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Bullies and Peeps

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A beautiful and moving story that can feel so much like sunshine, warming your heart and filling your soul with healing love.

Synopsis

Meg is a bit of a misfit at school. She prefers nature to people. One day, her only friend joins a popular girl group led by Hannah, the most popular girl in the class.
Meg finds a welcome distraction—a goose sitting on a nest of eggs in the school courtyard. Hannah and her girl group bully Meg as she watches and waits for goslings. No one is prepared for what happens after the eggs hatch.

I knew I wanted to read Bullies and Peeps written by J.D. Suhre the first time I came across it, but I never knew I’d be touched the way I am right now. If there is one word I could use to describe it, I’d pick this one with no hesitation: beautiful. It was just beautiful and heart-warming it made me cry.


Yes, it can make you cry but not in a melodramatic way. I don’t even know if the author meant it to be that way. But sometimes, it is the simplicity and the innocence of it all that can move you and surprise you. There is no barrier to resist and you just enter a world where you’re like a child again. You begin to see from that perspective again and you simply get carried away.


Nostalgic and reminiscent of days gone by, the book invites you to recall, albeit in an indirect way, your childhood memories. Who were your friends when you were young? Who were your enemies? Who were the people who helped you become a better version of yourself?


In a way, you transcend two worlds that are so much alike. The world of your present life and the world of past years when you were smaller, and life seemed simpler, though not necessarily easier or less frightening.


Both adults and young ones can enjoy this book. It has a lot of lessons packed within the story itself, not preached nor imposed upon anyone.


I found it particularly helpful that the author used the alternating points of view of the two main characters in the story. We could enter the perspective of Meg, the girl who was being bullied by a group of girls in school. We could also enter the perspective of Hannah, the girl who bullies Meg. What were her motivations? What could stop her from continuing to torment Meg? And what could Meg do to overcome this crisis in her young life?


The characters were well fleshed-out, even the supporting ones. You can almost imagine the teachers and the classmates Meg and Hannah had.


The pacing of the story was also just right. It wasn’t too fast, but it wasn’t dragging either. It was slow enough to linger at a particular scene yet fast enough to move the plot and look forward to everything that could happen next.


This book is a must-read, especially for those having trouble with bullying. Parents and educators can also learn more in handling similar situations.


Good job and congratulations to the author of this story! I wish it could be turned into a movie so I can experience it all over again.

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Synopsis

Meg is a bit of a misfit at school. She prefers nature to people. One day, her only friend joins a popular girl group led by Hannah, the most popular girl in the class.
Meg finds a welcome distraction—a goose sitting on a nest of eggs in the school courtyard. Hannah and her girl group bully Meg as she watches and waits for goslings. No one is prepared for what happens after the eggs hatch.

Hannah

The bugle call came at dawn. I sprang upright in bed and covered my ears, trying to block out the off-key notes. The room was still dark. It took a few seconds to remember where I was. Camp. I didn’t ask to be at this camp, I thought as the bugle blared. It was a waste of my spring break.

Angela spoke from the bunk across from me.

“What?” I asked, uncovering my ears.

“Make it stop, Hannah.”

“How do you suggest I do that?”

“Going to breakfast is the only way to make it stop,” Sarah said. She rolled out of the bunk below Angela.

“She’s right,” Koko said from below me.

We got dressed and stumbled out of the cabin. I shielded my eyes from the morning sun on the way over to the dining hall.

Once there, I spotted Alexis Martinez, who was already in the front of the line. She was in my class, but we didn’t travel in the same social circles. I wanted to change that.

I smiled and waved at Alexis. She smiled back. I took that as an invitation to leave the girls at the back of the line and go stand with Alexis.

“Morning,” I said, cutting in front of Alexis.

“Morning.”

After we grabbed our breakfasts, we had our pick of empty tables. “Let’s sit in the corner,” I said.

The girls arrived about ten minutes later. Angela dropped her tray on the tabletop before plopping down on the other side of me.

The camp director came on the microphone. “Good morning, kids,” he said in his booming ex-army sergeant voice. “It’s going to be hot on our last morning of camp. Make sure you drink lots of water.”

The director kept talking, but I stopped listening. Right now, it was a struggle for me to even keep my eyes open. What time is it? I didn’t know. My watch was still back on the nightstand in the cabin. I nudged Angela and tapped my wrist. She looked down at her watch and muttered, “Seven thirty.”

“It’s too early,” I groaned. “I’m sneaking to the cabin after breakfast and going back to sleep.”

“Same,” Angela said.

Then the director said something that made my ears perk up. “This morning, you will go canoeing. You will be dividing into pairs and spending some time paddling around the lake.”

I immediately turned to my other side and grabbed Alexis’s arm. Alexis smiled and nodded.

After Angela saw that, she pointed to Koko, leaving Sarah as the odd one out.

Sarah’s eyes darted around seeking another familiar face in the crowded dining hall.

