Neale Sourna is an award-winning published author (since 2002) and a writing and editing freelancer (since 2006); writing and editing fiction, semi-fiction, and nonfiction, but mostly fiction.
Client work includes: novella / novels; short stories; game narrative / game stories; screenplays / scripts; sales training scripts, and more.
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CLIENT PROJECTS INCLUDE:
ROMANTIC CULTURAL NOVEL from Memoir—reworking a French Canadian journalist’s personal memoir notes, emails, and my questions about her search for love in mainland China and Singapore while teaching English. Formed into a publishable first draft story about culture clashes and love conflicts when more than one culture and more than one language or dialect is involved in love.
o better individualized characters and actions (including hiding real life identities)
o individualized dialogs / dialogues for varying new language skills among her Chinese and Singaporean friends
o investigating and artfully showing culture differences of Communist capitalism lain over old Chinese Communism which is lain over Old China’s ancient culture of interactions between women and men
SPIRITUAL HORROR SCREENPLAY—reading for analysis to describe changes that could be made to improve the client author’s original work, then rewriting and editing client’s spiritual (Judeo – Christian ethos) feature screenplay
o upping overall and specific high and low stakes o increasing hazards to life and death and beyond
o ratcheting up personal threats to hero – hero’s family – hero’s friends – hero’s love and lover
o clarifying the Powers of Hero, Angels, and Demons for the audience
o broadening and deepening spiritual aspect with viable Eastern spiritualities
o Also redo of logline and synopsis.
URBAN GIRLFRIENDS TREATMENT to present to film backers—pulling from client notes a storyline and treatment to show the arcs and interactions of the loves and stresses within a group of African American sisters and college friends in their lives, loves, and careers.
o Individualized characters for heightened characterizations
o Redo real life people to hide identities in well-known entertainment corporations
o Established personal and career threats: emotional, love / marriages, sanity, etc
Game stories, short stories, novella / novels from brief premise or loose outline (usually without)
FANTASY NOVEL DRAFT TWEAK—to proof and add more humanity
SPIRITUAL SPORTS NOVEL—first draft rewrite to clarify characters and spiritual explanations and goals
o Ardor The Game (Netherlands) (2014) for Human Curious – edited game design documents, game play materials and card texts
o “The Brazil Story.” (2013) Client invited. Ghostwriting 30 page multicultural / interracial romance story for Ophelia Madison Press (MD USA)
Sin City Comic (2015 - 2016) story narrative;
Lovecraft Project (2015) initial game story and design elements adapted from author’s novels;
“Girl With Tattoos” full game narrative and game design (2014)
“Mysterious Island” (zombie) full game (2014)
“Tattoo Girl” test short game (2014);
Yacht / Zombie Island Game test story and design (2013);
360 Demo hotel story (2013);
5 Theme Monologues (2013);
24 Profiles (200 word character stories, fantasy site seeds) (2013)
7 Recipes rewrite;
Adult Sleuth: 7 Days Game story rewrite, additional storywriting and editing (2011) adult detective narrative
o Canadian in China romance memoir—fictionalizing and organizing story base for nonfiction events and “characters,” character dialog,
Formed novel's first publishable draft for client from her emails, notes, and requested input from writer research.
o Website fiction content writer (2+ yrs) for 3 Australian websites (romance, honeymoon, sci-fi / fantasy)
• "Becca" (a short story novel, 6 of the chapters) A swashbuckling pirate story!
_Cornwall, England UK; 1680s
• "Outback Love" [aka "Mail Order Love"] in three (3) act chapters
_Coober Pedy, South Australia; 1919
• "Samurai Days" & "Samurai Nights"
_Kyoto, Japan; 1600s
Plus, five wedding night stories here:
• "Frictionless Sheets" Intergalactic Deep Space sometime in the Future
• "The Veil: 1846" Gretna Green, Scotland
• "No Touching" USA, Today
• "Empty Nest Honeymoon" Australia and Pradesh, India
• "Iraqi Honeymoon" Fallujah, Iraq
o Screenplay rewriting editor (overhauled: dialog, visual descriptions, emotional levels and stakes)—for a Toronto scriptwriter, about Heaven and Hell spiritual power in the everyday
Also separate project for logline, synopsis rewrites.
