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City of Whispers (The Famine Cycle #1)


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An intricate, sometimes confusing, fantasy thriller with a touch of eldritch and gorgeous worldbuilding.


5 stars from Readers' Favorite!

The Lies of Locke Lamora meets Mistborn in this debut epic fantasy about a city on the verge of revolution and war, and the woman who uncovers the secret to shatter it...

Oedija, Pearl of the Four Realms, is a city on the brink of disaster. Its wardens, those gifted with the ability to bend energy to their wills, have been suppressed, killed, or driven into hiding. Its government is plagued by corruption. And the worst drought in a century starves its people. So when Oedija's symbolic ruler dies under suspicious circumstances, it is the spark to set the city on fire...

Hoping to make their fame and fortune, Airene the Finch and her unorthodox companions rush to solve the mystery of their ruler's death. Peddlers of rumor and scandal, they're just scraping by, and need a big payout if they're going to survive...

To find answers, Airene and her allies must wade through a maze of suspects, from foreign religious leaders to magic-hungry cultists to the Despot's mad daughter herself. But as she draws close to the truth, Airene risks it all only to find too late that some secrets are better left buried...

'City of Whispers' is a complex and sometimes confusing dark-fantasy adventure, following Airene and her Finches as they try to uncover the truth. I deeply enjoyed this book, and more and more the further through the novel I got.

First, the good - the setting of 'City of Whispers' is gorgeously developed. With clear inspirations from Ancient Greece (the characters wear chitons, have names like Airene and Lykos, and even the democracy and social structure borrows from Ancient Athens), the city of Oedija feels like a real place, with interclass tensions and a rich history illustrated in snippets from fictional recordings at the beginning of each chapter. Additionally, Airene is a strong central character, albeit unlikeable at times; she's driven by a quest for truth that sometimes eclipses the needs and comfort of others, and her characterization avoids the pitfalls of so many female main characters. There's a brief reference to a potential love affair between her and another character, but it's barely noticeable amid her true motivations, and even the death of her brother is just part of her patchwork rather than a single driving force.

Why three stars only? Sometimes worldbuilding is too complex; it's hard to follow the political machinations of the plot when I spent half of the book unclear on what 'pyrkin' were, I applaud 'City of Whispers' for avoiding infodumping, but especially for the first hundred and fifty pages, it feels like stepping into a movie that's already playing in a language you only half-know. Additionally, the sheer amount of characters is overwhelming enough that I found myself hoping for both a vocabulary list and a Dramatis Personae.

'City of Whispers' is an excellent read for classic high fantasy lovers - if you grew up with 'Deltora Quest', wanted more from 'A Song of Ice and Fire' and love the darkness of 'Malazan Book of the Fallen', this is for you. If you prefer more familiar worlds or a slower, more internally-driven pace, look elsewhere.

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5 stars from Readers' Favorite!

The Lies of Locke Lamora meets Mistborn in this debut epic fantasy about a city on the verge of revolution and war, and the woman who uncovers the secret to shatter it...

Oedija, Pearl of the Four Realms, is a city on the brink of disaster. Its wardens, those gifted with the ability to bend energy to their wills, have been suppressed, killed, or driven into hiding. Its government is plagued by corruption. And the worst drought in a century starves its people. So when Oedija's symbolic ruler dies under suspicious circumstances, it is the spark to set the city on fire...

Hoping to make their fame and fortune, Airene the Finch and her unorthodox companions rush to solve the mystery of their ruler's death. Peddlers of rumor and scandal, they're just scraping by, and need a big payout if they're going to survive...

To find answers, Airene and her allies must wade through a maze of suspects, from foreign religious leaders to magic-hungry cultists to the Despot's mad daughter herself. But as she draws close to the truth, Airene risks it all only to find too late that some secrets are better left buried...

Feast & Famine

The Festival of Radiance, a celebration as old as Oedija, is a reminder of the Hunger War that drove our ancestors across the Lighted Sea, when the daemon god Famine slew the Foremost of our gods and nearly swallowed the world…
- The Traditions of the Eleven: Eidolan worship in the demotism of Oedija; by Oracle Iason of deme Iris; 1164 SLP (Succeeding the Lighted Passage)

Perched on the edge of the rooftop, I searched for the smuggler.

