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A fascinating concept of a story - just likely not for me. Worth a try for those who are thriller fans!

Synopsis

A tropical island version of Squid Game, in which the main characters become involved in deadly and very bloody experiences with wealthy heart patients who urgently need heart transplants. If Squid Game were to be played out on a tropical island, Hearts for Sale would tell that story because it rivals the horror of any real life organ harvesting program. A fictional revelation that lifts the lid on the scandals now playing out globally, as thousands of invalids, political dissidents and prisoners are paid to give up vital organs, especially their hearts. It uncovers the perverse secrets of the Piper family, wealthy Bostonians driven by greed, and the Krian family, native to the island driven by revenge, who suffer a band of headhunters to roam the island taking trophy heads at will. Wild pigs that have escaped from an experiment designed to provide cheap organ transplants, evolve into dangerous mutants, who turn on their captors as bloody mayhem rules.

Hearts for Sale is a piece of thriller fiction exploring an organ harvesting program on a remote island. What appears to be a legitimate and verified organisation on the cover turns out to be a corrupt program, resulting in thousands of individuals from invalids to prisoners donating their vital organs. There are many damning secrets yet to unfold and the consequences are beyond comprehension.

 

The author should be credited for the original idea of the book. I found the overall synopsis and idea to be very intriguing. The prologue was very well written and had me as a reader hooked. The structure of the book was overall concise and well thought out. I argue that shorter chapters, such as the ones in this book, make a story a lot easier to digest. Sometimes the longer the chapter, the more daunting it is to progress with the story. A lot of the chapter endings in this story ended strongly, encouraging me to read more.

 

However, I am not certain this was really the right book for me. Although I found the concept of the book to be strong, the execution of the story was weaker. Unfortunately, there were big patches in the book where I was struggling to stay fully engaged. I think this book simply needed a stronger focus and a tidier deliverance of dialogue, for example. I didn’t feel any attachment or interest in any of the characters which makes it a lot harder to keep reading. There wasn’t sufficient character development for any of the characters.

 

As this book started off so strongly, I have no doubt that the author has a lot of potential in the thriller genre. Nonetheless, in giving an honest review, this book just didn’t do it for me. If you are interested in thrillers, it may be worth trying out this book for yourself and seeing what you think.

Reviewed by
Jemima Scott

Synopsis

A tropical island version of Squid Game, in which the main characters become involved in deadly and very bloody experiences with wealthy heart patients who urgently need heart transplants. If Squid Game were to be played out on a tropical island, Hearts for Sale would tell that story because it rivals the horror of any real life organ harvesting program. A fictional revelation that lifts the lid on the scandals now playing out globally, as thousands of invalids, political dissidents and prisoners are paid to give up vital organs, especially their hearts. It uncovers the perverse secrets of the Piper family, wealthy Bostonians driven by greed, and the Krian family, native to the island driven by revenge, who suffer a band of headhunters to roam the island taking trophy heads at will. Wild pigs that have escaped from an experiment designed to provide cheap organ transplants, evolve into dangerous mutants, who turn on their captors as bloody mayhem rules.

Garrison Campbell had spent his whole life looking forward to this moment. He stood in a clearing, sweating, bare-chested, hatless and bloody, his work finished for the day. He still held in his hand a slick, heavy parang, a bush knife made from the leaf of a car spring by a native ironmonger in Micronesia. Honed to the sharpness of a razor, it was a formidable weapon. As he reached for a plastic water bottle to douse his blood-smeared, sweaty chest, he heard a rustling of leaves and bushes at the edge of the forest.

“You son of a bitch!” said a female voice. He turned and stared at a young woman. Her white face and her short, dark, wild-looking hair startled him.  Her tossed hair was sprinkled with bits of twigs and leaves.  

She was holding something at her waist that looked like an assault machine pistol with a wire-frame stock, a mean-looking weapon.

“Put it down!” she said in a loud but quavering voice.

He looked around to see if she was talking to someone else, but they were alone in the quiet, steamy clearing. The only sound came from the incessant buzzing and droning of the insects and the chirping of the tree frogs in the nearby forest.

 “I said, drop the knife!”

“I can’t believe it,” he said.  “An insane American female in the middle of nowhere.”

“You filthy animal,” she screamed and flipped something that looked like a safety on the weapon before she aimed it at his stomach. When she did that, the smirk vanished from his face.

“Look, lady...” he began.

“How can you stand there after doing something like that!”

“I don’t know what the hell you’re talking about. But, to be on the safe side, see,” he dropped the heavy knife, raised his hands high and stepped back. “I’m not looking for trouble.”

“You bastard, where is he?”

He was at a loss to know how to respond, he had thought this was a joke, or a mistake, but he realized she was dead serious. Her face, white as a sheet, was smeared with dirt and stained with tears.

He had briefly thought about distracting her and knocking the weapon from her hands, but her eyes held him motionless, a rock-steady gaze that told him she would kill him if he moved an inch.

He?” he asked, playing for time. “You mean Prof. Ali or the Captain?”

“You know who I mean,” she said in a trembling, hate-filled voice. She had not calmed one iota since bursting through the bush to confront him. She seemed to take his obvious confusion as confirmation of his guilt rather than signifying his innocence.

“You’ve hidden his carcass,” she concluded, and raised the weapon to eye level as she sighted straight down the barrel at a spot between his eyes. Her finger wrapped around the trigger as she tightened her grip and he felt a large bead of perspiration trickle down the inside of his thigh. His knees began to shiver as the blood and sweat that covered his arms and chest dried and a chill swept over him. He felt completely helpless, he could see no way out. She was going to execute him on the spot.

“Jesus, lady,” he said in desperation, as he tried to resolve himself to the thought of death but could think of nothing except her blue eyes.  Here he was, Garrison Campbell, a grown man, someone who had faced many other difficulties during a very active life, all of which he had obviously somehow survived, but now had come to the end of the line. At this point he thought of dropping to his knees and begging, but he couldn’t do it. Something to do with my Scots’ heritage, he thought, so he stood there and said, “If you’re going to do it, do it quick!”

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Born and schooled in Rhode Island, further educated in the ‘60’s in Berkeley California, and traveled extensively. The Washington Post said he looks and sounds like he could have walked right out of a Graham Greene novel. Lives and works in McLean, Virginia. President of the Bent Twig Society. view profile

Published on November 30, 2021

80000 words

Genre:Thriller & Suspense

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