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In this collection of fourteen short stories in three parts, Miki Lentin examines middle age, relationships, memories, and doing good deeds

Synopsis

Death, anxiety, masculinity, family and children, social good and rocks. All things that touch the life of a middle-aged man. In these stories, written over the past two years, Miki Lentin goes in search of a rock with his child in Ireland, travels to Istanbul with his wife while sleep-deprived, recounts memories of working and growing up in Dublin and explores what it means to do good in society today. All told with Lentin's minimalist tone, Inner Core portrays his life on the edge.

“Miki Lentin takes linear time and smashes it to pieces, reassembling the shards as narrative mosaics. There is beauty, sadness, love, loss in the fragments but you need to stand back and take it all in to appreciate the bigger picture.” Lynda Clark, author of the short story collection Dreaming in Quantum and Beyond Kidding.

"Miki's stories about working with refugees are sensitively observed and moving - and they will enrich your understanding of an ethically complex subject." Daniel Trilling, journalist and author of Lights in the Distance and Bloody Nasty People.

Generally, there are two kinds of short story collections. One is a catchall anthology encompassing various styles and subjects that represent the breadth of an author’s works. The other selectively gathers stories on particular themes and presents them as an integrated statement. Londoner Miki Lentin’s collection, “Inner Core,” is somewhere in between.


Part One features main characters confounded by the familiar, white male mid-life trials of angst, anger, and bewilderment. Jerry Ryan, who explicitly appears in three of the stories, stifles his antisocial impulses, although they manifest in odd ways – in “Efflorescence,” he succumbs to temptation to key a total stranger’s car, and in “Varifocals” he embarrasses his wife by standing during dinner and serenading a restaurant with, “Oooohooo, Mercy Me.”


The subject of Part Two – the experience of working to help resettle refugees – is more topical and distinctive.  It contains five stories, all from the perspective of a service provider, such as a host or a consultant. Four are in the first person and the last, “Persepolis,” revisits Jerry, who here entertains the idea of smuggling a refugee into the country.


Part Three contains just three stories loosely dealing with memories of youth and coming of age. Perhaps the strongest piece in the collection, “Butter Dish,” envisions the family dinner as a two-act play.


Stylistically, Lentin’s prose is direct and compact. What he lacks in embellishment he compensates for with vivid sensory description. For example, the following describes Jerry’s car keying episode:


“The sky is now clear. Deathly dark. An orange hue from the streetlights on the pavements. Jerry ups his pace, feeling for the key to his office drawer, gripping the tip between his first finger and thumb, feeling the cut edges on his cuticles. There. That one. A Ford Fiesta…”


Most stories depict single incidents and take place in the present, which evoke a sense of immediacy but less so depth. Apart from the Jerry stories, they are written in first person by an unnamed narrator (who may in fact be Jerry). Either way, the transitions can feel gratuituous.


My biggest criticism is that the three parts are too short to depict the nuances of their subject matter and do not interact organically. Despite decades of experience in communications, Lentin is a relative newcomer to fiction. A more cohesive and satisfying collection perhaps awaits a time when he has a larger body of work.


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Gregg Sapp is author of the “Holidazed” satires. To date, six titles have been released: “Halloween from the Other Side,” “The Christmas Donut Revolution,” “Upside Down Independence Day,” “Murder by Valentine Candy," "Thanksgiving Thanksgotten Thanksgone," and the latest, "New Year's Eve, 1999."

Synopsis

Death, anxiety, masculinity, family and children, social good and rocks. All things that touch the life of a middle-aged man. In these stories, written over the past two years, Miki Lentin goes in search of a rock with his child in Ireland, travels to Istanbul with his wife while sleep-deprived, recounts memories of working and growing up in Dublin and explores what it means to do good in society today. All told with Lentin's minimalist tone, Inner Core portrays his life on the edge.

“Miki Lentin takes linear time and smashes it to pieces, reassembling the shards as narrative mosaics. There is beauty, sadness, love, loss in the fragments but you need to stand back and take it all in to appreciate the bigger picture.” Lynda Clark, author of the short story collection Dreaming in Quantum and Beyond Kidding.

