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Good setting and concept are aces but better characterization, plot, and dialogue are needed to be a winner.

Synopsis

Behind the neon glow lies a darker truth–welcome to VEGAS ARCANA

In Las Vegas, a city where the dazzling lights cast long shadows, Malcolm Byrne's ordinary life is shattered by an encounter with the hidden world of magic. Thrust into a centuries-old battle to maintain the balance of power, Mal must navigate the treacherous waters of a city teeming with arcane dangers. As Mal delves deeper into this mystical underworld, he's tested in ways he never imagined. Forming alliances with those who walk the thin line between the magical and the mundane, he confronts not just the external threats lurking in the darkness, but also the shadows within himself. The choices he faces will define his journey—forcing him to decide not just how to survive, but who he wants to be in a world where the line between right and wrong is as blurred as the neon lights of the Strip.

Vegas Arcana: Deck Runner's Gambit is a fast-paced Urban Fantasy that will appeal to fans of Jim Butcher and Bendedict Jacka. Readers who love hidden magical worlds, fast-paced action, and in-fighting magical factions won’t be able to put down this contemporary fantasy thrill-ride.

Deck Runner’s Gambit gives us a great setting and an interesting concept. However, there are some serious flaws in the execution that turn a promising book into average.


Malcolm “Mal” Byrne is lured out of his dull cubicle 9 to 5 job by a series of psychedelic threads of light and cryptic text messages from a mysterious number. During his pursuit, he is followed by some sinister magic users who attack him. He is rescued by his friend, Jake, who is gravely wounded in the process. In his grief and guilt, Mal meets Jake’s friend, Eli Hawthorne, who is part of a secret organization called the Deck Runners, magic users who use their impressive supernatural powers of energy manipulation to fight against another group called the Peerage. Eli and the other Deck Runners also sense magic inside Mal and he signs up. Good thing too, because a Peerage member, Cassie Draven, has found a way to use dark magic to destroy the modern world and build a magically run one around it. 


The strongest aspects of the book are the Las Vegas setting and the initial concept of people studying and using arcane magic in the modern world. It is a great idea to use Vegas as the primary setting because it is one of the American cities which typify modern life at its worst. Everything there is now, loud, bright, fast, and transient. Everything in Las Vegas from the games, casinos, food, entertainment, is a means to get rich and achieve personal pleasure. It would be the antithesis of studying something like magic which would take deep concentration, intellectual curiosity, solitude, and a deeper understanding into the subconscious beyond a quick win and a night of pleasure. 


This strange dichotomy between the setting and the character’s pursuits is first explored in the opening chapter. Among the neon signs, the blaring games of chance, the excited screams and disappointed cries of gamblers, Mal sees the threads of magical energy leading him to the Deck Runners. Once he is attuned to the idea of magic, he sees it all around him. It becomes more real than the artifice that he usually experiences. This acceptance of the metaphysical world gives Mal purpose that a drab office life in such a glitzy city would bring. He is excited and enraptured by this adventure while it’s scary and ultimately filled with consequences . Mal sees that it is preferable to the previous life of quiet desperation he lived where he was surrounded by noise and longing to be heard. Magic gives him a voice and a drive that he would otherwise not have had. 


Deck Runner’s Gambit is a book that is not without its flaws and oddly enough they become noticeable once Mal joins the Deck Runners and begins practicing magic. The powers are pretty interesting and some are even unique. For example, the Runners draw specific cards and bring forward whatever magic they need from them such as light, or fire, water, whatever is necessary. It requires thought, concentration, and some improv especially when the Peerage also has access to such powers. The concept of two competing teams of magic users is pretty interesting and raises the question whether which side is truly right or wrong, or if they are simply separate schools of magic with different philosophies but similar practices. But this world comes at the expense of the characterization within it.


Once Mal is introduced to the idea of magic however, his transformation from student to master is a little too rushed. This is a man who spent his whole life not believing, a skeptic, someone who probably never questioned or explored the unexamined life. He was just content to work, flirt, eat, go home, get money, hang out with friends, and sleep. It’s great that he is open to this new world and admirable that he wants to be a part of it. But it would also make sense for there to be more reluctance and timidity about his pursuits, a hesitancy to fully embrace or believe in what is in front of him. After all, living in Las Vegas, he would have seen plenty of illusionist acts and one would imagine that he would be on the lookout for a nonexistent curtain, expecting a lovely assistant to pop up, or wondering about the tricks to it.


 It could also work the other way as well. Mal could be so open to the pursuit that he acts recklessly. He could lose his temper or consider using his magic for selfish means before he wises up. But he adjusts and adapts to quickly to be believable. There should be more development in his steps between Magician Padawan and Magician Jedi Knight. 


