed the relationship that he formed with Mirari and how despite not remembering her from childhood, he slowly began to see her as someone he can trust and who will always have his back. I also found Gaven to undergo an interesting transformation over the course of the novel, especially as he slowly began to enjoy his position as being a part of Fangbane’s group of knights and being the one to teach them. Like with Mirari, however, I really wish that we learned more about Gaven’s past, particularly after he left Mirari and his transformation from that boy into the stoic and strong fighter that we are introduced to in this book.


If there is something besides characters and magic that I enjoy in my stories, it is an element of mystery, which Knights of the Alliance has in spades. The story is filled with various mysteries and secrets, only some of which are fully explored and solved by the novel’s end. The story picks up and scatters mysteries like breadcrumbs and I was really interested in following this trail to the end of the story and beyond, especially with regards to the bigger mysteries that were never solved by the novel’s end. In this vein, Chu did an amazing job with regards to setting up the story two big mysteries already in place—Mirari’s fire abilities (and memory loss after using them) as well as Gaven’s memory loss as to starting the Althaean Siege, both of which piqued my interest from the beginning and, in addition to the other mysteries and dynamic characters, kept me dedicated to finishing the story to try to see these mysteries unraveled. While I was slightly disappointed that some of these mysteries were not fully unraveled by the end of the novel, I feel as though Chu did an excellent job in making me want to pick up the next two books to see the mysteries unfold. 


Overall, Knights of the Alliance is a solid debut that I would recommend to readers who enjoy epic fantasy novels filled with a dynamic cast of characters, elements of magic, and threads of mystery and I am excited to see what is to come in the upcoming installments, especially after that ending!

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Hello! My name is Morgan and I am a twenty-something, aspiring author, reader, and cat lover with a BA in English who amasses favorite books like it's a superpower. I have been reviewing books since 2019, but loving them since I was a kid and I am always in the mood for a new literary adventure.

Synopsis

Ten years have passed and he has forgotten her.

But Mirari would still do anything to save her childhood friend from the executioner’s sword.

Meanwhile, Fangbane has spent his life trying to end centuries of social and political hostility. As his fame spreads, brave Knights rally to his cause.

But to truly succeed, Fangbane must have two others: Gaven, the headstrong warrior he helped put on death row, and Mirari, a simple merchant with a past as secretive as her formidable magical ability. Their aid could be the difference between success and failure.

Can Gaven put aside his apathy to fully commit to the alliance?

Will Mirari become a worthy fighter and subdue her desire for revenge?

With the threat of a growing movement of underground vigilantes bent on tipping the system, the Knights must act quickly.

Time is running out to rid the world of evil.

Prologue

A dozen fighters stood below the ashen sky, weapons bristling as they surrounded a lone warrior. The man and his spear were dripping with blood, but the soldiers circling him knew that the blood was not his own.

I wrinkled my nose. Seeing crimson trickle down his blade brought my attention back to the rancid stench that had paved the boulder field. Even with my mask, the smell was nauseating. It reminded me of how many had fallen during this battle. I couldn’t let their efforts be in vain.

A chilly wind snatched at their cloaks of authority and set their assorted banners snapping like spinnakers in a gale. This alliance of soldiers fought under various insignia, their competing flags telling a story of their own. They were not a single army, but a unified force from different empires in different regions.

And I was the man who had gathered them all together to crush the rebellion led by the gory warrior. This was the endgame.

In my hand, I held a silver spear I rarely used. I could fight if I had to, but strategizing was my forte. And my plan had worked.

The majority of his rebels were crushed or had scattered. Now, he was cornered, alone, facing an entire army. That was not unusual; he was known as the warrior without a partner. But it only made his presence more frightening; it wouldn’t surprise me if he took down the dozens of men before him in less than a minute. The soldiers knew too. Anyone who valued their life wouldn’t dare confront the Valiant Tiger.

This proud fighter had no quit in him. He bellowed and jeered, daring any man to come forward and challenge him.

There were no takers.

To face him. To face death. Were they all cowards?

Seeing the crazed look in his eyes, and the way his chest heaved with labored breaths, I was struck by a surprising certainty.

He’s gone insane.