It was the wrong time for a hunt. Forum Demos was packed as tightly as fish in barrels after a day's ample catch, a full third of Oedija gathered for Despot Myron's address. Expecting to spy one man among thirty thousand was a fool's wish.

But though my back ached and my legs had gone numb from hanging off the eaves, I didn't let up. I didn't have a choice.

"We should give it up, Airene. We're never going to find him." Xaron, who sat next to me, stretched and yawned, then reached back for his cup of festival wine, nearly spilling it in the process. Though he dressed like a fop and possessed the athleticism of a gymnast, he had the manners of a boar, and his yellow coat and scarlet trousers sported many stains from the day's activities.

"We need the coin," I reminded him drily.

"But we won't get it today," Nomusa, our third accomplice, spoke up from my other side. "Zotikos will need to surrender the goods before we can pick up the coin from Maesos."

"Thanks for having my back." I gave her a long-suffering grimace. 

She smiled back, a teasing curve to it. Her dark, olive skin and revealing robe accentuated her natural beauty. When we'd been younger, standing next to her had made me self-conscious of my own middling looks. But nine years of working and living together had cured that small jealousy. Her bared arms revealed the intricate, blue tatu that wound up to her elbows. They told of her Bali heritage and displayed the truths of her past, for those who could read them.

Xaron leaned into me, his breath sour. "How much longer until we can convince you to leave it off? Radiance ends today, and with it goes the free wine."

I was hanging on by a thread myself. But I forced myself to say, "Until we find him."

Xaron lapsed into a morose silence and took another drink. Nomusa held her tongue. Not to be made a liar, I renewed the search, if half-heartedly. The dying light strained my eyes further, promising an aching head that night.

The great amphitheater spread out below us showed no mercy. A quarter mile of marbled tiers cascading down to a colonnaded dais, every tier was filled to overflowing, their occupants from all echelons of society.

Patricians, in their fine robes and polished jewelry, took the best seats among the columns close to the dais. They sat in marble chairs, and were waited upon by their household honors, a caste of people little better off than the slaves of Avvad.

Citizens — landowners who possessed the right to vote — congregated closer to the dais on stone benches, their dyed clothes a splash of color amidst the sea of plebeian brown. 

All the rest were common folk like me and my companions. With no say in who was elected to the People's Conclave, and barely enough food and clean water to survive, we occupied whatever spot we had carved out for ourselves, taking what we could just as we scrambled for coin and jockeyed for position.

The thought brought me back to the hunt at hand. Somehow, Xaron, Nomusa, and I needed to spy one particular man, and from this rooftop at the back of the forum. But though the man would be wearing the colored robes of the mercantile class, I'd searched the tiny figures below for far too long. My eyes felt too large for their sockets; my head buzzed with festival wine; my vision swam.

It was a pyr hunt, and I knew it.

I broke off my search for a moment to kicked the blood back into my legs and stare up at the sky. Finches, each with small scrolls tied to their legs, flitted above, flecks of fast-moving colors in the sunset light. Even now, just before the largest gathering of the year, the messenger birds of Oedija received no rest. A gentle breeze, the last of the warm summer winds, blew against my face. Shouts, laughs, and shrieks from orphans underneath our feet filled the air; no doubt many of them had gotten ahold of their fair share of the festival wine. Freely dispensed by the People's Conclave during the five days of the Festival of Radiance in a flagrant facade of generosity, this was the children's last chance to indulge and escape the misery of their daily lives.

A new voice broke through the others noises to rise over the tumult of the crowd, slowly quieting them. Squinting at the dais, I found an oracle of the Eidolan faith, the religion of Oedija's ancestors, stood there between the grand marble columns. The old man's voice was worn as pilled wool, yet loud enough to be heard all across the public square, thanks to the present Hilarion's mystical aid.

