Biographies & Memoirs

A Girl Who Didn't Fit In: Crushed By Gaslighting But Not Defeated


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An only child of parents with deprived backgrounds, Marion's early years were lived in a frugal world, with a grandmother who was addicted to prescribed morphine. The girl who emerged from that bleak world was far from frugal. She travelled, suffered the loss of her father, retreated into Christian Fundamentalism, managed an investment portfolio, married, had a family, and earned a post-graduate degree in the field of her dreams. But how did it all happen?"A Girl Who Didn't Fit In" answers that question. Marion Clark's roller-coaster life inspires readers to engage with their own challenges, reflect on themselves, and achieve more tomorrow.
What Marion writes is distinctive - as well as using her life experience to reflect upon her story, as is the case with memoirs generally, she also draws upon her knowledge of psychological literature as well as 20 years experience practising her profession as a Psychotherapist.


We can understand one another, but each one is able

to explain only himself . . . Hermann Hesse

Fitting in provides a sense of comfort and belonging and happens, if it happens, in the bosom of a family. If all goes well, fitting in can be taken for granted, and a life lived on that assumption. The child is blessed.

Misfitting permeates every minute of every day, every social encounter and every group experience. The more compliant are inclined to imitate others in social situations and sacrifice authenticity for approval and acceptance. I am not one of those.

I was born to a mother who was clear in her mind about fitting, her baby had to fit in with her. ‘You were a good baby right from the start – no trouble. You didn’t cry. I didn’t hear you cry until you were nine months old. Right from birth, you would lay awake quietly during the daylight hours between feeds waiting until I could fit you into my schedule of caring for my invalid mother. You were no trouble, no trouble at all.[1]

The dubious nature of my mother’s account of my adaptability during my early months invites debate. Still, it provides information about the parameters of my acceptance within my family of origin. I was required to fit into her agenda. When I didn’t, I was a trouble. She was also clear about control, ‘When you began to walk at 12 months old, you became trouble, big trouble. You were always trying to run away. You were a fidget, could never sit still – a naughty girl, an imp’. That label stuck and I integrated it into my identity. 

My mother also knew of my potential to rebel. It was apparent to her when she was preparing to take me home for the first time from the hospital. ‘I dressed you and put a bonnet on your head, and you started to squirm and protest. No matter how hard I tried to get you to wear it, you wouldn’t. You were rebellious even then’. I was just 12 days old!

The golden rule was fixed: Marion had to be good and no trouble. Any deviation from that had consequences. The problem for me was that I had no feedback that indicated when I had kept the rule. I only received feedback when I didn’t fit, then I was labelled naughty. The silence was deafening. It cut me to the quick. I had to construct theories about what was wanted of me, and I could never get those quite right. So, it was trial and error.

No matter what I did, I couldn’t shake off the naughty label, the put-downs and jibes I received from my mother, Nanna and Aunt when I fell short of their goal. They shamed me. The effect of their ministrations was that I needed to try harder, and harder, forever, to be good, and therefore fit.

Despite achieving a degree of maturity and achieving worthy goals throughout my life, in my mind, I have never felt good enough. Always an imposter and inferior! Even so, I feel blessed over my 80 years to have had experiences that have exposed me to a myriad of settings and hundreds of people, many of whom I have known intimately. Few of these liaisons have been superficial: I tend towards having strong emotional ties with many people I meet.

I come from humble origins: my mother was a machinist in a shoe factory, and my father worked carting bags of wheat on his shoulders in a hay and corn store. I have been a student at tertiary and postgraduate levels gaining a distinction degree, a minor celebrity, a secretary, a wife, a parson’s wife, a mother, a psychotherapist, counsellor and investment manager. I have a lot to say.

A memoir may be written from the viewpoint of a victim or a survivor. The protagonist, her parents and their station in life can be idealized or, on the contrary, negatives played up to gain sympathy from the reader. Despite having parents who had many blank spots about child-rearing, particularly the inability to see the world from a child’s perspective, both were wise, and both had integrity. They gave me a secure base to live a productive life. I am fortunate and blessed indeed.

With hindsight as a tool, together with my knowledge of psychological theory and life experience, I have revisited my life with a measure of insight, writing without embellishment or pretence. I could not write it any other way.

Writing a memoir has an element of risk because inevitably, many of the day-to-day boundaries an author uses to minimize anxiety are removed, giving a broader view of her life and insights into many of its facets. I have done this to the extent that I can be comfortable with what I reveal, and if successful in this endeavour, people who read it will be surprised to learn more than they already knew about me. I have taken care to abstain from disclosing secrets or material that would distress those close to me. If I have overstepped a boundary, I ask forgiveness.

Included is an occasional commentary about emotional, environmental and psychological factors that I believe have shaped my development. Of course, these are subjective, but I hope, with the benefit of distance and time, I can shed some light into factors that formed my personality and character, and shaped my choices in later life. To achieve this, I use theorists in the psychoanalytic and existential traditions as well as my personal life experience. I have also learned much from the hundreds of patients I have seen during the 20 years I spent in private practice as a psychotherapist, family therapist and a grief and marriage counsellor. These sections may be passed over without interfering with the flow of the narrative.