There is some cringy dialogue that borders on cliche. (“Welcome to the final act,” Cassie taunts. “..:Looks like your runner has run out of deck.”) It’s to the point where if you have read these types of books before, you can predict exactly what the characters are going to say before they say it. (“This isn’t over, Cassie!”) Some of it’s fun in a cheesy action fantasy sort of way but after a while it gets repetitive and makes one wonder if the book was written while watching too many movies or TV episodes. That may also account for some of the plot points that are meant to be twists that are all too easy to guess.


Vegas Arcana Deck Runner’s Gambit is aces when it comes to setting and concept but it needs work to really come up a winner. 

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Synopsis

Behind the neon glow lies a darker truth–welcome to VEGAS ARCANA

In Las Vegas, a city where the dazzling lights cast long shadows, Malcolm Byrne's ordinary life is shattered by an encounter with the hidden world of magic. Thrust into a centuries-old battle to maintain the balance of power, Mal must navigate the treacherous waters of a city teeming with arcane dangers. As Mal delves deeper into this mystical underworld, he's tested in ways he never imagined. Forming alliances with those who walk the thin line between the magical and the mundane, he confronts not just the external threats lurking in the darkness, but also the shadows within himself. The choices he faces will define his journey—forcing him to decide not just how to survive, but who he wants to be in a world where the line between right and wrong is as blurred as the neon lights of the Strip.

Vegas Arcana: Deck Runner's Gambit is a fast-paced Urban Fantasy that will appeal to fans of Jim Butcher and Bendedict Jacka. Readers who love hidden magical worlds, fast-paced action, and in-fighting magical factions won’t be able to put down this contemporary fantasy thrill-ride.

The flickering fluorescence of office lights above my cubicle was like a metronome to my waning spirit. Another spreadsheet, another keystroke—this was the monochrome symphony of my life. I’m Mal. Malcolm Byrne if we’re being formal, but nobody really is around here. Twenty-eight and already feeling like I’m a relic in a fast-moving world that has no time for the likes of me.

“Mal, you’ve got that look again,” Janice from accounting said over the cubicle wall, her mousy head popping up like some kind of prairie dog. “The one like you’re two seconds away from setting your desk on fire.”

“Ha,” I replied dryly, not even bothering to mask my sarcasm. “If only arson was as mind-numbing as data entry, maybe then I’d consider it.”

Vegas was a city of lights, a perpetual carnival of the senses-but inside these four walls, the most exciting thing was a paper jam in the printer. Outside, tourists flocked like moths to the neon glow, seeking fortune or just escape, while I sat stewing in my own mediocrity.

“Come on, live a little, Mal!” Janice continued, oblivious to my inner dialogue. “Hit the slots after work, buy a round of drinks, find a pretty girl!”

“Thanks, but I’ll save the existential mid-life crisis for when I’m at least thirty,” I muttered, refocusing on the glaring screen before me.

My fingers danced across the keyboard, more a testament to muscle memory than any real engagement with the task at hand. People came to Vegas to feel alive, to indulge in the extraordinary, while I was trapped in this purgatory of predictability.

“Another day, another dollar,” I told myself.

I left the office at precisely five, blending into the throngs of color and chaos. The office building was damn near right on the Strip, which stretched out before me—a dazzling display of humanity’s excesses and dreams distilled into a single street. Yet, I walked it with the same detachment I did pretty much everything else, lost in thought about the lack of direction in my life.

Yeah, well, maybe fate’s got something more interesting in store for you, Mal, I mused, half-hoping the universe would take pity on a soul so grounded in ennui. But the universe, as always, remained frustratingly silent on the matter.

Back in my apartment, the hum of the air conditioning unit was a lonely serenade. Tomorrow would be the same as today—predictable, safe, dull. The city might never sleep, but I was well acquainted with the back of my eyelids by ten each night.

“Is this it?” I whispered to no one, the question hanging in the air longer than I cared to admit. “Is this all there is for me?”

But the city didn’t answer, it never did. It just sparkled mockingly in the distance; a reminder of what life could be but wasn’t. And I was left to ponder an existence that felt smaller than the confines of the cubicle that held me captive day after day.

The neon gods of Vegas mocked me from their lofty perches, as if to say, “Look what we’ve become, while you’ve stayed the same.” I leaned out over the balcony of my nondescript second story apartment, the night’s breath carrying whispers of lives being changed down at the casinos—fortunes won and lost in the time it took for a roulette wheel to spin.

“Should’ve taken that trip to Nepal when I had the chance,” I muttered. “Adventure, huh?” I chided myself, “You wouldn’t last a day out there, Byrne,” the words tumbling from my lips like discarded lottery tickets—worthless and numerous.

