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Carly Bornstein

Carly Bornstein - Editor

Boston, MA, United States

I am the biggest book nerd; this led to my passion for editing. I'll be your best-book-friend.

Overview

"I met Carly the same day I saw Mad Max Fury Road, so she'll forever be linked in my mind to Furiosa--someone you absolutely want on your side! With Carly's guidance, I turned my pretty okay novel into something so much more, something alive. I always felt she loved my characters as much as I did--she simply got what I was trying to do, and helped me do it. I have no doubt that my book (and hopefully many to come) are vastly improved by her involvement."

-Kim Alexander, International Bestselling Author of The Demon Door Series

"I've been lucky to work with several editors who've improved my books and made me a better writer. I appreciate Carly's style. The feedback is concise and easy to understand. Her willingness to discuss not just this first book but where I'm going in the series is a great help, the kind of support I need as I try something new."

-Cheryl Harper, USA Today Bestselling Author of Can't Help Falling in Love and Least Likely to Fall in Love

"Carly's incisive mind, solid understanding of storytelling, and experience in the traditional publishing industry set her apart from the freelance editing crowd. When I send her my best work I'm confident that her edits will make it even better."

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CARLY BORNSTEIN-HAYWARD is a developmental editor specializing in genre-fiction, including but not limited to romance, mystery, sci-fi, fantasy, erotica, and YA. Carly will help you find your voice and bring your vision to the reader. She will be your book’s best friend.

She has worked in the publishing industry for 9 years, including at a major publishing house, a literary agency, and an indie publishing house that helps self-publishing authors. Carly graduated Magna Cum Laude with a B.A. in English. She is a member of the Editorial Freelancers Association and Chicago Women in Publishing. She was a panelist at Book Expo America 2016 and is an editor for Pitch to Publication, Revise & Resub, and ShoreIndie.

Services
Languages
English (AUS) English (CAN) English (UK) English (US)
Fiction
Fantasy Historical Fiction LGBTQ Romance Science Fiction Young Adult & Teen

Certifications

  • EFA (2015-Present)
  • B.A. in English (Magna Cum Laude)
  • Member of CWIP (2017-Present)
  • Revise & Resub Co-founder and Editor (2017-Present)
  • ShoreIndie Editor (2017-Present
  • Pitch to Publication Editor (2015 - 2016)

Work experience

Developmental Editor

Self-employed
May, 2014 – Present (over 3 years)

I offer editing services for those preparing to publish their book. If you have taken your book as far as you possibly can, I will be your "second pair of eyes."

My services include writing coaching, manuscript assessments/critiques, line-editing, and developmental editing.

I love diving into your story to help you find your voice and bring out the best version of your book. Every time we work together your writing will improve, some say it is like taking a personal writing course. Reading has always been my passion, and helping authors bring wonderful books to other readers is my contribution to the literary world.

Preferred genres:

Adult Romance (historical, suspence, contemporary, paranormal, erotica)
Adult Sci-fi
Adult Fantasy
YA (Sci-fi, fantasy, contemporary)
MG (Sci-fi, fantasy)

I do not currently accept Horror or Non-fiction.

Assistant

HarperCollins Publishers
October, 2012 – August, 2014 (almost 2 years)

I supported the editors of the Avon/William Morrow Imprint

Intern

Sterling Lord Literistic
November, 2011 – May, 2012 (6 months)

Assisted Literary Agents where needed, including but not limited to: reviewing the slush pile, recommending manuscripts to the agents, crafting materials for publishers.

Portfolio (12 selected works)

Least Likely to Fall in Love

Cheryl Harper

Running the place. Like a boss.Lindy Mason is happy to be back at Lincoln High School. As principal, she’s faced with the tough decision on how to handle a bullying case involving Maddie Myers, daughter of the boy who made her high school days a misery. Getting better all the time.Ryan Myers is panicked when he rushes into the principal’s office to rescue his daughter and shocked to see Lindy ... read more

Running the place. Like a boss.Lindy Mason is happy to be back at Lincoln High School. As principal, she’s faced with the tough decision on how to handle a bullying case involving Maddie Myers, daughter of the boy who made her high school days a misery. Getting better all the time.Ryan Myers is panicked when he rushes into the principal’s office to rescue his daughter and shocked to see Lindy ... read more

