Contemporary Fiction

The Surgeon's Obol


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Isabella "Izzie" Isaksen finds herself enrolled in a surgical internship at the ball-busting program that is Ohio Memorial General Hospital. She experiences the highs of performing challenging operations and the lows of watching helplessly as good people pass less than gently into that good night. She delights in her colleagues that never tire of recounting sometimes telling, sometimes hilarious "war stories" of surgical encounters past and present. She discovers that the price of survival in this place is different for each person; she must discard the warm embrace of faith to make sense of the tragedy that befalls the innocent throughout her year as a neophyte surgeon. She finds hope and confidence in herself by surviving the first year ordeals at the O.M.G. Hospital. Each chapter has a wry, gruesome, or salacious tale that shapes Izzie's character as a young woman endeavoring to succeed amidst the testosterone, emotional adolescence, blood, guts and pus that fuel this brave but sometimes bewildering world of injury and affliction.

Call Me Izzie

July 1st Eight P.M.

“Isabella Isaksen,” I said with an arm extended. “ Most people call me ‘Izzie’.”

“Mike Gunderson,” came the reply. Most people called him Gundy but he didn’t feel the need to let me, the goddamn intern, in on this. And there was no doubt that I was an intern. My short white coat, de rigueur for the interns at Ohio Memorial General Hospital, was blindingly white and so starched I could be heard coming down the hall. My coat had had the femininely rounded lapels that set me apart from the rest of my classmates; I didn’t appreciate this divergence from the norm of the rest of my peers in the intern class. So much so, that I altered the lapels the night before I had to wear the thing for real, to give it a more rigid, masculine look, silently thanking my grandmother in the process for teaching me how to sew.

The transfigured coat was also crammed full of pocket guidebooks, paper, a reflex hammer, calipers for reading EKG tracings, prescription pads, bandages, rubber tourniquets for drawing blood and a host of flashlights, flashcards and ballpoint pens crammed into the upper breast pocket. My stethoscope was draped around my neck, almost hidden among the dark tresses framing my face. My eyes, darting from person to person and place to place, belied my cool exterior.

“First night on call, huh?” Gunderson asked, knowing full well the answer. “Scared?”

“Naw…. I’m ok,” I came back a little unsteady.

“Well you should be scared. I just about wet myself my first night on call,” Gundy smiled testing my mettle.

“Really? We’ll maybe a little,” I admitted, holding index finger and thumb a few millimeters apart to lend imagery to my trepidation.

“The night can be very frightening in this place when you are on your own with a crashing patient,” he warned.

Michael Gunderson was thirty-three years old, more educated than 99.99% of the population of the world, and was married with three little kids at home. He worked 100 hours a week, was on call seven days a week, 24 hours a day, and made less than a union pipefitter, which he never tired of letting us know. He hailed from Appleton, Wisconsin where they qualified apparently true statements with “Yoo betcha’” or “Dontcha know.” They drank “sodah,” ate “brahts” and rooted for “da Pack” like Republicans root for tax cuts. His wife, from Eagle River, was beyond bitter at the treatment of her husband and her family by this place and this life. He was biding his time until he could enter private practice in upstate Wisconsin and be more than adequately compensated for his time and energy.

We were in line at the “Feed.” The cafeteria would corner off a section of the dining hall at dinnertime for the residents on call and laid out the leftovers from lunch, cattle-call style, for the residents to scarf down. The only upside to the whole process was that the food was free. You couldn’t be late or there’d be no food and you’d have to bum something from a patient too sick to eat or liberate some crackers and Ensure shakes from the patient supplemental dietary cart. The attraction for the junior residents was the opportunity to relax a little from the stresses of the day and listen to the senior residents as they held court, telling war stories of difficult surgeries or run in’s with “the Boss” or “Pops” as Patterson was colloquially known.

“You’re a chief resident right?” I asked Gunderson.

“That’s right. Where do you start? Who’s your chief?” Gundy asked me as he began filling up his tray with some sort of meat dish. “Extra gravy, Sally, if you don’t mind,” he insisted to the gal behind the hot food counter.

“Tony Smythe,” I admitted.

“All right, well they started you off on Surg Onc, in the frying pan. That’s a tough service.” Gundy eyed me, not so subtly, up and down. He had filled his tray up with meat and potatoes, ice cream and tea. I had no appetite and just got coffee.

Gundy led me towards the tables where the rest of the residents on call were settling down for the feed. As we passed one of the large trash cans, Gunderson sat his tray down on a nearby table and said, “Come here, kid.”

“Yeah?” I responded perplexed.

Gunderson started going through my coat pockets, like a seasoned army veteran might treat a green recruit. He threw away my calipers, notepads, flashlights, reflex hammer, tourniquets and all but one of my handbooks. He pocketed one of my generic prescription pads for himself.