. . .


The setting sun is low on the horizon. A gentle breeze is blowing, and daylight is fading into the duskiness that precedes sunset. Waves lapping gently on the sandy shore mirror the pale pink and grey hues in the clouds above. The bay is wide and deserted, and the atmosphere peaceful - almost ethereal. 

It is the year 1949. I am ten years old walking hand in hand with my father along the shore of Spirit’s Bay, in the most northern part of New Zealand.

‘This place’, said my father, is sacred to the Maori people because they believe that the spirits of those who have died gather here until they are ready to return to the land of their ancestors far across the sea.

‘When the spirits are ready’ he said, pointing to a place far away’ they move from this shore to an old Pohutukawa tree growing in the distance on a high bluff at the end of the bay where the Tasman Sea on the West and the Pacific Ocean at the East meet, Cape Reinga’.

After walking further in silence, he asked me to turn away from the setting sun and look back from whence we had come. He pointed to the imprints of our footsteps. They were the only footprints on the long expanse of small shells finely ground by the wind and sea. Stopping, he said, ‘See our footprints, yours and mine. I want you to remember them, and I want you to remember what I’m going to tell you now’.

Quoting from the American poet, Longfellow, he recited verses that I have carried in my mind ever since:

Lives of great men all remind us,

  We can make our lives sublime.

And departing, leave behind us

  Footprints on the sands of time.

Footprints, that perhaps another,

  Sailing o'er life's solemn main,

A forlorn and shipwrecked brother,

  Seeing shall take heart again.    

‘I hope when you are old, you will remember this moment and be able to say ‘I have lived well, I have been kind, honest and cared for other people. Then, when your soul has passed from this life to the next, much goodness will be left behind’.

At that moment, I belonged. I was sure that I belonged. I belonged with my Dad.

We walked on in silence.

The significance of that place and that moment has never escaped me. I didn’t fully understand Longfellow’s words then, but in time the meaning became clear.

Moments like this one punctuated my childhood, but they were rare. It was not always beautiful.




Chapter 1


As soon as we are born, our parents, extended family, siblings

and others, plus events, write on the nature of who we are.

These all define us. anon

 It is 1937, and a trio of women are seated on a well-used leather lounge suite in the sitting room of a Californian bungalow in East Oakleigh, an outer suburb of Melbourne. The place is dark, and heaviness is in the air. On the mantel of a dark brown, open wooden fireplace is a chiming clock flanked by two orange porcelain vases. On the left side is a framed motto:

Life is mostly froth and bubble.

Two things stand like stone,

Kindness in another’s trouble,

Courage in your own.  

A large rug covers brown floorboards in the centre of the room and heavy maroon curtains frame leadlight windows covered with ecru lace curtains. Two large prints on the walls depict Biblical scenes, and a framed plaque of The Last Supper is above the open fireplace. A black framed poem about death and the afterlife by Lord Tennyson hangs on the wall that is the closest to the kitchen door:

Twilight and evening bell, and after that, the dark!

And may there be no sadness of farewell,

  When I embark;

For tho' from out our bourne of Time and Place,

  The flood may bear me far,                                                                       

I hope to see my Pilot face to face

When I have crossed the bar.


My grandmother speaks, ‘You shouldn’t have tried to have a baby in the first place, Gerte’.

I agree’ says Elsie, her youngest daughter ‘You don’t know how to be a mother; you are just not capable. You should be ashamed of yourself for wanting a child. It’s for the best that you lost this baby and the first one as well’.

Gerte is tearful, ‘The lady at the hospital wasn’t kind to me’, she says, ‘I shouldn’t have told them that I own my home. When she found that out, she told me that I had no business being there because that hospital is for poor people, not me. She knew that I was four months pregnant and losing a lot of blood, so I asked her what I should do. She told me to go back home. I couldn’t understand why she was refusing to help me because when I lost the first baby, they admitted me to that hospital and gave me a curette. That’s why I went back there’.

‘I think it’s all for the best’ says her mother.

Elsie agreed nodding, and says, ‘You will just have to get over it and get on with your life, after all, you will soon be 40, and that’s far too old for a woman to have a child’.

‘You have both had children,’ Gerte said accusingly, her mouth pursed and eyes steadily directed towards Elsie’s face, ‘Ron is 14 years old now. You’ve done all right bringing him up, and I could do the same’.

Elsie scoffs, ‘I know how to be a mother. I knew how to be a mother when I was 18, all you cared about when you were that age was about doing your crochet and fancy work to get money to top up your wages from the shoe factory so you could build this house, and what’s more, buy a car. What kind of example would all that be to a child? Have pity on it’.

My mother leaves the room, and noises from the kitchen suggest that she is preparing afternoon tea.


In many respects, my mother belonged to the Feminism era of the 1970s when women were burning their bras and asserting their rights as human beings to have the same rights as men. She was not interested in fashion or status, cut her own hair, made her clothes and didn’t wear a bra. She didn’t bake cakes, preserve fruit or make jam. She mended clothes, darned socks and painted walls. It was not unusual for her to re-tile chipped hearths, replace benchtops and repair a leaking roof. I watched her do the latter when she was 88 years old, holding my breath lest she falls.