o Orchid Games (Poland)
Heartwild 1 and 2 Games story narrative update (2013);
Brainstorm HOPA game title (2013)—“Graven: The Purple Moon Prophecy”
o Orchid Games (Poland) with Sandlot Games Game story segments writer, beta tester, promotion quiz writer, romance PC solitaire game
“Heartwild Solitaire: Book Two” (2010)
1. Branched game story segments writer (characters, story, narrative design).
2. Beta tester.
“Heartwild Solitaire: Author’s Edition” Level Name Titling (2010);
“Heartwild Solitaire: Quiz” (2009)
“Heartwild Solitaire: Author’s Edition” / “Heartwild Solitaire” [E for Everyone Edition] (2007, PC and Mac)
1. Game story segments writer (characters, story).
2. Beta tester
A wedding, a reception brawl, and the bride and groom’s wedding night will be in jail. Or will it?_866 words Romance
A post Second World War (WWII) love story/novel excerpt.The war’s been over two years; but, days ago Temple and her little dog Wuffer found Tommy, drinking the morning’s milk outside the door of his own family home, like a stray tomcat, finally returned, after seven long years, from God only knows what covert war ventures.Temple is now a young widow, who’s kept her adopted home safe, its heart... read more
3 Articles: (1) Seduce Her Like Keanu Reeves (2) Ten, Yes, 10 (Ten) of The Best, Easiest, Romantic Seduction Secrets, from Keanu Reeves' Performances (3) Bonus: The Bad List of Bad Lovers. By Neale Sourna www.ProjectKeanu.com
Dot com queen, Lara, runs an internet dating hookup site for “rough sex.” Her own boring romantic life has her observing the online site communications of a client, named Wil.She makes contact with him, as Dennie, one of her online aliases, who “works for her.”When Wil decides he wants to meet “Dennie” in the flesh, Lara puts herself in a perilous position, because this rough stud might just b... read more
Annie’s new temp, Ryan, with the fascinating ass, is great at his job, even on his very first day; but, he’s driving her to distraction and she can’t get anything done!When Annie works late and alone, to catch up on work, gorgeous Ryan returns in order to show her what he’s really freelancing in; loving Annie._1558 wds Soft Romantic Erotica
Young Dia is a naughty cheerleader, who prefers older men, well, one particular older man. She wants everyone’s favorite team coach and teacher, Mr. Dean. He’s been good and strong, resisting her; but, he’s weakening....And lovely Dia always gets what she wants.So, when she enters Mr. Dean’s home, in nothing but lace and desire, he’ll break and switch gears, teaching teenager Dia what a man, ... read more
Dia’s the only cheerleader on the team bus filled with excited, champion ball players, managers, a middle-aged co-coach, and everyone’s favorite Mr. Dean.Willing Dia would do ANYTHING for her man’s pleasure. So, Mr. D will test his girl’s trust and love for him, because the man has a hot and hard surprise for her AND his teenaged athletes, on the long ride home after their championship win. Ev... read more
Native American surgeon BENNET GILLESPIE is brilliant, burned out and "on sabbatical," maybe permanently, as he, literally, falls for an irresistible and dangerous African American beauty, DAY. Unfortunately, she's a legally homicidally "insane" and ... mysteriously lamed, child-woman, who pulls Benn into an already intense obsessive and erotic tug-of-war for her possession with HOPKINS, her o... read more
BENNET GILLESPIE, a successful, yet burned out half Native American medical professional, crashes into a recuperating "innocent" beauty on the beach; beginning an obsessive, sexual triangle with the seductive African American, DAY, who's jealously guarded by HOPKINS, her overbearing, elderly British stepfather, and lover. Benn's a master manipulator, but he could, in fact, literally lose his h... read more
STEVE is a horrid bad boy, envious of friend ALEX's turn-around attitude with his soon-to-be new love, KARA, but grandma's monkey's paw, gives Steve complete control over anyone he wants; even Alex's sweet new lady; against her will.... Plus MORE, there are more stories and fascinating excerpts from Neale's award-winning novel, HOBBLE, and more novels soon to come. Neale Sourna is the award-wi... read more
In ancient times, a legendary half Egyptian general's rage and jealousy may be his downfall, when he seeks to break a sacred alliance between his Amazon shaman / sorceress mate and her allies. [erotica novel excerpt, over 10,000 wds!] Ancient Warrior Romantic Erotica, Egyptians, Amazons, Shamanic Sorcery and True Magic, and Evil, Murderous BetrayalsI had a dream, literally, and it was a wordle... read more