"Miki's stories about working with refugees are sensitively observed and moving - and they will enrich your understanding of an ethically complex subject." Daniel Trilling, journalist and author of Lights in the Distance and Bloody Nasty People.

Inner Core


I never admitted it to my wife M, but I really wanted the boy with the toothy grin to pull the trigger and shoot the French woman who was standing a few steps from us. I had nothing against her, I didn’t want her to die. But at that moment, I wanted everything to pause, so I could hear the crack of a gun blast, smell the gunpowder, and see if I could follow the bullet spinning through the air. I even considered what it would be like to lick the spattered blood from my face, wipe M’s jacket down, and go for dinner on the Asian side of Istanbul, just as we’d planned.

 

Lying awake back home in Dublin a few months later, I pondered this, as images of that evening flickered in my mind. Dizzy, my breath shallow, the small of my back tight, I fumbled in the dark for my watch, just like I did every night, knocking my hand into a book and a glass of water. It wasn’t there, of course it wasn’t.

I was sure that my watch had been stolen from our hotel room in Istanbul, on the last day of a city break M and I had taken. I knew that I’d wound the silver winder, which kept the mechanism faintly ticking just before I’d gone to bed. I knew that I’d placed it by the side of my bed, the strap doubled over, so I could see the watch face. I knew that I’d reached for it first thing in the morning, but for some reason hadn’t put it on. I knew after breakfast that it was gone.

“My watch, have you seen it?” I’d yelled, my heart palpitating with panic.

“What?” she’d shouted from the shower. “Didn’t you leave it by the bed?”

I spent what seemed like hours tossing clothes, opening cupboard doors, rummaging in bags, chucking sofa cushions, and retracing my steps around the hotel. While I searched, I kept touching my wrist, as if I could still feel the silver strap pinching the hairs on my arm.

It had been my father’s Tissot, the watch my mother had placed on my wrist the day after he’d died. The hotel manager shrugged when I suggested that it might have been stolen. I didn’t want to spoil M’s birthday trip, and at some stage she held me tight and told me to stop, “just stop bloody looking.” Reluctantly, I called the search off. “It’s only a watch, these things are replaceable,” I’d said, trying to convince myself.

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Deirdre MacLeodMiki speaks of daily life with poignant insight and depth of emotion. His description of things as mundane as picking up pebbles from the beach with your child evokes memories and feelings long since forgotten, or buried. My only complaint about this book is that I wanted more.
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Miki Lentin@deirdremacleod Thanks Deirdre for your wonderful review. I'm really touched! I'll get writing then... :)
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Miki LentinSome reviews to whet appetities - “Great opening paragraph. Narrative slides effectively in and out of time, and the voice feels authentic,” about story Inner Core. David Shields, author of Reality Hunger, The Thing About Life Is That One Day You’ll Be Dead and The Trouble With Men.
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Miki LentinAnother one here from Amazon... These stories are honestly amazing. We dive deeply into a man’s mind and soul. The narrator takes us into the most details of his life, into the intimacy of his innermost issues. We think with him about his personal matters, worry with him about his family. Feel his heartbeats, anxious with him about illness or just little things through our daily life in this world of now. But then he would add just an extra layer of black humour to loosen the atmosphere. Miki is so skilful in rushing us into some details that I sometimes felt the breath of passers-by on a crowded street. And all that without being much descriptive. It’s a truly pleasant read, even when it’s very sad. When you start reading one of the stories, you wouldn’t be able to put it down easily. You’re caught from the start. You’re in there, gripped. They are intriguing stories, intimate, thought-provoking, at times unsettling, and most of the time funny.
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About the author

Miki Lentin completed an MA in Creative Writing at Birkbeck in 2020 and was a finalist in the 2020 Irish Novel Fair for his first book Winter Sun. He has been placed in competitions: Fish Publishing and Leicester Writers and has been published in Litro, Storgy, Story Radio, MIR amongst others. view profile

Published on April 27, 2022

Published by Afsana Press

40000 words

Genre:Short Story

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