Ink & Ember is a delightfully illustrated poetry collection that dives into the author's experiences of grief, loss, heartbreak, and her journey of discovery to self-love and healing.
Jessie Nguyen has a great awareness of the way language in poetry works and how to share emotions through poetry. Through the vulnerability of her words, Nguyen is unafraid to bare her soul for all to see. I love the way Nguyen weaves the story of how even though it seems that hope is lost and like in a fire you only have the embers, you can continue to persist in life and burn brightly even though you're going through a difficult time. I love the ultimate message of resilience in Nguyen's poetry.
I have to say that some of the rhymes sound forced at times (examples include think/stink, day/way) though this is mainly applicable in the first half of the collection. As a poet myself I used to do that too - I would put a perfect rhyme in every two lines. However, I learned that rhyming all the time can come off as forced and jarring from the emotion of the poem. Like with Dr. Seuss, we love Dr. Seuss for the rhymes and storytelling (Sam I Am, Cat in the Hat) but not necessarily for the emotion. In a collection such as Ink & Ember, I feel the emotions of grief and heartbreak are the centerpiece, and for these emotions to shine I think there could be less perfect rhyming. I do see off-rhyming and that’s my personal favorite, when two words sound or look similar but aren’t exact rhymes like "mind" and "time" are more subtle off-rhymes but still leave room for the emotion to come through to the reader.
Some of my favorite lines from this collection include, "I'm a writer, I pour my heart onto paper," "if only, instead of blood, they sucked out the pain," "you know it's my first time too-being a daughter," "half-demon wing frowns, skinny bone, lost in night," "Pray for the best-but the damage is done," and "I must let this love decompose."
As mentioned previously, lines like these show a great awareness of rhythm, imagery, and rhyme by the author. I love some of the endings of the poems which lead the reader to further think and ponder about how the words could apply to themselves.
If you enjoy the works of Rupi Kaur and Bridgett Devoue, you'll love the intimate tones of Ink & Ember, where it feels like a friend is speaking to you in verse.
Congratulations to Jessie Nguyen for this newly released collection, and all the best for works in the future, cheers to that Oscar you dream of winning!