Quick Cash for Teens: Be Your Own Boss and Make Big Bucks

Peter Bielagus

As tales of YouTube and MySpace fortunes float virally throughout the blogosphere and media, kids wonder: "Could I do that?" Financial expert Peter Bielagus emphatically answers "Yes!" Quick Cash for Teens provides smart strategies for earning big bucks, with step-by-step instructions for identifying opportunities, creating a business plan, and implementing it successfully. Bielagus includes i... read more

As tales of YouTube and MySpace fortunes float virally throughout the blogosphere and media, kids wonder: "Could I do that?" Financial expert Peter Bielagus emphatically answers "Yes!" Quick Cash for Teens provides smart strategies for earning big bucks, with step-by-step instructions for identifying opportunities, creating a business plan, and implementing it successfully. Bielagus includes i... read more

Least Likely to Marry a Millionaire (Likely Characters)

Cheryl Harper

Whether it's the equipment contract for the biggest college football program in the state of Texas or the championship coach who got away, Nina Montrose refuses to be defeated. Being a winner comes with perks, but Coach Jack Ford wants something more than a fat paycheck, fancy parties, and big house. He's moved to small-town Lincoln to do what he loves: teach kids. He's seen firsthand how spor... read more

Whether it's the equipment contract for the biggest college football program in the state of Texas or the championship coach who got away, Nina Montrose refuses to be defeated. Being a winner comes with perks, but Coach Jack Ford wants something more than a fat paycheck, fancy parties, and big house. He's moved to small-town Lincoln to do what he loves: teach kids. He's seen firsthand how spor... read more

The Bride Tournament (Wars of the Roses Brides Book 3)

Ruth Kaufman

Who will win his hand in marriage...and his love?Lady Eleanor de la Tour’s life turns upside down on her wedding day. She's ordered to wed the new earl, to whom the king has given her betrothed's title and lands. Though Richard Courtenay is handsome and intriguing, she wants the man she loves and chose. And Richard pursues alchemy, anathema to her because the obsession to turn base metals into... read more

Who will win his hand in marriage...and his love?Lady Eleanor de la Tour’s life turns upside down on her wedding day. She's ordered to wed the new earl, to whom the king has given her betrothed's title and lands. Though Richard Courtenay is handsome and intriguing, she wants the man she loves and chose. And Richard pursues alchemy, anathema to her because the obsession to turn base metals into... read more

The Heron Prince (The Demon Door Book 2)

Kim Alexander

The Demon Door can be opened...but the price is deadly. Rhuun, the half-human heir to the demon throne of Eriis, has found acceptance among the humans on Mistra. He even found love with the tempting and infuriating human, Lelet va’Everly. With Lelet at his side, his ability to create fire has finally awakened, proving that he is not the cursed cripple all of Eriis believed him to be. There are... read more

The Demon Door can be opened...but the price is deadly. Rhuun, the half-human heir to the demon throne of Eriis, has found acceptance among the humans on Mistra. He even found love with the tempting and infuriating human, Lelet va’Everly. With Lelet at his side, his ability to create fire has finally awakened, proving that he is not the cursed cripple all of Eriis believed him to be. There are... read more

The Sand Prince: An Epic Fantasy Novel (The Demon Door Book 1)

Kim Alexander

International bestselling author, Kim Alexander presents book one of the epic fantasy saga that brings action and adventure to a new level.Two worlds, bound by magic, divided by a door.On the war-ravaged demon world of Eriis, Hellne, the fierce young queen, fights to keep her people alive...On the green and gentle human world of Mistra, the demons have faded into myth. Only a handful of old me... read more

International bestselling author, Kim Alexander presents book one of the epic fantasy saga that brings action and adventure to a new level.Two worlds, bound by magic, divided by a door.On the war-ravaged demon world of Eriis, Hellne, the fierce young queen, fights to keep her people alive...On the green and gentle human world of Mistra, the demons have faded into myth. Only a handful of old me... read more

The Claiming of the Duke: by Malloy dos Capeheart (The Demon Door)

Kim Alexander

...the huge dark bulk of Gardenhour rose at his back…at once a blessing of family and security, and a curse of loneliness and lies… A dangerous man with a dark and tragic past An innocent girl with dreams of a bright future Can Gwenyth’s love drive away the shadows enveloping Max’s heart, or will she pay with her life for daring to claim him as her own? Readers of The Sand Prince will recogniz... read more