Alexis and I walked to the dock arm in arm. When we got there, we joined the line of kids waiting to climb into blue canoes. The line shrunk little by little. Finally, we stepped carefully into a canoe. It began wobbling. I put my hands out to the side to keep my balance. When we were both seated with our life vests on, a camp counselor pushed us away from the dock.

Alexis and I spent the next half an hour paddling around the lake.

I tried to talk to Alexis about topics I found interesting, but she didn’t know much about the things I liked.

“This is boring,” I said and threw my paddle into the lake.

“Why did you do that?” Alexis asked, from the back of the boat.

I watched my paddle float away. “I was tired. But you can still paddle.”

“I can’t do all the paddling myself.”

“Fine. Can you get us closer so I can grab my paddle?”

Alexis dipped her own paddle under the surface of the water. I heard her heavy breathing as she steered us in the right direction.

As we got nearer, I leaned over the left side of the canoe. The whole thing tilted.

“Careful,” Alexis warned.

I ignored her. My fingertips reached out farther, dancing across the surface.

“You’re about to tip us over.”

“I’ve almost got it.”

Finally, my fingertips grasped the handle of the paddle.

I pulled the paddle in and said, “Let’s go to shore.”

Tommy Reed was standing at the end of the dock when we arrived. He knelt and reached down to steady the back of the boat. I thought Tommy was helping us, like a gentleman. He wasn’t.

After we stood up, Tommy rocked the boat.

“Stop!” I screamed.

“Make me,” Tommy said.

Alexis grasped her paddle firmly. She swung it and smacked Tommy on his side. He let out a yelp, gave Alexis a dirty look, and ran off.

We climbed onto the dock. Unharmed.

“Are you okay?” Alexis asked me.

“Yes,” I said, shaking off my nerves. But I think I’ve had enough of this camp. Walk back to my cabin with me.”

Alexis and I tied up the canoe and returned our life vests to a nearby rack. Then we hurried back to my cabin.

“Tommy tried to tip us over!” I exclaimed when I barged in.

“You’re not wet,” Angela said, observing me from her bunk.

“Well, he wasn’t successful.”

Angela noticed Alexis slipping in behind me and sneered, “What’s she doing here?”

“I invited her. She stopped Tommy.”

“How?”

“She hit him with her paddle.”

“What?”

“Yeah, she hit him, and he ran away.” I looked at Alexis and asked her, “Can you wait outside a minute?”

“Sure,” she said. I watched her go. Her long black hair swished behind her.

After she left, I closed the door and turned back to the other members of my girl group—the Fab Four. “I have an idea,” I started. “We haven’t chosen a new group member this school year.”

“That’s because we’re the only cool kids in fifth grade,” Angela said.

“Alexis was amazing back at the docks. Let’s ask her to join our group.”

Angela pouted. “Then we won’t be the Fab Four anymore.”

“We can choose another name. We can be the Fierce Five.”

Koko and Sarah agreed immediately. But it took a few more minutes to convince Angela.

“Why do you want her?” Angela asked.

“Alexis is the one, trust me,” I said. “She is Meg’s only friend.” Angela groaned. “What?”

“Meg Greene is all we talk about, ever since she insulted you.”

“Angela, you don’t understand. Meg didn’t just insult me, but also the whole group.” Angela didn’t respond. “Don’t you see? This is how we get back at her. So, can Alexis join our group?”

“Fine,” Angela sighed.

I flung the door open and dragged Alexis back into the cabin. “We want you to hang out with us.”

“But camp’s over. We’re leaving soon,” Alexis said.

“No, you don’t understand. We want you to join our new group—the Fierce Five—and hang out with us at school.”

Alexis smiled.

I took that as a yes. “Okay, let’s celebrate our newest member,” I said, grabbing my book bag and holding it upside down over Sarah’s bed. Candy came raining out, showering the bed with lollipops, chocolate bars, and gum.

Angela, Koko, and Sarah dove their hands into the large pile, grabbing fistfuls of candy.

“Do you want something?” I asked Alexis.

“My parents don’t let me eat candy,” Alexis said.

“You’re kidding? What about Halloween?”

Alexis shook her head.

“Wow, they must be really strict.” I picked up a lollipop and twirled it between my fingers. “Here, this one’s for you.” I held out the lollipop to Alexis. She looked at the treat. “Take the sucker,” I said, shaking it in front of her face. “It’s got your name on it. Don’t worry, we won’t tell your parents. I promise. Your secret’s safe with us.”

The other girls nodded with full mouths.

Alexis took the sucker, peeled the plastic off, and shoved it in her mouth.

***

A little while later, parents started arriving to pick up their kids.

I had already arranged a ride home with Angela. Her dad dropped me off at my house and waited in the driveway until I got the front door unlocked and stepped inside.

“Hello?” I called out. No response came, not even an echo to greet me. I lived in this enormous house all alone.

About the author

I am a teacher and writer living in C.A. I like to read historical fiction and write middle grade fiction. view profile

Published on November 27, 2020

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Genre: Children's

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