A babble of thoughts floated around my head, unheard to anyone but me, tinged in varying degrees of anger and confusion.

The madman thinks he’s invincible.

I always knew he was crazed.

The power must’ve gone to his head. Typical Althaean.

My brow furrowed in concentration as I tried to block out the intrusive chatter. At times it was mild enough to ignore if I concentrated hard enough. Other times, it was like being locked in a room with a dozen screaming children throwing tantrums. This was one the latter.

Between all the sentiments and convictions overwhelming me, two people stood out from the rest: the warrior we had surrounded, cloaked in the finest silver armor and blue cape suitable for the highest ranks, and the seemingly fragile young lady that I brought along with me on this campaign.

What made them different? Their minds were blank. I couldn’t hear what they were thinking.

Then, I sensed a change as all those gathered around reacted with surprise, curiosity, and confusion. I soon understood why, as the massed troops parted. The young lady strode forward, toward the open ground that harbored the bloody rebel foe.

As this fearless challenger approached the battleground, the confounded roar of feelings assailed me. Awe. Disbelief. Even shame… For this challenger entering the ring to face the rebel leader was no battle-hardened centurion. No scarred and grizzled myrmidon. She was just a fragile-looking young woman – practically a girl. Not a single one of the fatigued soldiers gaping at this wisp of a thing believed for one moment that she stood a chance.

Except, of course, for me. I didn’t know precisely what powers or abilities she possessed. But whatever force she had inside her, I could perceive it would be terrible to behold. The zeal in her eyes – passionate flares of glowing magenta – told me the same.

Even the heavily muscled deadly rebel, who had proved his lethal prowess a thousand times, looked utterly perplexed at the sight of her. He ripped his spear out from the soldier underneath him and blood splattered onto his polished armor. The bodies that lay around him were like trophies, a prideful display of his strength. But for the girl, the sight of the fallen, acted as fuel, making her raging glare more frightening.

“What is this?” he bellowed. “You miserable cowards send a maiden to do—”

He never finished. Her bloodcurdling scream struck like a wave of force all its own as she charged at him with astonishing speed and a sword in hand. He barely got his spear up in time to block her first slashing attack.

The sound of their dancing blades echoed through the field, drawing the attention of fighters from both sides. The two of them were locked in combat, so intense that they seemed unaware of the host of bodies surrounding them. What was going on in their minds? I hadn’t a clue. Their walls were impenetrable; my mental powers were no match for them.

The woman slashed and parried, her assault driven by an immense rage. Their weapons clashed and swiped with such speed it was all a blur. The warrior waved his hand, commanding the ground below them to shatter and erupt. But the girl danced upon the rising rubble, her feet light as wind as she leveraged the fragmented earth to give herself the advantage of the high-ground. She waved her sword as high as she could, then struck down with the full force of her body.

The impact of their weapons sent high-pitched waves that caused my neck to tingle, and some of the spectators to cower between their arms.

I felt a tug on my arm, followed by the warm embrace of my wife’s tender hands. I had advised her not to come on this dangerous mission, but she insisted. We had gone on every adventure together after all for decades now. There was no battle that couldn’t use the expertise of a fine healer like her.

 “What’s going on?” Starlight yelled, covering her flawless snow white face with her arm. Her rose-colored hair that had always reminded me of thin strands of fairy floss, waved in all directions. I didn’t need to see her worried face to discern the distress in her heart.

I stepped in front of my disoriented wife, not wanting her exposed to the peril of this battle any longer. She was a fearless woman, a fighter who carried more courage than my sorry excuse of a warrior. But something profoundly uncommon, not to mention dangerous was going on, and I couldn’t explain it. Normally, the outcome was clear, predictable. But what we were witnessing here was far from normal, and the clashing forces of these two combatants threw the rules of the ordinary world into unforeseeable chaos.

Despite my absorption in the battle before me, an awareness pushed forth from the back of my mind. Many soldiers on both sides had been severely injured in the battle that took place earlier.

“Take care of the wounded,” I told my wife, reaching into my pocket and handing over a handful of renastōnes to increase her healing capability. She nodded and proceeded to treat bloodied soldiers with the power of kore in the stones.

