DETERIORATE, Michelle Marie Jacquot’s second collection, is a sharp and cutting return. Jacquot single-handedly dismantles the systems of validation and fame borne from the technological and digital age, systems which too many of us rely on to feel alive. Structured with purpose and with the overarching message to free ourselves from the restraints of being online, DETERIORATE is a timely reflection on what we have become.
From beginning to end, Jacquot marries cynicism, brutal honesty and poetry. There is a freshness to how she has chosen to both present and explore her grief when it comes to what the collective future holds. As shown in Sparknotes, Jacquot has taken our tools for destruction to create an e-book which criticises how the internet and our devices have become a crutch.
“I guess we change the words now
to hundred-year-old songs
without letting anyone in the copyright office know
and even the writers sing along
Has anyone else noticed what’s been going on?” [Sing Along]
The poignant lyricism throughout is stunning and transformative. Jacquot reminds the reader how much power lies in our voices. She reawakens the weapons we already possess. The loud protests we have allowed to sit dormant in the dark.
But, the criticisms are not from a place of condescension as Jacquot reflects on her own complicity too. Poems like Spears and Personal Best demonstrate how far we are all wading in the swamp engineered by consumerism and capitalism. And the final pieces speak of survival; they speak of how we are in a fight which we must survive before we can live.
“Even if we end up sinking
All my screaming for nothing
I want to say at the very least
I tried my hardest not to drown” [Personal Best]