I was about to retreat back into my apartment sanctuary of mundanity when it happened—a sudden burst of vibrant lights that splintered the monotony of Sin City’s glow. It wasn’t the usual flare of neon; this was different. A spectral dance of colors I couldn’t name, swirling and twisting in ways that defied physics.

“Okay, what fresh Vegas sideshow is this?” I leaned forward, squinting skeptically at the display. My heart raced, betraying my cynical façade with an unfamiliar excitement. “Probably just some new trick to part fools from their money.” But even as I said it, I knew it was a lie.

The lights pulsed, beckoning me, teasing the edges of my curiosity. They were not of this world—or at least, not of the one I knew. The colors seemed alive, sentient almost, communicating in a visual language that tickled the back of my mind, whispering secrets that I couldn’t quite grasp.

“Mal, you’re losing it,” I told myself, but I couldn’t peel my eyes away. “Just some high-tech projection or…or a drone show. Yeah, that’s gotta be it.”

Then, without warning, the lights converged, spiraling into a single point that hung in the air like a question mark.

“Great,” I sighed, running a hand through my hair. “Now I’m going to be that guy chasing UFOs in the desert. Perfect.”

But the truth was, I couldn’t shake the feeling that I was witnessing something genuine—the impossible made possible. My logical brain churned for an explanation, yet deep down, where dreams had been buried under years of pragmatism, a seed of wonder sprouted.

“Guess it beats another night talking to the TV,” I conceded, a wry smile tugging at the corners of my mouth. Maybe this was the adventure calling—or maybe I just needed sleep. Either way, I couldn’t ignore the pull of the unknown. It was time to chase a mystery.

* * *

The neon labyrinth of Vegas had nothing on this. The sky, a canvas of void and starlight, now played host to a phenomenon that defied the laws plastering my world together. Gossamer threads of iridescence danced high above, weaving an ethereal tapestry that seemed to pulse with life—each thread a river of color in constant motion, bleeding into the night with supernatural grace.

“Okay, so what are you?” I murmured to myself, squinting skyward.

The spectacle mocked the physics I knew, taunting me with its silent opulence. My feet rooted to the ground, I couldn’t help but marvel at the display. It wasn’t just light; it was liquid vitality, pouring from a source unseen, turning the heavens into a living, breathing entity.

I reached for the phone in my pocket, thumb hovering over the camera app. But documenting this—whatever this was—felt like trying to capture a dream on paper.

“All right, stay grounded. There’s got to be a logical explanation.” My voice was a whisper lost amidst the symphony of lights. I watched, transfixed, as the lights rippled and converged, forming patterns that nearly made sense, only to fall back into chaos. Yet even as I tried to anchor my thoughts to rationality, the glowing filaments above continued their dance unabated, drawing me into their enigmatic waltz. They were less like lights now and more like whispers from another realm, each one beckoning me to listen, to understand.

“Fine, you’ve got my attention,” I conceded, gazing upward with a mix of frustration and fascination. “Now what are you going to do with it?”

My gaze traced the shimmering trails as they wove through the neon-soaked sky, a stark contrast to the dingy alley where I stood, hands in pockets, trying to look unimpressed.

I took a slow step forward, craning my neck back. The patterns were chaotic yet mesmerizing, like a cosmic kaleidoscope that refused to settle. “So, what’s your angle?” I asked the void, half-expecting an answer.

“New rule: when the sky starts putting on a light show, don’t ask questions,” I decided aloud, only to immediately betray the thought. Questions buzzed in my mind like pesky flies, refusing to be swatted away. What if there was no trick, no illusion? What if the hand was quicker than the eye because it wasn’t playing by the same rules?

“All right, Merlin,” I whispered, my voice barely audible over the hum of the city. “You’ve got some explaining to do.” And with that, I stepped out of the shadows and into the neon-lit unknown, skepticism still my shield, but curiosity now my sword.

I continued down the sidewalk, each step like a punctuation mark in my internal soliloquy. My hands found their way into my pockets, fumbling with the lint and loose change that seemed to symbolize the clutter of my thoughts.

“Everyone’s looking for a sign,” I mused aloud, eyes scanning the faces of passersby, each absorbed in their own world. “But what if you actually get one? What do you do with it then?”

A flicker of anticipation danced within me, like the first spark of a flame. It was ridiculous, of course. Yet, somewhere deep down, beneath layers of cynicism and doubt, a part of me was alive with possibilities.

“Suppose there’s more to this city than blackjack tables and broken dreams,” I said, laughter tinging my words. “Wouldn’t that be something?”

And then it happened. Amidst the electric buzz of the strip, my phone vibrated—a phantom limb come to life with urgency. I pulled it out, squinting at the glaring screen, and there it was: an enigmatic message that read like a cipher from another dimension.