My Nanna and Aunt Elsie were of the housewife kind, keeping the home fires burning and good food on the table. They both did it well with a great deal of well-deserved pride, and each believed that her way of doing things was the right way. 

My Aunt, married to Walter, knew that her job was to look after her husband, the breadwinner. She knew her place: her washing was white; her cupboards were tidy and her house clean. She was in charge of the poultry pens and the vegetable garden.

Elsie and husband Walter lived in Emerald, a village in the Dandenong Ranges close to Melbourne. She had her routines: there was washing day, then housework day, sewing afternoons, baking days and gardening. He gave her the wages he received from his job as a slaughter-man for a local butcher every Thursday night. She counted the money and placed set amounts in labelled tins on the mantlepiece above the stove—one each for rent, groceries, electricity, wood and insurance. She then returned a small sum to him, his tobacco allowance. Elsie supplemented his income by selling eggs and dressed poultry to townsfolk and taking in house guests for short holidays during summer months.

 Elsie liked to be out and about and considered herself to be stylish. She wore make-up, had her hair permed, smoked and drank alcohol. She was a relatively care-free woman and enjoyed life and gossiping at the local shops. Her weekends were for tennis and relaxation. She played the organ each Sunday morning at the local Anglican church and visits with friends were a priority.

Often tea was taken on Sunday afternoons at the homes of various women with bone china cups and homemade food provided by each guest laid out on a handmade lace cloth. Whether the occasion was at my Aunt’s home or one of her friends, there was always her pièce de résistance, a cream sponge which she placed with a measure of aplomb in the centre of the table. The glories and shortcomings of her offering was always discussed; this one was a little dry the oven must have been too hot; or, the eggs were too fresh this time. Nevertheless, the verdict was always the same: It was the best-baked cream sponge that the town had ever produced.

The conversation was always lively, and I can only imagine the gossip and Elsie being the star of the show. She was a gifted storyteller and could hold an audience for hours.

My Aunt speaks, ‘I always knew that Jean’s baby had something wrong with it; her pregnancy didn’t look right. I wasn’t surprised when I heard that it was stillborn’.

‘I heard that you were the one who found Mrs Miller dead on the floor last week’, said one of the ladies inviting a story.

 ‘Yes, that was me, and a shock it was too. I had baked biscuits and thought she would like a few, she doesn’t do much baking, you know. She didn’t answer the door, so I gave it a hard push, and it opened. When I got into the kitchen there she was, laying on the floor. I was very shaken up I was’.

‘Oh Elsie, that was terrible, what did you do?’

‘I could see straight away that she was dead so I ran over to the phone at the post office and rang Dr Jorgensen in Belgrave, I knew that he would know what to do. He told me to leave the matter to him, and I went home’. ‘Poor May Miller’ said Elsie tearing up ‘She was a nice old soul, and to think that her laggard daughter turned her back on her. Disgusting! I liked May a lot, she was a good woman’.

Perhaps my Aunt’s spiciest stories concerned Rev. Charles Clark, the Anglican clergyman, whom my Aunt referred to as Old man Clark. ‘He had it on with the women you know. I feel sorry for his wife; she is a proper lady, very refined. He leaves her to bring up the children while he is out and about promoting himself. All parson’s do the same thing. I could tell you a few stories about him that would make your hair curl, believe me!’

 My mother represented a clash of cultures that was beyond the understanding of her mother and sister. I have no doubt that they loved her, but she was an enigma that they couldn’t explain, and they both resented that one of their own didn’t fit in. She was a loner, bookish and considered ‘old-fashioned’ in her choice of clothes. She was not interested in hosting a lady’s afternoon with homemade cakes, and she didn’t gossip. They were correct about one thing though, my mother was not an earth-mother soft, comforting and tender as shall be revealed.

 To know my mother, one needs to understand her sense of shame and humiliation about the turbulence of her parent’s relationship and the straitened circumstances of the family after her father left it. 

Her mother, Helen Laura Foley, the 5th child of Thomas Foley and Elizabeth Stamp, was born on Christmas Day in 1868 at Donnelly’s Creek on the Walhalla Goldfields in Gippsland, Victoria. Thomas was the son of a convict, Ann Foley who was convicted at the Old Bailey in 1843 for stealing eleven pounds of pork from a shop in East London owned by a Mr Harrod, and sentenced to seven years detention in Van Diemen’s Land. She arrived with Thomas, then aged three years, on the women’s convict ship, Woodbridge, in Hobart on Christmas Day of that year. She was sent to the Female Factory and Thomas to the orphanage.

About the author

I am a retired Psychotherapist and Counsellor living in Melbourne, Australia. I had a Private Practice for twenty years seeing long-term Psychotherapy patients, families and individuals. I have a Distinction Social Work Degree and did Post Graduate at Monash Psychological Medicine. view profile

Published on October 13, 2020

70000 words

Genre: Biographies & Memoirs

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