These probably won’t be enough, I heard her thinking. But even so, I had held two stones back, just in case the fight behind me didn’t end well.

The warrior attacked and defended with all the mastery and strength of a champion. But the girl, who seemed to be without skill or training, fought with a reckless, murderous fury, which seemed fueled by all the devils in Inferna.

Maybe that’s why I wasn’t surprised when I saw the small ball of fire she caressed in her left palm. She appeared confident now and tossed her sword away as if it were just a bother. The reddish flame she wielded was a rare occurrence and she had absolute control over it.

Although I couldn’t read his thoughts, the sudden caution on the warrior’s face spoke volumes. It was clear the domination dynamic had shifted. The girl’s elemental control over fire changed everything.

How unusual, I reflected, to see such overwhelming force coming from a commoner who had never seen a battlefield before. Yet, here she was, more than matched to Althaea’s greatest warrior.

How… fascinating.

A larger flame erupted from her hand, and she charged straight at the warrior, her voice crying out in a valiant roar. The warrior dodged her fiery attack, darting left and right, blocking her hand with his metallic blue spear, handled with a mastery no other could match. The involuntary fear that erupted in him did not affect his combat skills; they remained the best I have ever seen.

The rest of us kept our distance – it would be unwise to go near the flames. We could all feel the heat upon our faces, dispelled by the swirling gusts of high winds blowing from the towering mountain in the backdrop. Small balls of fire splashed loose from the girl’s hand, like sparks popping from a hot fireplace. They bounced across the ground, erupting in small brushfires in the patches of the tall, dry grass in the boulder field.

For once, I was grateful to be wearing the mask I use to cover my face at all times. Both to conceal the shame of my mutilations, and my very identity, hidden since the cruel punishment of my youthful self. Now, it gave me the advantage of being able to tolerate the heat, and see clearly, while everyone else buried their heads in their shirts.

“Fang, we need to do something!” Shiba caught my attention. Along with Neo, his partner and powerful lieutenant, he was anxiously waiting for my command.

Yes, of course. That was the whole reason I was invited here – to lead this motley alliance of troops from Althaea, Minetta, and Valenia to stop the rebellion.

But frankly, my plan was now obsolete. What we were watching made our petty strategies worthless. Our forces, and those of the enemy, were all enthralled with the epic duel raging before us. We were merely spectators, captivated by the champion warrior trying to curb the astonishing girl and her fiery punches without letting up. Her assault continued, setting pockets of the field on fire every so often. Her hits kept the man at bay, but he was still physically stronger, and might just succeed in wearing her uncanny powers down.

But there was something Shiba and Neo could contribute. They were an odd pair to say the least. Lord Shiba Zabato was a powerful region leader, a representative of Minetta. He was a sharp-featured man yet handsome in a roguish way, lean as whipcord with all that sting. His second in command, Neo Xanth, was the strongest brawler of Minetta. Brawlers – I like to think of them as shaved bears – trained and worked hard to turn themselves into massive machines of human muscle. Despite the rigorous training, Neo was a gentle sort of giant, an intelligent, witty, kind, caring fellow who could grab a man around the throat and simply squeeze to pop his head off like a champagne cork.

The two of them were partners sealed by the Paragon’s Conduct. It made them twice as dangerous, not to mention the immense reservoir of kore they possessed.Everyone has a little bit of spiritual energy, a flame of life. But for some, it was a much deeper pool of strength, the might behind their gift. It took years to develop and control it, and those who were lucky enough to be born with high kore capacity became fighters to be feared.

A section of grass ignited in front of me. I put it out with a stamp of my foot. Yes, it would be unwise to go near. The possibility of potential collateral damage was too significant.

“Neo,” I said, “Can you focus your kore to create a barrier around them?”

“I could generate a ward, like a domed force field, to contain them. But it won’t stop them from fighting.”

“At least it will confine the damage to only them. Do it.”

I turned to Lord Shiba. “Your shadow form… Can you try to hold Gaven in place, so she can land a punch?”

“With pleasure.” Shiba clapped his hands together, pressed his soles to the ground, and focused intensely on the skirmish in front of him. A dark shadow formed underneath him, seeming to take on a life of its own. The dark, sinister shape quickly slithered into the fight.