"Our story begins long before our demotism and the Conclave," the oracle said, voice echoing through the now-quiet amphitheater. "Before the Tyrant Wardens took Oedija for their own, and set those attuned to the Pyrthae to rule over those who were not. Long even before the first Wreath occupied the Laurel Palace. Our tale goes back to just before the Lighted Passage, when our ancestors sailed from their blighted homeland in the west to a faraway land in the east — this land, settling the stones on which we now stand."

The oracle paused, then spoke as if reluctant, "The story begins with Famine. Some have called Famine a serpent, a great serpent. But he was no more a snake than a phoenix is a finch. Some have called him a dragon, yet this can still not do him justice. For when Famine opened his mouth wide, he could swallow the whole of Telae."

Famine. Despite the joviality of the festival below, the specter of the daemon god loomed large over the city. A drought in Oedija's farmlands promised food shortages soon. Prices were already rising, and would only rise higher as stores ran low. With famine would come strife. Robbery. Rioting. Perhaps even revolt, if this drought was as bad as the reports promised.

As much as I wished to give up my search, I couldn't. Without the much-needed coin, Nomusa, Xaron, and myself might soon find ourselves among the starving.

Xaron stirred and pointed. "There! By the Pillar. Is that him?"

I followed his direction, peering at the immense column of gray stone that rose high into the sky above. One of the remnants of an older civilization, it and the other Pillars scattered across Oedija made for convenient landmarks. I picked out a man standing near its base in bright red robes, easy to pick out from the browns surrounding. Next to him stood a man half a head taller than everyone else. 

A thin smile found my lips. Zotikos, the man we'd been searching for, and his bodyguard, no doubt.

Nomusa leaned forward. "Can you see who he's meeting with?"

I reached into my satchel and pulled out my peering glass. Looking through it, I brought the man in red robes into focus. He was turned away from me, but his close-cropped, curly hair was the same as Zotikos sported.

I lowered the glass and shook my head. "Too far to tell, and too many surround them. We'll have to move closer."

"Meeting by the Pillar." Xaron tutted. "You'd think people would be a little less obvious."

I shrugged. "I won't object to a straightforward venture for once."

"Don't speak too soon," Nomusa chided. "This job isn't over."

As we made our slow way off the roof to the street below, we were forced to endure the gibes of the orphans surrounding us. As well-practiced at ignoring them as I was, their words still needled me. Ten years ago, I would have been a match for any of them. But at twenty-five years, having long traded a smock for a chiton, I found the climbs harder to manage. Even if the long robes didn't get in the way, the daring of youth seemed to have left me. 

Though being a Finch was not what people called a cautious profession.

As we made it to the street, I muttered to Nomusa, "Is it just me, or are we getting too old for this?"

She drew me in with an arm around the waist. "You just need to practice Ixolo with me. Then you'll be as nimble as any street orphan."

"Or as naturally graceful as I." Xaron leaped the last several feet to the ground and stumbled as he landed.

I rolled my eyes. "Graceful as a three-legged mule. Hurry up."

As we pushed through the crowd, the stench of unwashed bodies filled my nose. From the dais, the oracle finished his story. 

"Tyurn Sky-Sea knew we could not face Famine unarmed. So giving all of his strength, he granted us his gift. Attuning the First Wardens to the Pyrthae, humanity gained the gift of magic. Wardens drew on the power of the Pyrthae and fought alongside the gods. Wielding the energetic elements like soldiers use swords and spears, they worked together to drive Famine and his horde from the world and, once again, bound him."

As he concluded, there was a spattering of applause, then silence. The quiet of anticipation. Soon, Despot Myron Wreath, purported ruler of Oedija, would take the stage for his annual Radiance address. Though the royal family continued to be named monarchs, the majority of power had been transferred to the People's Conclave. Yet all around me, folk murmured their hopes as if Myron could bring about change himself. They dreamed of a year of plenty, not of famine. They dreamed of quieting streets rather than dangerous ones. But Myron could do little for them. Even if the Despot still possessed the power of his forebears, nothing could be done for the hunger that would soon come. No amount of trade with the other nations of the Four Realms could change the fact that our granaries were near empty and our fields fallow. Each realm had to watch out for themselves now, not wait for another to save them.