A businesswoman's emotional conflict between overthinking versus her erotic needs is tested when she's caught in the rain with the man who keeps her mind and emotions distracted. But, will she overthink a playful shower together, too?_3218 words Erotic Romance short story [a shorter version published in Playgirl Magazine]Plus a Bonus Love Poem: A Lesson in Passion
Erotic Short Stories, Poems, and Novel Excerptshttp://libidinous.neale-sourna.com/(updated file May 2016)
A lawyer makes a pilgrimage to a corporate titan in order to get his help with freeing her client from a death sentence. She knows he's ... "interested" in her. But, her appeal to this billionaire's sense of justice won't be enough; she'll have to curry and satisfy his lust for her in order to save her client's life. But can they both just walk away afterward? http://libidinous.neale-sourna.co... read more
Basketball jock Yune gets his stone hard, young Korean American cock sucked by a first time knob munching, K.A. church virgin, while his favorite, bespectacled, brown-skinned teen goddess secretly watches, and then later he’s sucked off by a classmate’s red-haired, society MILF mom. What a great birthday week he’s having! =====Fellatio with voyeuristic exhibition, a humiliation cream facial, a... read more
Cunnilingus: How to Give Head (Oral Sex and Eating Pussy), for Giving Women Orgasms of Cuntlicious Joy! Info and Sex Games!Sex Advice Includes: Helpful information, diagrams, clear instructions, plus fiction excerpts and sexy games to encourage better sexual knowledge, deeper understanding and clearer feelings.www.SexSinger.com Renamed from CuntSinger
Have her fall completely in love with THE WAY YOU MAKE LOVE to her.She’ll NEVER say, “No,” again. Neale Sourna’s CuntSingerCunnilingus: How to Give Head (Oral Sex and Eating Pussy), for Giving Women Orgasms of Cuntlicious Joy! Sex Advice Includes: Helpful information, diagrams, clear instructions, plus fiction excerpts and sexy games to encourage better sexual knowledge, deeper understanding a... read more
Sex Advice and Instruction: Cunnilingus How to Give Head (Oral Sex and Eating Pussy), for Giving Women Orgasms of Cuntlicious Joy! Info and Games! Includes: Helpful information, diagrams, clear instructions, plus fiction excerpts and sexy games to encourage better sexual knowledge, deeper understanding and clearer feelings. www.SexSinger.com Renamed from CuntSinger
Self help: Sexual instruction Cunnilingus: How to Give Head (Oral Sex and Eating Pussy), for Giving Women Orgasms of Cuntlicious Joy! Info and Sex Games! Sex Advice Includes: Helpful information, diagrams, clear instructions, plus erotica fiction excerpts and sexy games to encourage better sexual knowledge, deeper understanding and clearer feelings. www.CuntSinger.com Also available as Neale S... read more
A sexy woman, a nameless man; she picks him up, as her husband watches, then she invites the new man to enjoy sex with them in their wealthy suburban home. Swingers, threeway sex, and more. _9078 wordshttp://stories.neale-sourna.com/three-invitation.html
Dez is a willful, stubborn hottie, the bisexual top stripper and erotic dancer [exotic dancer] at Max’s club; independent to the bone, she won’t be controlled.But, enter Mr. Dark, a powerful, dangerous, wealthy player, a corporate gangsta with an eye only for sexy Ms. Dez. He’s certain he can teach this free girl a few things.In lust and love, what is “control,” what is “danger,” when two head... read more
A bisexual, male Professor, newly tenured and bored at his college's Student / Faculty mixer, discovers two young Freshmen openly having sex--a gorgeous, brown-skinned classic Greek "godling" and a beautiful, gold-skinned mixed race male. Professor's enormous "Clydesdale-Shire" of a "horse cock" and his superior use of it lures the two to pursue and invite him for intimate, private sex fun, du... read more
A bonus story formerly found with the short story “Tenure (MMM)”: Professor privately tutors a certain Tight End footballer. The boy will definitely get more than his grades up, to save his place on the team, while Prof rams knowledge into him._5934 words approx.
A bisexual, male Professor, newly tenured and bored at his college's Student / Faculty mixer, discovers two young Freshmen openly having sex--a gorgeous, brown-skinned classic Greek "godling" and a beautiful, gold-skinned mixed race coed female. Professor's enormous "Clydesdale-Shire" of a "horse cock" and his superior use of it lures the two to pursue and invite him for intimate, private sex ... read more
A bonus story formerly found with the short story “Tenure (MFM)”: Professor privately tutors a certain Tight End footballer. The boy will definitely get more than his grades up, to save his place on the team, while Prof rams knowledge into him._5930 words approx.
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