As it closed in, Neo slammed his fist on the ground. A pulse of energy vibrated through the earth, creating ripples and bending the air. A transparent dome shimmered into existence, forming a clear barrier that enclosed the two fighters. Shiba’s shadow creature made its way inside the area just before the dome was sealed.

Within seconds, the atmosphere cooled down – the heat from the girl’s otherworldly flames was contained within the barrier. Still locked in combat, the fighters were completely oblivious to the force field now locking them.

As Gaven, the warrior, tried an advance with his spear, the shadow rose and seized his ankles. Gaven strained to break free, but the shadow held his feet like steel shackles. He lost his balance in the struggle and pitched to the ground. Unable to move his legs, he could no longer dodge the girl’s fierce strikes.

She showed no restraint. Her arms spread wide as she let the flames erupt, hitting the sides of the dome and spreading over its curved surface until the entire dome was completely enveloped in flames. As the blasting fire grew stronger, we could no longer see inside. The half globe appeared to be nothing but a giant ball of fire from the outside.

“Fangbane, sir?” Neo said, his voice trembling from the effort of holding the barrier intact. The blaze was pushing hard against it, expanding the heated air, the mounting pressure straining Neo to the limit of his strength to contain it. He held fast by force of will, but he was more concerned about what was going on inside.

“They’re going to suffocate in there!”

“No they won’t,” said Shiba, with his typical humor edged in cruelty. “They’ll be roasted alive long before that.”

“Hold it steady,” I instructed. All around me, a garbling wave of skeptical thoughts started to seep into my subconscious making me wonder if that was the wisest choice.

“Fang?” Suzan yelled from the other side, challenging my judgment. I’m not ready to lose two more people.

I know, my brain answered, even though she wouldn’t hear me.

“Hold it,” I said again with confidence, having made up my mind. I could sense the fear boiling around me. For all I knew, they were right. Still, Neo held fast. They trusted me. The roaring flames grew deafening, pulsing against the barrier as the heat and pressure continued to climb.

The dome shattered when the weight of the fire overpowered it. A wave of smoke blew past us. Some tried to cover their faces, and we all tried to not inhale the clouds of smoke and ash. People began to sputter, coughing and choking on the fumes.

Is it over?       

There’s no way they survived that.

Roasted them like an oven, I’ll wager.

Dire and fatal predictions piled up inside my head as the crowd foresaw certain death. Nothing was visible in the thick black smoke.

I knew the crowd was wrong for I sensed a miracle out of what appeared to be a definite tragedy.

And though I still couldn’t see anything behind the dark smoke, somehow the emotions of the two fighters – pain, confusion, bewilderment – broke free, rushing into my mind, proving they were alive. As the smoke thinned, I could make out the two figures kneeling, facing each other, heads bowed, not making eye contact, and gasping for breath. They were caked in soot and dirt. But somehow the inferno had not burned them to a crisp as all had expected.

The lady rose to her feet, standing tall, gazing down at the man she had just defeated. She blinked rapidly in a daze, stupefied by the destruction from her fireballs. She blanched, looking at her hands in a panic. Incredibly, despite the struggle, she showed not a single scratch.

A jumbled trail of her thoughts bubbled to the surface; I could experience her disorientation and uncertainty as if it was happening to me.

I turned my attention to the warrior, who seemed totally wrung out in comparison. His limbs were shaking, and he was covered in cuts and bruises. The only similarity was in their expression of equal confusion. Regaining the ability to read his thoughts put me at ease.

The battle was over. He tried to rise on one knee, but fell back down immediately. The young woman gasped seeing him fall over. She took one step forward to help him but retracted just as quickly. Her thoughts told me she was afraid, afraid of the damage she had just caused, and afraid that she was still not in control.

Memories of similar instances played out in her mind.

I read every second of it.

How fascinating. In all my years, I’d never met someone with her… experiences.

So that’s why they call you Miss Miracle.

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Born and raised in Northern California, Stefanie is a media specialist who loves birds, putting lemon on everything, and trying all things creative. She has lived and studied throughout Asia and Europe, carrying a Masters in Business and BA in Film. view profile

Published on October 19, 2021

110000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Epic Fantasy

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