It wasn't long until I glimpsed our quarry again through the crowd. Zotikos turned around for a moment, a scowl on his face. His guard, a tall, broad man who wore a yet deeper frown, stood nearby scanning the crowd. The smuggler turned back, gesturing at someone before him.

Xaron whistled. "That's a big man he brought."

"Not a problem for you, though." I cast him a sidelong glance.

He grinned. "Not if you let me off my leash."

"You're lucky we don't muzzle you, too." Nomusa grabbed his arm. "Come on. Let's get this over with."

We pressed forward, the crowd thinning as we neared. The bodyguard's forbidding glare was enough to make people think twice about coming close. Leaning around those in front of me, I caught a glimpse of Zotikos' contact, and my mouth went dry.

The man was an honor, his caste clear from his shaved head and tin spiral earrings. But despite being of the servile class, he wore robes at least as rich as the merchant's. His dark green eyes met Zotikos' with the poise of a patrician, a jovial gleam in them. But though unusual, none of this was surprising. It wasn't my first run-in with Low Consul Feiyan's righthand man.

"Kako," Xaron breathed. "What's he doing here?"

I fought to clear my expression from its grimace. "What else? Dealing with smugglers is business as usual for Feiyan."

Nomusa shook her head. "We should have suspected she was behind this."

"She could just be an opportunistic buyer," I said sarcastically.

Nomusa raised an eyebrow. "Very likely, when he comes first thing to meet her righthand man after a long trip from the Bali highlands."

Xaron waved a hand. "Never mind that. Are we doing this or not?"

All three of us were nervous, that was plain. I couldn't help a wry grin. Nearly a decade in, and I still got butterflies before confrontations.

I glanced at the dais. "Despot Myron's taking the stage. If he gives his usual performance, it should be a good distraction."

Confirming my words, the crowd roared as Despot Myron Wreath mounted the platform, waving solemnly to his people. In the hundred years of Oedija's demotism, there'd never been a more popular member of the royal family than Myron. He appeared both strong in dealing with other nations while upholding the Concordance of the Four Realms, the treaty brokered between the member nations that had led to the unprecedented century and a half of near unbroken peace. It also didn't hurt that at fifty years, he retained a broad frame, handsome features, and sharp eyes. He was a man you'd trust equally to lead an army and rein in a chamber full of bureaucrats — even if in truth, he did neither.

The Despot of Oedija boomed over the tumult. "My people! Thank you for this marvelous welcome!"

As a deafening wave of cheers swept over us, Xaron grinned at Nomusa and me and shouted, "Despot Myron, claiming the stage as usual!"

As the cheers quieted, the Ruling Wreath continued in his strong, rich voice. "We gather here to celebrate, as we do every year, the blessings that the Pyrthae grants us. The rains that fall from the heavens; the sun that warms and energizes; and, of course, our ancestors who take the form of pyr and move through and among us. Each one of us is touched by the radiance of the realm above." He gestured with a large wave above him. "Let us never forget that."

A solemn murmur rippled from the crowd.

"Long, long ago," Myron continued, "our forebears encountered a catastrophe in the western lands. The Hunger War. The calamity was so profound that they deemed their lands too desolate to continue sowing. Thus, they abandoned them forever. A hard decision indeed, and one that could have had terrible consequences. But they held to faith. With the Eidola lighting the way, they traveled the endless seas, braving starvation and storms for eleven full spans. Children grew languid and weak, and men and women faltered at the oars. But finally, they landed here, on Oedija's shores, and founded this great city. The Lighted Passage, as we now call it, was a great hardship to bear. But without our ancestors' courage, the prosperous Pearl of the Four Realms would never have existed."

There were some assents of approval, but joining them now was a susurrus of discontent. I didn't have to look far to know why. Though people were clad in their festival best, many of them were unwashed and underfed. Myron had overplayed his hand. Most did not feel the prosperity he claimed.

