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Have you experienced incest, abuse, being molested?

 

The query that accompanied Rebecca Nichols’s Carly Remembers originally stirred feelings of shock, disgust, and offense, but also intrigue. It was a brazen, uncomfortable opening asking a personal question of the reader in a way that was bold and, no doubt, triggering for anyone in a position to answer ‘yes.’ However, as the query continued, it seemed to want to reach out and hold dear anyone that has suffered. This is explained better in the official synopsis. The book attempts to provide a voice to all the ‘Carly’s’ that have been stripped of their youth, dignity, and voices. Though a work of fiction, Nichols has used her experience from work with the Probation Service to weave together a multitude of traumas so as not to identify any one survivor, but to shine a light on a topic that impacts millions of lives.

 

Transported back to October 24th, 2010, the book starts with a punch. It’s hard hitting, serving up the violence immediately in the form of an assault aftermath. With two characters named John, and a Jim within the first three pages, the blow of this attack is softened due to giving attendance to the similar names. Then we have Franklin and O’Fallen. Throw in another J with Jones for good measure. The repetitive theme continues with door numbers. They all seem to require an ‘oh’ - hospital room ‘four-oh-three,’ ‘apartment number ‘three-oh-three,’ and the offices at four-seven-oh-one.’ More variation at the start when trying to decipher the value and longevity of each character would definitely have been appreciated.

 

At times, Nichol’s attention to detail is perfect. The descriptions provided by the narrator are delivered with extreme precision, e.g., the slipping on of the ‘green latex gloves’ at the first crime scene, ‘small four-room office area separated by six-foot-high cubicle dividers lined with gray cloth,’ and later, the hypnosis scenes. However, there are instances where the text could do with an editor’s eye. On one page we are introduced to Carly’s daughter, Jenny, but within a couple of pages, her name is Elizabeth. A more polished feel would have been appreciated given that the book dealt with a serious police investigation.

 

Additionally, there are further moments that are questionable. For example, for a patient suffering from amnesia and unable to recall their name or much about their life, it’s strange that they recall being abused their whole life. It is also strange that the same said patient is up and walking around and meeting up with ‘strangers’ after being beaten within inches of their life. With broken ribs, burst stitches, and a fear of finding out the truth, how is it that a victim is freely walking around fearlessly in the neighborhood where she was attacked?

 

Explicit therapy journal entries are tough to read for two reasons. On the one hand, they discuss the intimate details of incest. On the other hand, they are devoid of emotion. The wrong tone is demonstrated. Whilst the notes should be clinical, one would expect them to convey more detail about the client.

 

Flaws aside, the book suddenly picks up pace in the latter half. Things happen when you don’t expect and even then, there’s still twists that will leave your head spinning.

 

With adult content that includes graphic scenes of a sexual nature, violence, molestation, and child sex abuse, the book is not suitable for kids or adolescents. The inclusion of disturbing content is likely to trigger anyone that has been affected by this type of abuse, so caution is urged. For adult readers that enjoy thrillers, this debut novel is a 3 out of 5. The ideas are there, but the execution could do with some strengthening.

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BROKEN AND BLOODIED


Harold glances up from his place perched atop a chipped metal stool in front of the small flat-screen television hanging from a broken metal bracket in the corner of the New Brunswick, Illinois, 7-Eleven. An old rerun of an entry from the Death Wish trilogy fights through poor reception, blurred with static.

Bored and drowsy, Harold angles his left wrist for a view of his watch: 10:17. Oh man, forty-three minutes to go.

John, the night-shift manager, proudly displays a name tag reflecting his title on the front pocket of his white, short-sleeved, button-down work shirt, leans on the counter behind the register, the old wood groaning under his three hundred pounds. “Harold, why don’t you go out and walk the lot for trash. It’s about that time. I’ll mop up.”

“Okay.” Harold sighs, straightening his legs, wincing at the pop in his knee and creak in his ankle. He yawns, stretches his arms toward the ceiling, hearing another pop in his neck that rattles its way down his spine. He runs his hands over his head, through hair thinning faster than it can replenish. At least the cool air will feel nice and help him get through the end of his shift.

He shuffles past the newspaper stand—the lotto only fifteen million today, not worth the effort—and in front of the cash register, where he notices a harsh look from his manager.

The door chimes on his way out into the night. He begins his survey in the usual spot, at the far corner of the parking lot out front, looking for trash, hoping to find some money dropped by some poor, unfortunate soul. Maybe I’ll find another ten-dollar bill.

Harold strolls around, scanning the ground. Near the dented green dumpster, resting against the brick facade, he notices a crumpled piece of paper and rushes over.

Bummer. Only a hot-dog boat smeared with mustard and a plastic Big Gulp with half-melted ice, swarming with ants. He pulls a black trash bag from the frayed back pocket of his blue Dickies. He picks up the refuse, wishing he’d remembered to wear his rubber cleaning gloves, and sticks it in the trash bag. One grid of the empty parking lot down.

A light sprinkle of rain falls from the clouded night sky. Harold glances up, sees the faded lights of a plane on its descent into New Brunswick International, glowing through the low cover, hears the rumble of its engines. He rounds the corner, strolls toward the back of the lot. He blinks a few times, gazing at something in a crumpled mess on the ground.

Is that a body?

He races over, dropping his trash bag, and scrapes his knee on the cracked asphalt crouching next to the body.

A woman lies facedown, bruised, blood pooling under her head. Gashes covering her bare arms and legs pour forth their red liquid of life. One of her arms is twisted at a perilous angle. Harold winces just considering it.

He leans up, hyperventilating, for what seems like forever. He stands, uncertain what to do, runs back into the store.

“John, there’s a dead girl out back! Oh my God, call someone! What do we do? Call the police? The doctor? Um, a funeral home? Quick, call nine-one-one, they’ll know what to do.”

“Jesus, breathe man,” John says, his face going paler than usual. He drops his mop and shuffles outside.

“She’s over here,” Harold shouts from the corner of the lot. He peeks around John as they approach the sprawled-out girl. Dumbfounded, Harold stares at the girl, then at John.

John stammers, “You-You’re right, a de-dead girl!”

They run back inside the store. John grabs the cordless phone. He dials nine-one-one but misdials, connecting on the second attempt. “We have a dead body here,” he shouts. “Send someone over—the police or something—quick!” John hangs up.

They head back outside.

Almost immediately, the phone rings.

Harold grabs the phone. “Um… 7… um… Eleven.”

A lady says, “Sir, we just received a call from this number stating that there’s a dead body at your location.”

Harold responds, a quiver in his voice, “Yes, that was John, the night supervisor.”

“John, your supervisor, is dead?”

“No! He called you all.”

“This is the New Brunswick Emergency Response Services. Please give me your address.”

“Um… Five-Four-Nine-Six—wait, no, Four-Five-Nine-Six Fourth Street. Please, send someone right away!”

Harold hangs up, glances back at his watch: 10:35. He sighs, exasperated. No way he’ll be finished with his shift on time tonight.


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I am an artist and first time author. I have a masters degree in psychology. The core of this book, holds my personal therapy. I got the idea for this story while transcribing court reports for the probation department of Los Angeles County, simultaneously working for a private investigator. view profile

Published on August 05, 2023

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60000 words

Contains graphic explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Psychological Thriller

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