Seek and ye shall find, the text from an unknown number read, letters glowing with otherworldly promise.

“Very funny,” I replied to the empty air, thumb hovering over the keyboard. “Cryptic messages now? Someone’s been watching too many spy movies.”

I wanted to dismiss it, to laugh it off as some elaborate prank. But the truth was, the seed of curiosity had already been planted. It nagged at me, demanding attention like a riddle begging to be solved.

“Okay,” I conceded, my voice a mix of irritation and intrigue. “Let’s play your game.”

With a sigh, I started typing a response, fingers tapping against the glass with hesitant determination. The message sent, and I was left staring at the three pulsing dots that signified a reply was coming.

“Here goes nothing,” I whispered, half-expecting the lights of Vegas to dim in response, as if the city itself held its breath waiting for an answer.

As I stood there, poised on the brink of an unknown adventure, the neon glow felt less oppressive, and the mundane seemed tinged with magic. Reality wavered, just for a moment, leaving me suspended between what was and what could be.

“Guess we’re doing this, huh?” I asked myself, the smile on my face belying the tumultuous mix of excitement and apprehension within.

The reply blinked onto the screen, a cryptic cascade of symbols and letters that twined around each other like vines on an ancient temple wall. It was less a message and more a tapestry woven from the fabric of dreams, shimmering with a kind of significance that seemed to slip through the fingers of my comprehension.

“Seriously?” I muttered, squinting at the phone as if proximity could untangle the enigma it held. My thumb hovered over the glowing alphabet soup, the temptation to delete the thing wrestling with the budding vine of curiosity in my chest.

I paced the length of the sidewalk. Each step was a note in a symphony of doubt that thrummed against my skull. Was this some sort of game? A riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma, all packaged neatly for me, Malcolm Byrne, the most boring man in Sin City?

I stopped pacing and looked back at the phone. The symbols seemed to pulse, a heartbeat of hidden meaning.

“Okay, okay.” I rubbed my temples, willing away the headache that threatened to bloom. “If this is a prank, it’s a damn elaborate one.”

I tapped a response, my fingers clumsy: Nice try. What’s next? A treasure map? Secret handshake?

Send. I hit the button harder than necessary, as if I could puncture the veil of absurdity with sheer force.

The phone vibrated almost immediately, sending a shockwave up my arm. The new message was just three words, but they hit me like a freight train made of feathers and fairy dust:

Follow the lights

“Follow the lights?” I said aloud, incredulous. The phrase felt loaded, a bullet of possibility chambered in the gun of reality. I glanced around at the neon jungle of Vegas. The city was always talking, but tonight, it felt like it was speaking directly to me.

“All right,” I sighed, my voice a cocktail of sarcasm and wonder. “Chase the white rabbit or clock out and go to bed? Hell of a choice.”

My heart hammered a staccato rhythm, the beat of a drum urging soldiers into battle. There was a thrill there, coiled tight, waiting to spring.

“Looks like I’m following the lights,” I whispered to no one, my decision echoing back to me, filled with the weight of worlds unseen. I raked a hand through my hair, feeling the familiar disarray that matched the cacophony outside.

A siren wailed in the distance, a lonely serenade to the chaos of Sin City. It’s not like I had some grand plan waiting for me tomorrow. No big promotion at the office, no hot date, nothing but the same old spreadsheet with different numbers. Yeah, spreadsheets. Be still, my beating heart.

“Spreadsheets don’t have secret messages,” I reasoned, almost convinced to stay put. But the hum of possibility was a current under my skin, more compelling than any logic.

“Besides, when has normal ever done me any favors?” My reflection in a sliding door offered no answers, just a tired shrug. He looked like he could use an adventure too, poor guy. My sneakers hit the pavement again with purpose, each step a declaration. “Let’s see where this goes.”

Probably to an overpriced club or a tourist trap, I thought to myself, but there was a smile tugging at the corners of my mouth. A smile that felt suspiciously like hope.

Or maybe, just maybe, it’s something more. The thought was a whisper, a dare.

And with that, I plunged deeper into the pulsating heart of the night, following the luminous breadcrumbs scattered across the canvas of the desert sky.

“Show me your secrets,” I challenged under my breath, “I’m ready for a little magic.”

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James Anderson Foster is the creative force behind the Vegas Arcana series, where the glittering chaos of Las Vegas meets the hidden depths of magic and mystery. Living in Las Vegas, Nevada, James enjoys life with his amazing wife, wonderful children, and a fairly mediocre cat. view profile

Published on April 06, 2024

Published by KDF MEDIA

80000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Urban Fantasy

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