But the Despot seemed to understand their shifting mood. "I know we face trials now, many trials indeed. The gods and spirits of the land and sky have seen it fit to plague us with pestilence and droughts, robbing us of our plentiful harvests. And Valem stirs, discontented, in the south, so that Avvad's fields are covered in ash, the rivers are muddied and polluted, and the trade caravans that might alleviate Oedija's hunger encounter obstacles and delays. Yes, I know we have many trials to overcome."

As Myron paused, those who had protested were hushed with anticipation, waiting for his next words. With hope, I realized. They truly believed the Despot could say something that would change their situation. Desperate, they needed something to believe in, and found none better than the purported ruler of our nation.

Myron's next words, however, were hard. "But turning to false religions is not the answer. Believing in false claims — in delusions — because you wish them to be true will do our future no favors."

The crowd was quickly becoming agitated now. Jeers and calls were hurled down at the dais. Laurel guards, with green leaves painted on their armor and carved into their helms, began to wade in at the edges of the crowds, spears and shields held at the ready. The less wise among the crowd resisted, and spats broke out as guards dragged some of the most vehement of the decriers away.

I shared an astonished look with Nomusa and Xaron. In my memory, unrest was unprecedented at Myron's addresses.

"But we need not dwell on our trials!" Myron boomed over the protests. "Today, we celebrate both the victories of the past and the present. And that is not all! For today, one of our own returns, who will one day wear the Evergreen Wreath in my stead. A day long from now, gods willing."

The crowd, who would have normally agreed, barely responded. Still, the Despot smiled benevolently up at us like we'd cried out his name. 

"But I will let her speak for herself. My daughter, Asileia Wreath, future Despoina of Oedija!"

He swept his arm behind him, and his daughter came striding out from the eaves to join him. Asileia was a thin woman, taking after her mother, the daughter of a Qao Fu matriarch. Yet she walked with such strength and sense of command that one could almost believe her a ruler of old. As she strode forth, fine jewelry danced upon her and glittered brilliantly in the festival lights. She'd never had her father's sense of modesty when it came to demonstrating the inherited wealth of the royal family. But even more striking were the golden tatu that shone on her skin. At this distance, I couldn't tell if they were more extensive than when we'd last seen her. They gave her an otherworldly cast, making her seem like a pyr come into the flesh.

"That ought to be distraction enough," I noted to Xaron and Nomusa. "I'm going in. Wait for the signal."

Nomusa looked at me askance. She knew that I spoke the reminder more for my sake than theirs. "We'll do our part, don't worry. 'Thae's blessing, Aire."

I nodded, and turned back to our quarries, who stared at the shimmering Asileia Wreath. Not giving myself another moment for doubt, I approached the trio.

The bodyguard immediately spotted me. I pretended to be peering toward the dais until I was within a dozen strides, then looked around with a smile. A smile wouldn't stop his fist from pounding me into the stones at the smuggler's command, but it might let me get in a word or two first. That was all I needed.

Asileia Wreath's uncommon alto and clipped, haughty words accompanied my approach. "Thank you for the welcome. I have just come from the northern branch of our great nation, from the prefectures along the Peninsula, where I have acted as governor on your behalf for the past two years. It is a backward territory compared to our grand city, but under my leadership, I hope to bring our people of the Peninsula into the modern age of learning and prosperity."

A spattering of applause broke out, much less than Myron had first garnered. I imagined Asileia's expression would be souring at the lukewarm welcome.

Kako had followed the bodyguard's gaze. His face lit up as he gestured toward me.

"Airene the Finch!" he shouted over Asileia's speech. "Excuse me, Zotikos, but here is an old friend come to visit. If I know her at all, I believe she'll have words for you as well."

"Kako," I greeted the honor stiffly as he approached. "How's your mistress?"

"Very well, thank you. Power suits her nicely." He gave me a coy smile.

I pointedly looked away.

Zotikos studied me with an open scowl. "An old friend, you say. What words do you have for me, girl?"

Little rankled me more than a man's casual scorn. My reply was cool and calm. "Many you won't wish to hear, Zotikos of Hull. And many you would not wish your wife to hear either."

His lips curled in distaste. "A dirty pleb should speak no words to my wife. Leave us, wench. We have business to discuss."

