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Dark Whispers of the portrait

By Alex mylonas

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This collection of poetry contains relatable stories and sensory experiences that lovers of poetry will adore.

Synopsis

A poetry collection, including horror, dark, satirical, epic and love poems

"Dark Whispers of the portrait" by Alex Mylonas is a collection of poetry that contains relatable stories and sensory experiences that lovers of poetry will adore.


The first person texts are split up into five chapters, with thematic poems within each.


Part one is titled "If you're ready to meet your nightmares." It is an introduction to the realm of emotions and fantasy coming in the following pages.

From,"The Portrait"

A desperate wind force me to flee

I abandon my duties, I forsake my home

A lullaby in red danger


Part two is called, "If you're feeling sad today. This is not an uplifting section of cheerful whimsy, but rather dark and macabre depression. A trigger warning is noted before the poems begin, with a note of hope.

Sensuous phrases fill the poems.

From "D."

Dirty words and clean minds

The magic spell will affect me no more

Sweet is the hope that I felt

The bitter truth is sleeping


Part three is, "If the world is unfair." This entire section reads like a war cry, with the narrator fighting against classic enemies and emotions.

From, "Ahoy!"

The reciprocity of my true self is killed

Invading my thoughts I found

fragments of insanity

The virus is creeping inside


Part four is "If an epic tale is what you seek." It follows the theme of the previous chapter, and furthers it. This section takes the reader on a journey with knights, queens, warriors, and medieval kingdoms.

From "Force"

Freedom in my heart

I obey my command

And I seek the dark

The blade shall return to those who need it


The fifth and final chapter is called "If all you want is love." It begins with the thrilling poem, "Dance," a story of love and love lost within the rush of mystery.

Some of these poems are filled with foreboding.

From "Mask"

I married death

I walk in the land of decay

Ann oracle in the dark


First person narration throughout allows the reader to feel more distinctly aligned with the words. I found some grammatical and spelling errors that I usually overlook in poetry, and they did not adversely affect my enjoyment of this book.


"Dark Whispers of the Portrait" is a poetry collection exploring themes from grim love to facetious death. It is relatable and tangible. An eloquent read for lovers of dark poetry.





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Jessica Lucci is an award winning indie author on a quest to use books to unite society.

Synopsis

A poetry collection, including horror, dark, satirical, epic and love poems

The Portrait

In forgotten times, a devastating feeling

A wretched soul mourns

The haunting tale of a dead memory

An obscene smile created by sin

Evil burning eyes, a disturbing pose

A wicked image drawn by unloved eyes

A rotten love, my guilty eyes can see

My red hands can feel

What others cant

I dig up the untouched grave

A trembling of emotions

Can you hear me?

I heard voices from beyond

Dont touch this grounds!

She lives in the walls Inside the Portrait


A desperate wind force me to flee

I abandon my duties, I forsake my home

A lullaby in red danger

Tormented, I washed my eyes with hope

I embraced the loneliness in silent prayers

A vision murmured me a deadly event

I must hurry 

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