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Final Exam, The Don Weston prequel to 'Blame it on the Moon'

By Lou Pugliese

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A peek into Don Weston’s past in this riveting tale of missing persons, sexual liaisons, and murder in the prequel to BLAME IT ON THE MOON.

Synopsis

Don Weston left a long career of big-city policing in Philadelphia behind for a semi-retirement position as the Police Chief at Churchville University, a small liberal arts college. The new job is a pleasant slowdown from the urban career, allowing Don to pursue his other interests as an amateur Civil War historian and law enforcement consultant.
Like all other small liberal arts schools, Churchville faces the difficult survival struggles of declining enrollment, underendowment, and academic resistance to hard changes. The idyllic environment is increasingly threatened with uncertainty and the small community has become a hotbed of politics and administrative drama. Don is considering hanging up this career as well when the College Provost goes missing on a Monday and a preliminary investigation raises a number of questions for Don.
By the following weekend, another faculty member has committed suicide, and the body of the College President is discovered, gruesomely murdered, in the school auditorium. It falls on Don to pool the contacts and resources of his time in Philadelphia in solving a multi-faceted puzzle of clues and questionable relationships.
'Final Exam' is a prequel to my self-published 'Blame it on the Moon,' featuring several of the same characters.

Final Exam is author Lou Pugliese’s riveting prequel to his earlier cold-case historical mystery, Blame It On the Moon, and reveals some of his main character’s backstory from when he was the Chief of Police at a small liberal arts school, Churchville University. Typically a quiet member of the Churchville, Pennsylvania community, the university soon headlines the news when a well-liked university provost goes missing during a massive school restructuring, which includes sudden and extensive system-wide faculty layoffs. Rumors run rampant regarding the missing woman’s relationship with the university president and his wife, but there are few actual clues for Chief Don Weston to pursue. Calling on his connections at the county and state levels in order to leverage their more robust resources, Weston gathers a small team to investigate. However, the case barely gets off the ground when another faculty member goes missing during a fire at his home, and that won’t be the last.


While Don Weston is the university chief of police and the most experienced on the case, the investigations are truly an ensemble performance. Weston earned his law enforcement chops over the years he spent working his way up through the ranks at the Philadelphia Police Department. He is joined by Detective Rick Walker from York County and Lt. Shane Mitchell representing the state, both of whom bring a hint of hero worship to the table, having heard Don’s praises sung by their respective supervisors before their assignments.


The three conduct a steady and comprehensive investigation, the story unfolding in the style of a police procedural. Told mostly from Weston’s point of view, the reader gets a good idea of how he came to his position at Churchville and a feel for his prior successes in Philadelphia. Until the incidents of the story, he was experiencing a growing discontent with the unending sameness of his current job. He misses his wife, Helen, lost to cancer some years earlier, but uses her memory as a sounding board for his decision-making. All of this prepares the reader for Don’s eventual move to a new home and career at the opening of Blame It On the Moon.


The plot is well-paced, and the action is tight. However, the names of the characters changed at times over the course of the story and need to be reviewed. The murders are vividly described and graphically detailed, their means and methods horrifically matched to the killer’s opinion of his victim’s guilt and misdeeds. The acts are shocking and hard to read. The killer’s actions are measured and meticulous in their execution and performed with the perpetrator’s knowledge that he will never have to answer for what he has done, adding to the difficulty of the three investigators’ job.


I recommend FINAL EXAM to readers of grittier mysteries and suspense and fans of the previous novel who want to know more about the main character’s backstory.

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Synopsis

Don Weston left a long career of big-city policing in Philadelphia behind for a semi-retirement position as the Police Chief at Churchville University, a small liberal arts college. The new job is a pleasant slowdown from the urban career, allowing Don to pursue his other interests as an amateur Civil War historian and law enforcement consultant.
Like all other small liberal arts schools, Churchville faces the difficult survival struggles of declining enrollment, underendowment, and academic resistance to hard changes. The idyllic environment is increasingly threatened with uncertainty and the small community has become a hotbed of politics and administrative drama. Don is considering hanging up this career as well when the College Provost goes missing on a Monday and a preliminary investigation raises a number of questions for Don.
By the following weekend, another faculty member has committed suicide, and the body of the College President is discovered, gruesomely murdered, in the school auditorium. It falls on Don to pool the contacts and resources of his time in Philadelphia in solving a multi-faceted puzzle of clues and questionable relationships.
'Final Exam' is a prequel to my self-published 'Blame it on the Moon,' featuring several of the same characters.

