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Our world is a magnificently strange place. - Geo written by Topher Allen

Synopsis

Golem’s Hollow, the crystal city. For a rock like Geo, the beautifully familiar spires are the perfect place to be. They’re the only place to be. But what lies beyond the underground metropolis?

Geo always had questions, and ready or not, this is his chance for answers. Things didn’t go quite as planned, now he and his friends are stranded in a distant wilderness. It’s the adventure he always wanted. But survival is not guaranteed. Bizarre creatures roam these endless wilds dotted with odd abandoned structures. What else is going on out here? Why does no one else dare to ask?

Unknown worlds are rarely safe and never predictable.

Geodore Pebblerock is just an ordinary pink boxy crystalline rock with a square body and purple octagonal eyes. He and his stalagmite dog Spike, complete with big floppy ears, live in the crystal city of Golem's Hollow. He goes to work and like most of us struggles to not be late. But in his heart he dreams. He dreams of life outside of Golem's Hollow. There must be more than life than just his little pink house with its two octagonal windows. He even carries around a photo of a mountain top that he one day wants to climb. At the bottom of this photo he has written Don't Stop Dreaming. Day after day he visualizes this summit. He just knows that a pale amber sun and an endless golden sky await him. However, deep in his heart he also knows that, "You won't find many adventures if you hide in the shadows all day."


So, one day he and his friends including the beautiful Selwyn go on a journey. But you know what they say "Be careful what you wish for." Geo finds more than he bargains for when he encounters gigantic black salamanders with slimy bodies and horrifying beasts with fur and fangs. Before all is said and done Geo's going to need all the help he can get!


I so enjoyed reading about the adventures of Geo in Geo by Topher Allen. Geo is the ultimate dreamer. He has a wonderful imagination and uses visualization techniques to achieve his goals. His visualization is so amazing that he can feel the wind in his hair. What a great gift to have in this day and age of Disney Plus and Netflix. It's nice to read a book that encourages children (and adults) to use their gift of imagination. One of the several things that I really love about this book are the author's descriptions of the rock 'people' themselves. Adrian is described as a blue-green rock like creature. She's several feet tall, has small black crystals for eyes, and sea foam colored hair. I like reading about their daily lives as well. When Allen mentions that Geo bathes in blistering magma and a constant stream of lava. What else would a rock bathe in? And I very much like the anthropomorphisms constantly used throughout the book. One passage reads: A single grassy hill waits for daylight. Or another that says: The edge of sunrise creeps down the slope.


I give Geo by Topher Allen 5 out of 5 stars for encouraging readers to visualize, visualize, visualize what they want and to never stop dreaming. I also appreciate the fact that the author sneaks science and geology lessons into his delightful story when we're not looking (LOL). Geo is written for middle graders but it's beneficial for all ages.


So, what would you do or accomplish if fear was no longer pulling your strings?

Reviewed by
Wymanette Castaneda

Synopsis

Golem’s Hollow, the crystal city. For a rock like Geo, the beautifully familiar spires are the perfect place to be. They’re the only place to be. But what lies beyond the underground metropolis?

Geo always had questions, and ready or not, this is his chance for answers. Things didn’t go quite as planned, now he and his friends are stranded in a distant wilderness. It’s the adventure he always wanted. But survival is not guaranteed. Bizarre creatures roam these endless wilds dotted with odd abandoned structures. What else is going on out here? Why does no one else dare to ask?

Unknown worlds are rarely safe and never predictable.

Thunderstruck

“You’re here for an adventure, right?”

A hidden voice cuts the chilly early-morning air in a forest of ancient trees so tall you can barely see the tops.

“That’s what you wanted, isn’t it?”

The voice approaches a narrow clearing in the forest. At the far end, a single grassy hill waits for daylight. A ray of weary sun breaks over the top of the soaring canopies and skims the top of the hill. The edge of sunrise creeps down the slope.

“Being scared won’t do you much good.”

A rocklike creature steps out of the endless shadow of the great forest. She stops at the edge of the clearing, showing herself to be a blue-green crystal several feet tall, with many tiny facets and smaller black crystals for eyes. On her head, a patch of seafoam-colored hair has been shaped into a short, functional hairdo. With a huff, she adjusts the strap of her canvas backpack. On the top of it, a stitched patch hangs on by a thread:

 

NEW FRONTIER EXPEDITION

Team One

 

A second voice calls to her from the forest.

“Hey, Adrian, what’d you say?”

