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Becky's Choice: A Ghost's Story

By Diane Green

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    Multi-textured and expertly written, this warm, rich read is a delightful blend of history, mystery, and teen romance. Two thumbs up!

    Synopsis

    "I’m Becky Chalmers. I’m 15-years-old. Uncle Beasley, the family history buff took me on an archive adventure to hunt for an American Revolutionary War hero; instead, I found a ghost—a ghost with a story. In addition, there are two boys who’ve captured my heart. Teenage life is complicated. Somehow everything got stirred together. Here’s my advice; if you don’t believe in ghosts—believe. And if you have to choose between two great boys—pray."

    Becky Chalmers, a teen goes on an adventure in the State Archives with her historian uncle. What she finds in a haunted annex hallway is a ghost. The ghost tells her a heartbreaking story. Living life as a normal teenager—school and friends—changes when the story turns into a thriller. In the end Becky has to make a choice, a choice she will have to live with forever.

    An archive adventure. An aproned ghost. A family feud and a kidnapping. The return of a lost love. They’re all part of Diane Green’s immensely entertaining romantic suspense, Becky’s Choice: A Ghost's Story.


    They’re baaaack. The characters you know and love from Diane Green’s prior work, Becky Likes Boys, are in rare and wondrous form in this follow-on story set in Yardley, Pennsylvania. In this clever mystery, readers are reunited with Sharon, Becky’s “sister-friend” and trusted confidante; Scotty Cadwallader, who’s convinced he’s her boyfriend and is home from military school; Becky’s old heart throb, Juan Carlos, and Juan’s five year-old niece, Tessa.


    Fifteen year-old Becky is excited about joining her bookish Uncle Beasley on a research adventure to the State House archives. They’re hot on the trail of an American Revolutionary War Deputy Quartermaster, Moore Furman, of New Jersey. When Becky wanders off, she runs into an elderly woman with a mop. Becky soon finds herself in a dimly lit room with the cleaning lady and a painting that may or may not be Moore Furman.


    Meanwhile, the cleaning woman, Minnie Homeier, tells Becky a story about a little girl named Lily. Think Hans Christian Andersen’s The Little Match Girl. (The story-within-a story angle is brilliant!) Minnie later reveals that Lily was her little sister who died tragically as a young girl. Is Minnie real, or is she something else?


    Becky barely has time to ponder this when she later spies a “hauntingly familiar” shadow. Could it be Juan Carlos? It is. But with the pain of his prior departure still “achingly fresh,” Becky’s not sure what to make of Juan’s sudden reappearance. It all comes to a head when Juan explains that Tessa has been kidnapped. She’s later spotted at the State House archives. Will Minnie think Tessa is her deceased sister, Lily, and try to hide Tessa from everyone?


    There’s also family. Friendship. A Christmas cookie party. The pink fish catastrophe. And the richness of loving. It all adds up to a warm and wonderful read. As before, the author expertly captures the swirling and ever-changing emotions of preteens and young teens as well as their anxieties, uncertainties, hopes and dreams. The skill and sensitivity evident here will certainly resonate with its target audience.


    Note that this book opens with a brief “historical preamble” regarding the Pennsylvania setting and the cast of characters. This may be a little confusing for some readers and have them scratching their heads. But the story gets back on track quickly when Becky gets asked out on a date by Scotty Cadwallader. Then it’s off to the races in this delightful blend of history, mystery, and teen romance that'll keep you guessing and turning pages until the very end.


    Scene stealer: Trenton Detective Mike Myer. He has a surprising familial connection. But you’ll have to read the book yourself to find out more.


    As is the case with other books in the Becky Chalmers series, Becky’s Choice clocks in at just under one hundred pages. It’s a lithe and agile read that’s briskly paced and expertly written. Becky’s Choice can be read as part of this faith-flavored series or as a stand-alone.

     

    Finally, in my review of Becky Likes Boys, I urged readers to keep an eye out for Green’s next book. And Becky’s Choice doesn’t disappoint. Its target audience of teen and young adult readers will thoroughly enjoy this warm, rich read. Two thumbs up and more, please!