Under Cover of Darkness

Under Cover of Darkness

On a moonless night, a figure in dark clothing walked down a quiet street and disappeared as it blended into a thick hedge along one of the houses. This was the home of Dr. Isabel Helms, Churchville University provost, a rental cottage in an old neighborhood of large lots that were parceled out almost a century ago from Mennonite farms. It was just a mile from the Churchville University campus, a short drive or brisk walk for Isabel, depending on the weather and her mood.

The surrounding homes were also simple. Generations of Mennonite kin were well-settled in that area. They were great neighbors, always friendly and ready to help with homeowner chores. They’d also accept help gladly and graciously with their own larger tasks. It was the community way. Aside from that, they were unseen, early to bed and early to rise, and deeply private in their devotions. It fit Isabel’s private nature, and she loved it there.

Isabel’s house was empty that weekend, not an unusual state. The shadowy visitor entered the back kitchen door undetected. There were no Ring doorbells or security cameras to record an intruder’s appearance, or disappearance. The back door was unlocked, not surprising for life in the small town.

Inside, the trespasser walked silently through the rooms. The kitchen led to the great room, divided by furniture into a living room, a library nook, and an office space. Wary of even using a flashlight, the unfamiliar house was a trip-and-fall hazard everywhere. “Damn it. almost took me down there” the trespasser spoke to the unseen ottoman.

Adjusting to the darkness, off the great room, two open doors revealed an antique bath, complete with a clawfoot tub, and a bedroom of reasonable size, tastefully decorated in a more modern theme of comfort. “Cozy.”

The stranger sifted through the closet and drawers of the bedroom, finding only the usual and expected professional wear and underthings. There was a vibrator in the nightstand, but that was hardly an alarming discovery in the personal items of a single lady. The shadow then investigated the desktop computer and an iPad that was on a charger in the reading space of the great room. The desktop had a Microsoft platform with a docking station for her business laptop, connected to the university system as a virtual, off-campus university workspace. After a quick look, it was determined to be all business. No need to dwell on that piece of equipment, especially since it gave off a glow that might be noticed if someone passed by the house.

The iPad was her personal device. Sitting on the floor in a dark corner, the iPad surrendered her financial files and passwords. Isabel’s finances were quite healthy in savings and investment.

“Smart girl,” said the intruder to the empty room. “If you were as savvy in your computer skills as you are in your investments, someone would have had to work much harder to know that.”

The easiest access was her recent search history. She was not a dark web cruiser. The figure looked through the browsing history: “Boring, boring, boring. . . Oh wait, what do we have here?” Isabel’s visits to conventional websites were expected. This one was not. Xnorml.com was an unsecured, relatively porous site where users of various sexual lifestyle interests could meet.

“And a dirty, dirty girl,” muttered the hacker after a quick review.

A knowledgeable user would have known to enlist a VPN and take additional personal security steps before engaging there. Isabel had simply found the site through her iPad search. She was so professional and buttoned up in her public life but, unfortunately, not well-schooled in internet security.

Isabel’s activity on Xnorml left her IP address exposed, inviting any interested source of ill will to stalk her further online, eventually piecing together her real identity and residence. Her messaging box indicated an affinity for anonymous encounters of a nature that might be less than respectful for a university provost. “Very pleased to meet you in cyberspace, Ms. Unicorn, and your many pen pals ‘bondingwithbondgae’, ‘submittedcommitted’. and the like.”

With this hands-on access to her actual device, a vessel of evil now had all the information needed to search further from their own computer, even cruising with Isabel’s identity if chosen. The trespasser hadn’t known what to look for when entering Isabel’s cottage, but plenty was now found. There was no need to bother looking in the detached garage. “Thanks for your memories, we’ll be talking soon,” said Isabel’s stalker upon exiting. Everything inside and out was left as found, with no sign that a visitor had visited.

Less than twenty minutes from passing the hedgerow, the dark-clad figure was gone.


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I am twice-retired, once from senior international corporate management and secondly as a college professor. I have previously published academic work and poetry and established an active social media presence including loupuglieseauthor.com, a Facebook author page, Instagram, TikTok, LinkedIn, etc. view profile

Published on March 11, 2025

60000 words

Contains mild explicit content ⚠️

Genre:Mystery & Crime

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