“All I’m saying, Robert, is that you won’t find many adventures if you just hide in the shadows all day,” Adrian answers. “Mr. Noble won’t like that.”

A second rocklike creature emerges from the darkness‍—a slender copper-colored glob of metal several feet tall with thin legs and shaky knees. As he enters the clearing, his chocolate-brown crystal eyes stay locked on Adrian a few steps ahead.

“So, is this the spot?” Robert asks her.

“I’m not sure. I’m just taking notes today,” Adrian huffs. “Normally, I’d help plan the routes too. But today, since the team split into a bunch of smaller groups, I’ve been left in the dark on a lot of things.” Without another word, she begins to scrawl away with a quill and paper.

A thunderous whisper rumbles through the air behind them.

“This is the spot.”

Robert turns around and squints through the shadows at a huge broad-shouldered figure made of polished blue stone, standing twice as tall as him and Adrian.

The figure takes a step toward the light.

A pair of golden eyes pierces the darkness.

Another step.

Veins of brilliant gold reflect the sun like living lightning on his arms and face.

“You know where we’re going, Warren?” Adrian asks the figure.

“I came up here to scope things out over the weekend. For Mr. Noble. Clearing looks safe, but lots of unknowns on the far side,” Warren says in the same powerful whisper. “Whatever happens, just keep taking notes.”

He steps completely out of the shadows, revealing his dark, neatly parted hair and thick black beard. In the early light, a striking red-and-black flannel shirt barely holds together across his huge chest.

An ID badge hangs from his collar:

 

Warren Slater

Expedition Lead

 

“We’ll cut straight through the field. From there, it’s anyone’s guess. Stay in the light whenever you can. Stay where you can be seen,” he explains. “Oh. And one last thing.”

He holds up a few steel hard hats.

“Sorry. Noble’s orders,” he says.

Robert hurries to keep up with the now-silent Warren heading off into the clearing. Keeping close, he matches Warren step for step as they follow the creeping daylight across the grassy plain, the ground itself trembling under his leader’s hefty boots.

“All right, this is going to be the most dangerous part of the whole trip,” Warren says, stopping at the edge of the forest at the far end of the clearing. “Not a lot of space. Not a lot of light this time of day. We need to move quick if we want to make our target by nightfall. You picked quite a day for your first outing, Robert.”

“You sure this is safe?” Robert asks.

“It’s about as safe as anything else we do out here,” Adrian says.

Warren throws Robert a subtle nod before vanishing into the thick late-spring vegetation choking the space between the trees. Not a second later, Adrian does the same.

Robert gulps hard and jumps in after them, the brush growing thicker with every step. After a few minutes, the light around him disappears almost completely, leaving only a handful of beams streaking down through the canopy high above.

He pushes through branch after branch, looking for a brief glimmer of living lightning to guide him along.

Nothing.

He listens for Warren’s booming footsteps. “All right, where’d they go?” he mutters to himself.

A low huff rolls across the ground a few feet to his left.

He freezes.

Something rustles the bushes. Something big.

Robert takes a single step. The supplies in his canvas backpack shift around.

A huge horrifying beast explodes at him, driving him hard into the dirt.

“What is it?! What is it?!” Robert screams, pinned face down.

A set of claws, four inches long, scratch at his waist. They take him under the arm and toss him several feet into the air.

He lands on his back, staring up at a mass of dark black fur and shining yellow-white fangs.

The beast pushes him across the ground with a stubby, rounded snout.

He sees two stripes of white fur crossing in an X between its eyes.

Robert makes a fist and aims for the center of the X.

The beast smacks his arm away and crushes it down into a patch of rocky ground beneath him. His elbow catches on a sharp edge and begins to bend in a way that it shouldn’t.

He groans in pain.

Robert squirms and tries not to think about his arm snapping back the wrong way, or worse.

Thump.

A second huge creature tackles the beast back into the overgrowth.

Robert flies to his feet.

A flash of living lightning shines through the thrashing brush.

“Warren!” he shouts. “What are you doing?”

Adrian strolls over. “You still in one piece?” she asks Robert, her face buried in her notes.

“Wh-what?” he stutters.

She points at the ground.

Robert sees his hard hat at his feet, smashed to pieces atop another sharp rock sticking out of the dirt.

“You still alive? That thing could have cracked you in half,” she says, still not looking up from her notes. “Almost broke your arm clean off.”

The brush cracks and shakes from the fury of two wrestling giants.

“What are you doing?! He needs help!” Robert snaps.

