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Aurelia And The Enemies Of Pity

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Not for me 😔

A fantasy fiction novel that doesn't quite hit the mark but has the potential for a good series.

Aurelia is an Akkadian which means she has powers that help her to reshape the very environment around her at will. She is thrown into a war that rages all around her and must learn to control her power without destroying everything around her. She is aided by her friend Nadia and several mentors.


While the book has potential and the plot could lead to some interesting places, the technical issues in the writing make it difficult to follow. The reader's head spins a bit from the amount of head hopping and abrupt changes in past or present tense, sometimes right in the middle of a paragraph.


The world built here is intriguing and the mix of magic with some more modern weaponry can be exciting. However, the plot was difficult to follow and understand and it would have been nice if some more background had been given to both the characters and what was causing the war. It was not always clear who was fighting whom or why they were fighting in the first place.


While the book overall was not for me, I did think Aurelia was a memorable character and she has the potential to have an interesting series. It would be nice to see a bit more background and context in the next books and to have a little less confusion about what is happening and who we are supposed to be focusing on in each scene.

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Published on June 03, 2021

60000 words

Contains graphic explicit content ⚠️

Genre: Fantasy

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