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“A Little Something to Hide” is an original and innovative book, delving into the lives of passengers on a fateful bus ride.

Synopsis

Some people want to take their secrets to the grave. On the Briscola Coach Service to Albuquerque, that’s just not possible.

“All manner of people ride a Briscola coach. Some travel toward dreams, others are escaping horrors, each carries their secrets and the belief that they harbour truths known only to themselves.”

A Little Something To Hide is an exploration of the human condition. Every traveller on the coach believes they’re harbouring a secret that none of the world can see. Some secrets are darker than others and none of them are truly hidden. Climb aboard to learn more and remember, never trust the person you’re next to, no matter how sweet they look.

Craig Brown’s book “A Little Something to Hide” is delivered in a series of eleven vignettes – one self-contained story for each character.  Each of the characters featured in the book is traveling on a low budget bus service from San Francisco to Albuquerque, all of them escaping a life they want to leave behind for a better future at their destination.


Craig Brown has succeeded in creating interesting and engaging characters in his book. The concept and delivery of the individual story lines is effective and compelling.  The characters in the book have strong individual personalities; some have been terribly mistreated by family members and associates. Others are escaping from wretched and dangerous situations. Craig has shown remarkable insight into the lives of these characters, aptly portraying the impact on those characters and their various reactions to the abuses they have suffered. Other characters are perpetrators that are looking to conceal their history by seeking a new life.


The subject matter is sometimes sleazy and immoral, however Craig has rendered the narrative in a non-judgemental manner, leaving the reader to form their own opinion of the morality of each character.


Although each chapter is a stand-alone story, there is some interaction between the various characters as the stories unfold, offering further insight into each character’s personality and relationships.


The ending is strong and effective, providing a fitting outcome to the series of narratives.


I have scored the book 4 stars out of 5.  I was fully engaged with the story and the individual characters. Unfortunately there are several editing and spelling errors that detract from the overall  enjoyment of the book, but generally it is a compelling story that kept my interest to the last page.


The book will appeal to a broad range of readers who enjoy crime stories and contemporary fiction.  

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Synopsis

Some people want to take their secrets to the grave. On the Briscola Coach Service to Albuquerque, that’s just not possible.

“All manner of people ride a Briscola coach. Some travel toward dreams, others are escaping horrors, each carries their secrets and the belief that they harbour truths known only to themselves.”

A Little Something To Hide is an exploration of the human condition. Every traveller on the coach believes they’re harbouring a secret that none of the world can see. Some secrets are darker than others and none of them are truly hidden. Climb aboard to learn more and remember, never trust the person you’re next to, no matter how sweet they look.

Prologue

Somewhere between San Francisco and Albuquerque, a lone woman steps onto the battered Briscola coach that will take her to where her life will be different. As she steps onto the bus, the first passenger she passes gives her a shy smile. His smile says Hello, but his eyes say, Please don’t sit next to me. The unspoken message doesn’t bother her, she’s comfortable with travelling alone, she has much to consider.

She is neither troubled by his look, or that which she is leaving behind. In many respects, the only regret that she carries is that she didn’t act sooner, but she’s a patient woman, pleased with what she’s done. There are others on the bus who, in their way, harbour similar sentiments.

A calm settles over her when she sits, rummaging through her bag, taking from it the photos that she carries with her wherever she goes. She spends time looking at each of the images, those that she loves, lamenting that which she has lost by leaving things for too long. Still, she thinks. It’s done now.

Restoring the photos to her bag, she burrows further, equipping herself for the journey, a woman content, believing herself to be ready for whatever comes next.

To look at her, you wouldn’t know that lying in the basement of the house she left that morning is a man whose head is twisted at an impossible angle, wearing a rictus smile that suggests he might have enjoyed his final moments. The woman doesn’t look like your average murderer, but then, does anyone really know what a typical murderer looks like? I am better placed than most to provide an opinion, and what I can tell you, is that they don’t all look the same. No one on the coach is likely to suspect her, nor would most of them know, that she’s not the only killer travelling to Albuquerque.


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About the author

Craig Brown is a Kiwi-born author living in the United Kingdom. ‘A Little Something To Hide’ is his debut novel. view profile

Published on November 19, 2024

120000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Contemporary Fiction

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