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    Synopsis

    "I’m Becky Chalmers. I’m 15-years-old. Uncle Beasley, the family history buff took me on an archive adventure to hunt for an American Revolutionary War hero; instead, I found a ghost—a ghost with a story. In addition, there are two boys who’ve captured my heart. Teenage life is complicated. Somehow everything got stirred together. Here’s my advice; if you don’t believe in ghosts—believe. And if you have to choose between two great boys—pray."

    Becky Chalmers, a teen goes on an adventure in the State Archives with her historian uncle. What she finds in a haunted annex hallway is a ghost. The ghost tells her a heartbreaking story. Living life as a normal teenager—school and friends—changes when the story turns into a thriller. In the end Becky has to make a choice, a choice she will have to live with forever.

    This book is adapted and enhanced from Diane Campbell Green’s “A Ghost’s Story,” entered in the Reedsy Prompt Contest # 189, March 2023


    Chapter 1

    Yardley

    Yardley, Pennsylvania, is a lovely little town on the Delaware River. The area was first occupied by the Turtle Clan of the Lenape Nation, who lived as farmers and fishermen. The Lenape are described as people with gentle hearts. William Yeardley (later spelled Yardley) bought a 519-acre tract from William Penn and settled on this land in July 1682. Yardley and his family were Quakers. (A Quaker is a member of the Religious Society of Friends, a Christian movement devoted to peaceful principles.) They called their home ‘Prospect Farm’ and family members lived there for over 150 years. In the early years, Yardley had two flour mills and a ferry line. Later, there was a sawmill locally noted for its five o’clock whistle that could be heard all over town in the 1960s. 8 Until the mid-twentieth century, Yardley and the surrounding countryside was still relatively open and in agricultural use. In the 1950s, the Cadwallader Court (Kad Wall Der Kort) neighborhood was built. Sturdy, compact, cookie-cutter homes were constructed, and veterans of World War II settled in them to raise families. The population of Yardley hasn’t changed much since 1960. The United States Census records of that year list 2,271 people residing in Yardley. In 2020, Yardley’s population was 2,498 people. Across the mighty Delaware River from Yardley, lies Trenton. Trenton was established by Quakers as well. On Christmas of 1776, George Washington and his army crossed the Delaware (no small feat) and defeated the Hessian troops garrisoned there to assist the British. Recently, I stumbled on a wonderful essay by Yardley Librarian, Doris Chapman. * (I played with Nadine Chapman as a child.) “Where would you find a more picturesque scene in the summer than little boys fishing on the banks of the Lake or parents on their way to the library with small children and bags of corn or bread to feed the ducks, or the children 9 in the house across the lake paddling their canoe to the library or watching the growth of families of ducks in the spring…. Winter was more of a problem. The Yardley Recreation Board installed flood lights for night skating, which were great for the skaters, but hectic for the library staff. We had phone calls as to the safety of the ice = “was it frozen?” The library patrons had problems with people blocking the steps while putting on their skates. …We had skaters try to enter the library with their skates on to use the lavatory. They used our porch railings and lakeside wooden benches to chop up for firewood to be used in bonfires to keep warm. We had hockey pucks sail through the windows…. We put Band-Aids on skaters’ boo boos, and the next morning we picked up skaters’ hats, scarves, socks, etc. We also rescued ducks frozen in the ice.” “Halcyon Days: Recollections of the Old Library,” Yardley Historical Association, 2023. *I must add that my character, Maxine Pincher, in the Becky Chalmers Series, is strictly imaginary and only like Mrs. Chapman in Maxine’s gracious moments. 10 It is no exaggeration that Yardley was and is a marvelous place to have lived in or to live in now. See “Yardley, Pa.: An Affordable Option Between New York and Philadelphia,” The New York Times, by Dave Caldwell, Oct. 20, 2021.

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    Diane Green crafts stories that blend nostalgia, faith, and timeless charm, captivating readers young and old. Diane brings her love for history and storytelling to life through characters and worlds celebrating life's quiet moments, the power of community, and the enduring magic of redemption. view profile

    Published on June 15, 2023

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