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Quite an interesting perspective on death and what the afterlife could be like.

Synopsis

Wilder is an 18-year-old girl who finds herself in St. David's, the local cemetery in her small country town. When she meets a young girl who's been at St. David's for 200 years, she is shown a secret passage to another world. Wilder longs for the life that was taken from her, but each time she tries to leave St. David's without her new friend, she finds herself in a terrifying place.

Will she acquire the skills necessary to unlock the secrets to the afterlife before it's too late?

Escape From St. David’s is the story of a wild girl known as Wylder who unexpectedly and instantly dies at the young age of eighteen in a car accident and wakes up to find herself trapped in the cemetery of St. David’s along with all those who’ve been buried there. Despite the other souls being generally kind and welcoming, Wylder can’t help but mourn the life she could’ve had and feels was stolen from her, but she quickly realizes that being dead isn’t the ultimate end many think it to be. Even in the afterlife, there are misunderstandings, darkness, secrets, superstitions, and souls who are willing to do anything to keep things the way they are.


Several characters try to lead the story that the reader would be excused midway to lose track of who the main character is as she becomes invisible to us when she goes missing and we’re left in the hands of side characters who are as clueless as us. Rather than adding suspense to the story, it just makes it drag and feel all over the place. The revelations in the story are dropped onto the readers as retold stories or instructions rather than allowing the readers to observe them or realize them on their own.


While the story does offer a unique and fresh perspective on death and the afterlife told in a unique and fresh way, being the foundation on which a series is meant to be based, it needed something more that just wasn’t there. Perhaps if we’d had a few chapters about Wylder while she was still alive to know what she was like and what she had planned for life, her death and what she did with her afterlife would’ve mattered more to us.


However, the hope and resolution in the story is gripping. We know that there is so much at stake and we feel the souls’ conflict and loss. The author does a great job exploring concepts of holding onto love and letting go of all that gets in the way of a person’s emotional relief – personal heaven.


The story would prove an entertaining read to anyone who enjoys originality and maybe those who’d lost loved ones as it provides a comforting concept that – for all we know – could be true.

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Synopsis

Wilder is an 18-year-old girl who finds herself in St. David's, the local cemetery in her small country town. When she meets a young girl who's been at St. David's for 200 years, she is shown a secret passage to another world. Wilder longs for the life that was taken from her, but each time she tries to leave St. David's without her new friend, she finds herself in a terrifying place.

Will she acquire the skills necessary to unlock the secrets to the afterlife before it's too late?

Prologe

Wylder was only eighteen on the day she died.

She never thought, when she forgot her keys on the kitchen sink that morning, that a minute or two delay could be the difference between life and death.

 

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Wylder was driving with her friends in an old beat-up car with no air conditioning, arm out the window, baking in the heat of the July sun. Cherry-vanilla flavor in her vape, which her mom would be pissed about if she knew.

In the backseat on the floor was her backpack with an envelope full of cash and checks from friends and family—her high-school graduation gifts. The events of the day had made her and her friends late and she was not likely to make it to the bank, in time to open a new savings account, before they closed for the weekend.

Dean and Chase were bickering over the radio station so loudly that the other drivers flying by could hear them if they had their windows down. Pulling up to the intersection, Wylder had just missed her opportunity to smoothly merge onto the main road. She waited for what seemed like an eternity to her passengers to merge into traffic, but the speed limit on this road was high and it was getting close to quitting time in these parts. Trucks, cars, big-rigs, and even a tractor passed in front of her. From the backseat, Dean said, “For the love of God, Wylder, would you go already? You can make it!”

She had waited weeks to open her account and was determined to get to the bank before 5 p.m. when they would close; she did not want to wait until Monday to open the savings account. With another push from the backseat driver and the bright sun in her eyes, she slammed her foot on the gas pedal and turned onto the main road to town.

That turned out to be the last decision of her life.

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About the author

Deborah is a member of the Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI) and has published three books to date with many more in the works. Through the Paul and Deborah Albers Foundation, she and her husband have supported many charities that served as an inspiration for her books. view profile

Published on September 27, 2021

40000 words

Worked with a Reedsy professional 🏆

Genre:Young Adult

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