“No, he doesn’t,” she says, her quill going a mile a minute across her paper.

Thunk.

The forest goes silent and still.

Thunk.

Something heavy crashes to the ground.

Hearty snoring shakes the leaves.

Warren creeps out of the overgrowth with barely a scratch on him. “You all right?” he asks Robert.

“Told you he didn’t need help,” Adrian adds.

“Wh-what’d you say?” Robert stutters.

“You okay? Are you in one piece?” Warren asks.

Robert checks himself over. “I’m good. I’m good,” he says.

Adrian cuts in again. “Warren’s got a nickname for a reason. He’s the Man Of Roar‍—‍”

“Ade, go on ahead. We’ll catch up in a minute. And make some noise. No more keeping quiet in here, not with all this growth on the branches,” Warren tells her before looking down at Robert. “I’m sorry about that. I’ll make sure to stay close from now on.”

“I’m all right. I’m good to go,” Robert says.

“Look at your legs,” Warren tells him.

Robert glances down to find his knees shaking uncontrollably.

“I’d be worried if you weren’t rattled right now,” Warren says. “You understand what could happen. Not just what does happen. That’s why you’re out here.”

Warren drops to one knee and looks Robert in the eye.

“This isn’t a normal job. And it isn’t easy,” Warren tells him. “Everybody you know is counting on you. On us. The Big Man is counting on us. This is his vision. We’re making a new life up here for everybody back underground. You and I are making it happen.”

Warren stands up. “Ade, what time is it?”

“5:37 a.m.,” Adrian says from up ahead.

“All right, we’re running a little late from all the excitement,” Warren says. “Let’s move. The other groups will be waiting for us.”

“Yes, sir,” Robert says, getting control of himself.

A twig snaps in the distance.

Warren stands up. “There’s something else following us.”

Warren’s gigantic dark-blue hand pats Robert on the shoulder. He fights to stay upright against the impact.

“We won’t always know what we’re getting into. Place is called the New Frontier for a reason. And there’ll be plenty more days like today. But we’re tough. The future’s on us. We’ll get it done.”



Chapter 2- Smoke and Mirrors


In a tiny stone bedroom far below the earth, a gray stone nightstand sits beside a heap of dirt cobbled together into the shape of a bed.

The gray stone walls begin to rumble and groan. The dirt heap shifts. A pink crystalline hand emerges from it.

Clumps of dirt roll onto the floor as something a foot or two across rolls around just below the surface. A boxy pink young adult crystal sits up and yawns. He stretches two rather thin arms, each one anchored to the center of either side of his square body. On the front surface of the crystal, two purple octagonal eyes come to life beneath a handful of narrow crystals shooting straight up from the center of his head.

“Time to get going, Geo,” he says to himself, his eyes half open.

He turns to an alarm clock on the bedside table.

4:29 a.m.

The heap of dirt calls out to him.

He closes his eyes and lies back down.

The clock ticks.

4:30 a.m.

A hideous alarm goes off, and a cloud of black smoke bursts from the clock.

The smoke burns his eyes.

Geo hits the snooze button and buries himself again, leaving the few thin crystals atop his head poking through the dirt. At the bottom of the pile, a pair of thin pink legs sticks out onto the floor.

“Five more minutes. . . .”

A streak of light breaks through a window on the far side of the bedroom. Geo peeks out of the dirt and checks the clock.

4:57 a.m.

“Still enough time. I can still be up there before Warren and the others if I hustle,” he says to himself.


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Timothy FayCool concept. Congrats on your launch!
about 3 years ago
Topher AllenHard to believe launch day is finally here. Big thanks to everyone at Reedsy for the support!
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about 3 years ago
Adrija DasGreat one, loved it. I'll shortly be writing the review, and congrats on your launch.
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about 3 years ago
Topher Allen@adrijadas So glad to hear you liked it! Whenever you get around to writing the review would you be able to also post it on Amazon? It would be an immense help, but I absolutely understand that not everybody is able to do so. Either way, thanks for reading!
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about 3 years ago
Allen Redwing@topherallen congrats! Loves like this would make a great animation movie!
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About the author

Topher Allen is the author of the upcoming adventure novel Geo. A technical writer and engineer, he has spent years blending the creativity of scientific innovation and written word. His upcoming novel was borne out of a desire to create art from unlikely sources like rocks, physics, and biology. view profile

Published on January 29, 2022

60000 words

Worked with a Reedsy professional 🏆

Genre:Middle Grade

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