“But I might need that stu...” I protested.

“Believe me you won’t. You need to travel light. That coat weighed 25 pounds. You’re gonna need that neck when you grow up. Now it’s just right. Oh and one more thing, stow that damn stethoscope in your pocket. You look like a goddamn flea.”

I knew from medical school that a “flea” was the derogatory moniker for the internist or internal medicine resident. An internist was the cerebral antithesis of the surgeon who fought disease with pills, lozenges, infusions, incessant rounding and mental masturbation instead of cold, hard steel. The “flea” was the last thing to leave a dying dog, and the internist, who took almost all patients under his auspices, especially those not fit for surgery, wound up treating a lot of dying “dogs.”

“Now go back in line and get something to eat, put that fucking coffee away and go meet me at that table over there.” Gunderson pointed to a table full of guys and one girl who were summoning him by waving and yelling his name.

I returned to the line and filled my tray with food I would barely feed to my dog back home. I found Gunderson sitting down with an eclectic gathering of scrub-attired veterans of the holy war I was eager to experience.

“Izzie this is everyone, everyone this is Izzie,” Gunderson succinctly made the introductions.

“Nice intro, Gumby,” replied Sarah Trimble, a fourth year resident, a year younger than Gunderson.

“Who am I, Martha ‘Fuckin’ Stewart? Anyway the kid can read your goddamn nametag, right? Am I right?” Gunderson insisted.

“I’m Sarah Trimble.”

“Isabella Isaksen,” I said politely standing to shake her hand. “Izzie.”

“Welcome to River City,” she said sardonically. “What on earth made you want to come here?”

“Don’t mind her Izzie, she just likes being the only girl in the program,” warned Gunderson. Though we’re not really sure she is a girl.”

“Shut the fuck up Gumby,” countered Sarah. I was clearly taken aback with the sharp tongue of the sultry resident with coal black hair.

“No, it’s ok. I know the reputation of this place. Everyone back home thought I was a head case to come here…” I offered.

“Let me guess," Sarah interrupted, "your big daddy’s a doctor and he said you would never make it as a surgeon. So you thought you’d come to the most ball-busting program you could find to prove a point to him and the rest of the world who thought you should be a dermatologist."

“Ophthalmologist, actually,” I admitted, amazed at her clairvoyance. “He said I should be an ophthalmologist. Good hours, great pay, and no one dies on you.”

“Fuckin’ A. I knew it. You know what we got here, boys, a goddamn diva. I knew it,” Sarah exclaimed.

“Ease up Cruella, it’s her first fuckin day,” David Trent, a third year resident seated across from Gunderson, protested.

“Fuck you, Tea-rent.” She then turned to me, grabbing me by the scrubs with her coal black eyes. “Watch your back with this guy, sister; he’s got a real bad crack habit, if you know what I mean. Numb and dumb with an opposable thumb; that’s his type. Isn’t, Tea Rent?” she offered caustically.

“Shut the hell up,” he shot back. “Don’t listen to her kid. She’s an asshole. This is why tigers eat their young.”

“I gotta go so you two cunning linguists can make out over dessert,” she offered simultaneously smiling deviously at Trent and sneering at the new girl.

“Don’t mind her she was dropped on her head as an intern,” Gundy offered. He then continued, looking right at me and said, “You see kid, here are the rules for an intern. You got to eat when you can, sleep when you can and get to the OR. Eat even if you feel sick; you never know when the next meal will come. Never drink coffee after 8 pm unless you know you’re gonna be up all night. Even an hour or two of sleep will keep you going the next day, which you won’t get if you're jazzed up on caffeine.”

“Ya, you betcha," aped Devin Grothaus, a second year, chiming in. Devin was the guy who could imitate any accent, Southerner, Northerner, Pakistani, Irish and make you laugh like he was on stage at the Chuckle Hut on dollar beer night. "Hey der, Gonderson, ya forget da most importent rooole, doncha know," he continued sounding like an Amish moron from up nort.

“Oh, yeah,” he exclaimed. “How could I forget? Don’t fuck with the Patterson.”

“Wait, I’ve heard these rules before. I thought it was ‘Don’t screw with the pancreas’,” I summoned from a previous reading of Samuel Shem and The House of God.

“Oh no,” Devin offered. “We love the pancreas. The Boss is a much more dangerous organ.”

About the author

I am a surgeon from Cincinnati, Ohio who loves caring for people and their stories. The Surgeon's Obol is meant to detail the price we all pay to get to where we want to go. I have written creatively for Doximity, General Surgery News, and for Vanderbilt magazine. view profile

Published on July 30, 2020

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70000 words

Contains explicit content ⚠️

Genre: Contemporary Fiction

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