His bodyguard turned toward me. My heart, already racing, began to gallop, but I continued to ignore the big man. "As do we. If I were you, I'd send Feiyan's man away. You don't want an audience for what I'm about to say."

Kako watched with open amusement. "Never fear, my dear. I freely leave you to your fear-mongering. But remember the last time you meddled in Feiyan's business. I would think carefully before you interfere again."

With a subtle bow, the honor turned away and disappeared back into the crowd.

Relieved as I was to see Kako's back, the full attention of Zotikos and his henchman was no easier to bear. The merchant was red in the face as he turned back to me, but before he could speak, a collective gasp turned our heads.

"Yes!" Asileia was shouting. "The elder Eleven, the Eidola of old, have spoken to me. And as no other mortal has experienced, I have become—"

Her voice cut off as Despot Myron ripped Hilarion's hand away from her neck and slapped it to his own. "Thank you, Daughter," he said. As his low, powerful voice rolled over us, I could feel his rippling anger. "We are all happy to see you home."

Asileia stood for a moment, quivering with rage, then stalked off the dais.

Zotikos and his bodyguard turned back to me. "An ominous night for interruptions," he said coldly. "You spoil my business and threaten my wife. Who are you, Airene the Finch, and what do you wish to say?"

I didn't flinch from his glare. A Finch for nine years, I'd encountered more men like Zotikos than I cared to recount. And at the core of every one of them were the dark secrets they kept hidden from the world. Lies they whispered to themselves to obscure the truths that defined them. 

But I knew how to unravel them.

"You've been keeping a secret, Zotikos. One that would break your family if it were revealed. Your wife might not care for honors, but I doubt she would excuse you… mishandling her handmaid during her evenings away." Despite the revulsion hollowing me, I pasted a knowing smile on my lips. "But it's up to you whether she hears of it or not."

The merchant's expression spasmed, and his eyes darted from me, to his impassive guard, to the crowd around us.

"Liar!" he hissed, but the words caught in his throat. "It's all lies! You know nothing!"

"No doubt you wish to believe that. I, however, would not risk your reputation over a misplaced shipment from the Bali highlands."

Zotikos' eyes widened, then he gave a wild laugh. "Aha! So that is what this is about! You want a cut, do you? You think to threaten me so I'll just hand over the profits to you, you greedy strumpet? I know people, important people. I'll have you strung up for your slanderous words!"

I glanced at the bodyguard, who stared daggers into me, then pulled my gaze back to the smuggler. This was the critical moment. I had to hold firm. Swallowing hard, I prepared to lose a few teeth.

"That will not keep your family from falling apart, Zotikos. That will not keep business partners from looking at you twice and deals falling through. But all of that can be prevented. Your secret will be safe with me. All you must do is return what you stole to those with whom you broke contract."

The river merchant stared at me balefully, his mouth pressed into a hard line. He was considering my offer. Soon, he would relent. He just needed one last twist of the knife.

"Think carefully, Zotikos. Everything you possess is on the line. Your dignity, your relationships, your fortunes — everything. And it can all be safe if you do the right thing."

I reached into my robes and seized the object concealed there. The bodyguard, no doubt suspecting a weapon, snaked his hand forward, grabbing my slender arm in a bruising grip. Pain raced up my arm, but I didn't struggle. I just had to wait a moment longer.

Xaron and Nomusa stepped into view behind the smuggler and his brute.

"I'd listen to her," Xaron said with a nonchalant air. "She won't let it rest until she's had her way."

"And you won't rest either," Nomusa said coldly. "This is the best way out for you, trust us."

Zotikos whirled. His bodyguard didn't release me as he eyed the newcomers warily. 

"And who are you two?" the smuggler demanded.

I gestured toward them. "Zotikos, meet my fellow Finches. The other people who hold your fate in their hands."

"Finches?" His eyes narrowed. "Airene the Finch… Now I know why you sounded familiar. Filthy spies and thieves, the lot of you!"

"Can't dispute you there," Xaron said easily. "But it's hard to feel bad about it when we blackmail scum like you."