...the huge dark bulk of Gardenhour rose at his back…at once a blessing of family and security, and a curse of loneliness and lies… A dangerous man with a dark and tragic past An innocent girl with dreams of a bright future Can Gwenyth’s love drive away the shadows enveloping Max’s heart, or will she pay with her life for daring to claim him as her own? Readers of The Sand Prince will recogniz... read more

Alannah, Lorcan and The Wolf

James Fallon

A past she can't remember. An adventure she'll never forget.After losing her mother, Alannah’s world changes, and she struggles to fit in with her classmates at school. Just days before her twelfth birthday, Alannah’s dad brings home a lamb called Lorcan, whose mother had fallen victim to an escaped wolf. Alannah and Lorcan become inseparable.But the wolf still roams the fields and forests of ... read more

A past she can't remember. An adventure she'll never forget.After losing her mother, Alannah’s world changes, and she struggles to fit in with her classmates at school. Just days before her twelfth birthday, Alannah’s dad brings home a lamb called Lorcan, whose mother had fallen victim to an escaped wolf. Alannah and Lorcan become inseparable.But the wolf still roams the fields and forests of ... read more

Dark Rooms

Sionna Fox

NO SAFE WORDSWomen beg Wes Oliver to dominate them in darkness. In the light, he’s finally getting his life back on track. College is priority number one—until he finds his new professor is the delicious Sub who ran out on him last weekend, a brilliant and mature beauty nothing like the girls who usually kneel before him. Suddenly, this is no longer just about pleasure. This is about his heart... read more

NO SAFE WORDSWomen beg Wes Oliver to dominate them in darkness. In the light, he’s finally getting his life back on track. College is priority number one—until he finds his new professor is the delicious Sub who ran out on him last weekend, a brilliant and mature beauty nothing like the girls who usually kneel before him. Suddenly, this is no longer just about pleasure. This is about his heart... read more

Pure

kim alexander

‘A unicorn walks into a bar….’ That is not a joke. Look, I’m a bartender, I have nothing to do with the xenos. I don’t care if it’s an elf or a vampire--as long as they don’t bother me, I steer clear. I have my reasons--you can see them in the scars on my neck. I never wanted to get involved. But my life changed for the second time when I saved the life of a unicorn. I made an enemy of somethi... read more

‘A unicorn walks into a bar….’ That is not a joke. Look, I’m a bartender, I have nothing to do with the xenos. I don’t care if it’s an elf or a vampire--as long as they don’t bother me, I steer clear. I have my reasons--you can see them in the scars on my neck. I never wanted to get involved. But my life changed for the second time when I saved the life of a unicorn. I made an enemy of somethi... read more

Beyond Today

L. Simpson

THE PRICE OF FORGIVENESSWhen Hannah meets Howard, the elusive best man in her friend's wedding, Hannah is instantly drawn to the damaged alpha because they share a connection that makes her heart race and her head spin. But his past, his family and how he slaked his sexual needs keep him prisoner, and challenges her faith in people. With time, Hannah sees the real him, but when he does the one... read more

THE PRICE OF FORGIVENESSWhen Hannah meets Howard, the elusive best man in her friend's wedding, Hannah is instantly drawn to the damaged alpha because they share a connection that makes her heart race and her head spin. But his past, his family and how he slaked his sexual needs keep him prisoner, and challenges her faith in people. With time, Hannah sees the real him, but when he does the one... read more

The Unseducible Earl (The Nightingales Book 1)

Sheri Humphreys

WOMEN SHOULD BE...The end of the Crimean War brings Victoria Thorne home to face a society that frowns on women with brains, education and experience, especially one who could be a physician. Though she proves herself a skilled nurse, Victoria finds she is no where near as revered as her namesake. And worse, she is falling for her patient’s betrothed brother, the Earl of Cheriton.CHERISHEDBuck... read more

WOMEN SHOULD BE...The end of the Crimean War brings Victoria Thorne home to face a society that frowns on women with brains, education and experience, especially one who could be a physician. Though she proves herself a skilled nurse, Victoria finds she is no where near as revered as her namesake. And worse, she is falling for her patient’s betrothed brother, the Earl of Cheriton.CHERISHEDBuck... read more

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