Nowadays, most of the girls, ladies and women all desire their lives live as freedom, independent and happily. Then, the popular topic in women is about women empowerment. So, I’m also one of them too. Thus why, I want to share my thoughts and experiences and quotes what I read. I desire that girls, ladies and women who live in all around the world must be strong, freedom and do what they want in their lives. I also want to them live as valuable by knowing their value. This book for all independent lives. I wrote this book by separating 4 parts. Every part has important messages match with titles.
Nowadays, most of the girls, ladies and women all desire their lives live as freedom, independent and happily. Then, the popular topic in women is about women empowerment. So, I’m also one of them too. Thus why, I want to share my thoughts and experiences and quotes what I read. I desire that girls, ladies and women who live in all around the world must be strong, freedom and do what they want in their lives. I also want to them live as valuable by knowing their value. This book for all independent lives. I wrote this book by separating 4 parts. Every part has important messages match with titles.
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I start writing this book what based on my experiences and reading. Nowadays, most of the girls, ladies and women all desire their lives live as freedom, independent and happily. Then, the popular topic in women is about women empowerment. So, I’m also one of them too. Thus why, I want to share my thoughts and experiences and quotes what I read. I desire that girls, ladies and women who live in all around the world must be strong, freedom and do what they want in their lives.Â
Independent Lady with Happy Life by Vyth Luna has an inspirational concept, however it could do with some fleshing out before it hits the commercial market. I must say, I was expecting this to be a book of vanity writing that was all about how the author managed to find their own happiness. Instead, the book provides an author letter that provides an overview of the four short sections. These sections include Self-Love, Passion, Educated, and Happiness. Already, the tense of the third section stands out as being odd and raises the question as to whether or not this should say ‘Education’ instead. More about errors later.
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It was a surprise to find the book was actually four sections that were actually a numbered list of statements. I think quotes would be incorrect, only because there is no evidence that these words were spoken or written by anyone other than the author. Thus, what is presented is the author’s rules to live by. The rules can be paraphrased as being true to oneself, accepting oneself for who they truly are whether that be a good or bad person, you reap what you sow, and not being afraid to demonstrate self-love, etc. It also talks about learning to help yourself rather than expecting health, wealth, and happiness to flow in abundance.
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The thoughts presented are honest, nothing that hasn’t been said in similar books, and entirely plausible. However, the book is poorly written and could use some editorial expertise as well as a trusted translator. Hailing from Myanmar, although the author has a good command of the English language that may serve them in a conversation setting, the written language needs some tinkering. The book included the use of odd tenses, weird phrasing, and several sections needed to be reread to make sense of them. Although the book is only around 3,000 words spanning 20 pages, it took longer to read than it otherwise might have done.
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As an example, I include some excerpts of advice posed:
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After truly yourself, show to others who you truly be. At that time, you will gain real relationships, friendships although you lose most of fake people. All fake people love fake things and all of real love real. Just live be yourself.
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Read book for knowledge and mature, not for show. You need to read all types of books. It’s ok you didn’t remember all about these books. But whenever you read one book, your character and knowledge will change little by little even though you can’t recognize yourself.
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With the necessary revisions made, this book could be suited to a young teenage audience. I would encourage the author to revisit the title as I think the book would boost the confidence and moral standing of young boys as well as girls. Of course, this will mean some of the initial statements will also need to lose their gender targeting but in its current state, the book needs thorough reviewing anyway. As part of the review, the book should also consider explaining some of the terms used in detail. For example, what is meant by the ‘inner child’ or ‘light side’ vs ‘dark side’. In its current format, the book is not suited to anyone as it would be difficult to view the author as any kind of authority when due care has not been taken to present the book in a way that is easily understood.Â