I could see we had him. If I had been alone, he might have forced down the fear of someone knowing his secret, assuring himself that his bodyguard could take care of it. But he couldn't stop three people from talking. 

"Fine!" the river merchant snapped. "Fine. I'll give my investors their due, so long as you never speak of this to anyone." He eyed me shrewdly. "Which one of them put you up to this?"

I smiled thinly. "Best make sure you don't leave out anyone, just in case."

Zotikos bared his teeth in nearly a snarl, then gestured sharply to his bodyguard. The brute gave me one last bald glare, then released me and followed after his master.

Xaron grinned openly as he and Nomusa joined me. "That went well. As soon as you called us in with the lodestone, that is."

I rubbed at my prickling arm as my fingers brushed the concealed lodestone. Bonded somehow through magnesis, one of the energetic elements, to a stone Xaron carried, each would move when the other was touched. It had been useful for faraway communication on many occasions.

"In the end," I conceded. "We'll have to follow up tomorrow evening to make sure he remembers what's at stake."

"I'd expect nothing less of the pig than to try and weasel his way out now." Nomusa stared at their retreating backs, then turned her head aside with a small shake of disgust. "Come. There's a little of the festival left. We should give off this thankless work for a bit, find an untapped barrel, and celebrate."

I sighed, trying not to think of Zotikos' wife, and whether we did a greater injustice by keeping quiet or telling her. But it didn't matter. I wouldn't inform her of what scum her husband was unless Zotikos failed to deliver. A Finch was only as good as her word.

I followed after my companions as we claimed our last piece of Radiance.

* * *

Several turns of the sandglass later, Nomusa, Xaron, and I stumbled back up the stairs of the derelict tower we called home. With wine-logged heads and sour stomachs, the climb to the top seemed never-ending.

As much for distraction as out of curiosity, I asked Nomusa, "Asileia truly said she was — what was it, 'the Hand of Clepsammia?'"

"So she claims. And she supposedly has oracles following her around declaring the same thing."

"Two circles left," Xaron panted. "We're almost to Canopy."

"It's not that far," I chided him. "What happened to her governing the Peninsula?"

Nomusa shrugged. "How should I know? Myron made it seem like a good thing she'd returned, but he'd have to spin it that way."

"She was probably booted for burning her subjects alive," Xaron interjected.

I cast him a disdainful look. "Don't believe every rumor you hear. It's a long way from the Oedijan prefectures. Events are often inflated."

"But do you really doubt it? The woman mutilated herself. She cut off her ear markings and disavowed her mother's heritage. And now she's back when she's not supposed to be."

I just shrugged. Being Qao Fu himself, Xaron was particularly offended that Asileia had severed the additional ear lobes of their people. It was typically a point of pride for the Qao Fu, and many — including Xaron — wore earrings through their ear markings. We didn't know why Asileia had removed hers, but it didn't incline Xaron toward her.

We finally reached the top of the tower, the eleventh circle. The previous ten floors were filled with poor families or young men and women with nowhere else to go. At least in the loft atop it, we had the circle to ourselves. It was the best our bribes could afford. As Finches — hunters of secrets, misdeeds, or other knowledge that might turn a profit — we didn't have the most reliable income, and couldn't risk trying for something more expensive.

Living on top of the tower was both a blessing and a curse. At the moment, with unsteady legs and a head already pounding from sour festival wine, I wondered what had possessed us to move here.

Yet as we pushed inside the door, Canopy was a welcome sight. Opposite the door, a great bay window, only a little cracked and grime-covered despite our negligence, afforded a stunning view of Oedija's cityscape. Along the right side, four small enclosures we'd fashioned into bedrooms with ceilings open to the rest of the loft, huddled against each other. To the left lay the kitchen, cluttered with unwashed pots, and the pantry. I breathed in the faint smell of mildew and bird droppings, which wafted in from the finch cage on our balcony. Foul though the scents were, they were part of being home.

