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My Little Garden: Poetry Representing The Fragility of Daughterhood

By Elle Yoder

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A well-presented poetry book that digs deep for healing imagery yet fails to bloom because it is too rooted in the author’s toxic past.

Synopsis

Delving into the flower bed of recovery, finding rose petals to seal our wounds. Whether physical, emotional, sexual or otherwise. Discover the intimate healing process from the eyes of one daughter. My Little Garden tells the story of survival using the language of poetry.



Trauma survivors will relate to Elle Yoder’s poetry collection as its themes are universal to those who have suffered its pain. The book of 20 poems is divided into two sections, the first, Cocoon, reflecting a life stunted from abuse, the second, Monarch, meant to reflect healing.

Each poem is entitled for blooms, trees and creatures from nature’s abundance. The poetry shows talent, thought and effort. For example, in the poem Vine – about cutting umbilical cord to past pain – the author uses repetition, and repetitive symmetry to show in simple, strong words how trauma weaves through a life.

In Lavender, the poet’s lyricism is highlighted in the lines, “Kaleidoscopic views, Prismatic color hues Shining in as I take it in.” The poem Cotton, with the repeated phrase, “Chupacabra blood-red coming towards me,” displays a unique imagination. Cardinal, mixes fonts to indicate the back and forth in this ambitious, dual-voiced poem.

Unfortunately, the collection overuses blunt, negative imagery and phrases. Daffodil’s words reflect a lyrical longing for innocence – “Daffodil days and wishes well spent the sky and the clouds heaven-sent.” But the poem suffers for the last line, “Now I’ll be waiting here until you croak.”

Even lines in the poem, Garden, the poem that best reflects the book’s theme like, “And every day I feel as if I am the dirt in Eden beneath mortal feet” come across as critical, not redemptive.

The collection’s one- to three- word-per-line format could benefit from more poetic and stylistic devices and the poems could have been tightened to make their message stronger. Still, there is no doubt this book is a sincere attempt to tackle difficult and personal subject matter.

Yoder writes the poems are not autobiographical, however, their epilogue reads at times almost vengeful, being signed, “no love, daughter.” Other poetry books about trauma have used this type of letter, perhaps as catharsis. However, to reflect healing, the book could contain more promise for growth, a promise, despite the author’s worthy effort, that remains unfulfilled.






 


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Robin L Harvey has published the poetry book PTSD Poems to Slay Demons. She writes on pop culture, books, theatre and the arts for notthepublicbroadcaster.com and reviews for IndieReader. Over her career, she's been an award-winning reporter, editor, critic and public editor at The Toronto Star.

Synopsis

Delving into the flower bed of recovery, finding rose petals to seal our wounds. Whether physical, emotional, sexual or otherwise. Discover the intimate healing process from the eyes of one daughter. My Little Garden tells the story of survival using the language of poetry.

Vine

Your words tangle

around my neck


like

vines.


Tighter,

tighter


you wrap

around me.


You’ll

never


let me go,

but


you’ll never

love me.


If your words

were vines,


your hands

would be snakes


Slithering to

hold those in place.


Never to leave,

never to be free.


Expect so much,

but there is


so little

of me.


If your words

were vines,


and your hands

were snakes,


The scowl

on your face


would be a

disastrous hurricane.


Disapproval

deep within


the lines of

your face.


If your words

were vines,


And your hands

were snakes,


And the scowl

upon your face


was a disastrous

hurricane,


Then the

love you give


would be like water

in a drought.


Without

a doubt,


your vines

cut us down


until we are

bleeding out.


Your hands

hold us tight


until we

cannot fight.


Your scowl

cuts us deep.


The water

you feed us


in a little

porcelain spoon


nourishes us,

even if just


for a

moment,


we crave the soft

hug of the vines,


the gentle grasp

of the hands.


We even hope

the rain


of the hurricane

will allow


flowers to bloom

someday.


That little porcelain

spoon is


just enough

water


to keep us

at bay


Before we realize

you are


the one thing

in our way


To

self-actualization,


Self-love,

and self-care.


We realize

your vines are spiked,


And you go

without a care


For the wounds that cut us

and scar us,


and so you

leave us behind.


The moment we

take our scissors


and cut the

umbilical cord


that

is a vine


And realize

we’re just fine.

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