Saying their goodnights, Xaron and Nomusa closed themselves into their bedrooms. I, however, wasn't ready for sleep yet. Despite my better judgment, I drew a cup of wine from the barrel that our last loftmate, Corin — who worked as a cartwoman rather than a Finch — had claimed for us, then moved to the great bay window. The festival lights glittered in the inner and outer demes of the city, as both inside and outside the wall the celebration continued. Bonfires, pyr lamps, and torches illuminated the city from below, while the green light of the radiant winds and the three moons, full as they were every Radiance, shone above. The gray Pillars rose ominously from the demes, the magic-forged columns shadowed specters in the darkness. Beyond the city wall, a bonfire greater than any other burned, so large I wondered for a moment if it were spreading.

But as I swirled my glass, my thoughts drifted. The sense of disquiet that had filled me of late, a cloud that followed we wherever I went, rose in me once more. In the midst of the hunt earlier, it had dampened so I could almost forget about it. But it had always been there, simmering beneath the surface.

I feared to think what it meant.

Secrets had been my pursuit for as long as I could remember. Ever since I'd been old enough for Mother to bring me to the markets, I'd listened avidly, sieving conversations for scraps of scandal.

By the time I was five, I'd learned the patricians' most salacious stories from the washerfolk. More people should be wary of washerfolk — they always know your dirty laundry. 

By the time I was eight, I sought more dangerous tales — street-side scams, moneylender muggings, even a few political bribes. I'd return home after a long, dusty day, and illustrate my hard-earned stories in colorful detail to my brothers for their amusement.

By the time I was twelve, I'd sold my first secret.

At fifteen, during the Calling when adolescents decide their life's work, I had named myself a Finch after the Order of Verifiers, a long-disbanded branch of the government, to carry on their mission of exposing truth wherever deception obscured it. When I'd actually set to the work a year later, I found myself more often chasing profit than justice. But always, I'd told myself it was in the eventual pursuit of that noble goal.

Standing atop our derelict tower, staring over the glimmering city, I wondered what had come of my nine years of striving. Perhaps it had never been about the truth. Perhaps it was the power of it, of hunting down a story and claiming its truth for your own. But the hunt could only thrill for so long.

And it was hard to believe it mattered when I couldn't even find Thero's murderer.

A sudden sound yanked me from my thoughts. It took me a moment to recognize it. Not since I was a child had I heard it, for it only sounded in the most dire circumstances. It blared over the rooftops and poured into the reveling forums and silent alleys. It vibrated in my chest and shook all other thoughts away.

The shell horns of the Laurel Palace called over Oedija, solemn and forlorn.

Three warnings came by the horns. The first, for fire. The second, for war. And the third, for a death.

Fire was likely. With wood buildings common along the peripheries of the city, the bonfires of Radiance posed a grave danger if mismanaged. The fire that burned in deme Thys beyond the wall seemed a likely candidate.

War, beyond rare skirmishes, had not been known in recent history, not since the Concordance of the Four Realms. The Bali ishakas to the east quarreled among themselves. The Qao Fu jaitin to the northeast remained isolated, their power waning. The Avvadin Imperium to the south seemed content with conquering their southern neighbors along the Rift.

The horns sounded twice, then a third time. I had heard this call once before, when I'd been young. I'd clutched to my father's robes and asked him if we were safe. He'd taken me into his arms and cradled me back and forth. Three horns is nothing to fear, Little Songbird, he'd murmured. Three horns is nothing to fear.

As the echo of the horns died away, the late festival-goers below pantomimed their distress. Some cried into their hands. Others clutched their heads and fell to their knees, disregarding the mud that caked the street. Some just stood staring up, as if asking the gods how this could happen.

I closed my eyes. The fading vibrations of the horns seemed to shake me awake after a troubled dream, filling the gaps that had formed in me over the past two and half years.

Three calls of the horns announced that Despot Myron Wreath was dead. Three horns made me remember what it was to be a Finch...

About the author

J.D.L. Rosell is the author of The Famine Cycle and The Everlands. He lives, writes, reads, and hikes in Seattle, Washington. view profile

Published on September 03, 2019

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130000 words

Contains explicit content ⚠️

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Genre: Epic Fantasy

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